Making a Prison of One's Own Land

It's very well written, quite delicate. I also had some memories of my previous campus life. The emotional lines are handled well and the characters are well created. There's also some realism to it. Keep up the good work, come on

A novel first-person narrative, with a sense of immersion at the beginning. A lot of psychological descriptions can show that although the male protagonist grew up in a good environment, he has low self-esteem and lacks love, so that he is overly dependent on the good things of others. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the creation of the characters, but the sections are a bit too long, and one chapter is so short with only over a thousand words, so I finished it in a short time. There are also a lot of uses of ellipsis. Come on, come on, look forward to the follow-up development, the two of you can heal each other [code hold] The abuse comes and goes, damn it, I want to be sweet and treat the protagonist better!

It's very well written. If you like it, you can read it 👍

The writing style is fresh and delicate. I especially like the first-person writing!! Love to watch love to watch

The author's writing style is very good. Come on, come on, look forward to the follow-up plot 👍👍👍

The writing is brilliant, the characters are vivid and real, keep it up [sending my heart]

I've read a few chapters and it's well written, so I'll keep it for now.

There are actually two male protagonists!!! Sweet campus love!!! It really took me back to my school days and brought tears to my eyes. The love at that time was really super pure. The author's writing has a strong sense of empathy and the words are very powerful. My heart couldn't bear the impact! Must give a five-star rating!!!

🤔 This is the first time I read a novel of this type, and the descriptions are very detailed! As a common wandering science fiction novel, it does have a bright feeling. The rhythm and sentence control are perfect! It's worth watching, it's like rediscovering my lost youth!

The writing is very delicate, the emotional pull is well written, the plot is well developed, with ups and downs, it is a very interesting campus novel.