[If you don't dismantle the cp, you'll have a single female protagonist, you won't be invincible, and you'll ruin the original series]
Because of a coincidence, Yan Yang came to the world of love apartment. He planned to live another life and suddenly found that he had a system that could strengthen any non-living body. Therefore, there was such a troublemaker in this already chaotic world.
[The introduction is weak, please move to the main text, the writing is not enough, let's make up the plot]
Reader comments
Not very good, the subject matter is very novel. But it feels like a very powerful ability, but it's useless when used by the protagonist. That reincarnation does not abuse the protagonist. I've done a lot of them, some of them are gone, and they're of no use. The plot is baffling. The idea of reincarnation is inexplicable. The protagonists all know that there are reincarnators. There is still no way to deal with it? There was no sense of urgency at all. If you still think you can't beat it, then just leave it alone. The setting that attacks the protagonist will cause backlash sometimes works but sometimes doesn't work. It feels like the protagonist lets the reincarnator jump crazily in front of him. There is no one in the world that the protagonist cares about, right?
I want to ask the author that the psychiatrist Lu Ziqiao went to see at the beginning has helped Lu Ziqiao examine the deepest part of his heart. Why did he suddenly want to go back to the way he was before without any warning four months later in the article? He also said that these four months were not him, and he gave up all his career and returned to the previous state of starving for nine meals in three days.
Original text: Chapter 20: Inside the door, Dr. Ouyang watched Lu Ziqiao take her seat, and planted a psychological suggestion. This process will not cause the person to have any abnormal thoughts, but will express the deepest things in his heart, and then
"I used to be a bastard. I admit that I have broken the hearts of many girls. I also know that maybe I did something wrong. I should not have left her. If I had been braver, or if I had not made excuses for my incompetence,
Will the result be different? She and I are obviously very close now, but I always feel that I am getting further and further away from her. If I change my mind now, will there be a possibility of getting back together with her again..." Lu Ziqiao seemed to have completely opened her heart and told everything. In just a few minutes, she was already in tears.
"Dr. Ouyang, thank you. If it weren't for you, I really wouldn't know when I would wake up and go out. This time, no matter what Meijia does to me, I will understand her, love her, and be with her forever."
Chapter 29: "I don't know what illness I've had in the past few months. When I woke up this morning, I discovered that I was sleeping in the same bed as Meijia, and then I recalled everything I did during this period.
Yanyang, haven't you noticed that I've changed? It doesn't look like me anymore." Lu Ziqiao began his eloquent story.
If we really want to follow the plot, there is really no need to write the part where Zi Qiao changes his mind.
It's too messy, we don't want to watch Guan Gong vs. Godzilla, Lu Bu vs. Ultraman, or any other mess.
There is no main plot and no system release tasks. Now many writers are facing the problem of having no goals. Do you know why there is neither the main plot nor the system release tasks? Now many writers are facing the problem of being without goals. Do you know why Douluo Dalu and Dou Po Cang Qiong are so popular? Because they have goals.
What are you writing about? Can't understand at all
I read a few chapters and felt like I was reading nonsense literature. Nine out of ten sentences had little to do with the plot, so I thought 121211321 I didn't like it and wanted to give it one star, but I really didn't read much and I don't know what the rest of the writing was like.
It's too messy. Thirty-three reincarnations, plus eight protagonists, don't have the writing power, and it's a thankless job.
It's too messy. The author's writing skills obviously cannot support him in writing such a subject.
To be honest, it's a bit nonsense. If you don't have a plug-in, it's useless. After all, you have to fight with your life. If there is a plug-in that costs so much, it's really nonsense. It's still an enhanced type. You're not a human being, so why do you use it like this?
So far good!
Come on! ! Don't send it! !
Who is the heroine?
It's not that I really don't understand.
Why! ! ! I worked on it for a long time and it turned out to be a stallion story.
How should I put it? Generally speaking, it's fair, but I don't quite understand how you wrote two happy urban bureaus like this.
After reading it for a long time, why is it a harem story?
Where were the photos taken?
There is no sense of immersion. I can't stand it. Come on, author.
Not very good, the subject matter is very novel. But it feels like a very powerful ability, but it's useless when used by the protagonist. That reincarnation does not abuse the protagonist. I've done a lot of them, some of them are gone, and they're of no use. The plot is baffling. The idea of reincarnation is inexplicable. The protagonists all know that there are reincarnators. There is still no way to deal with it? There was no sense of urgency at all. If you still think you can't beat it, then just leave it alone. The setting that attacks the protagonist will cause backlash sometimes works but sometimes doesn't work. It feels like the protagonist lets the reincarnator jump crazily in front of him. There is no one in the world that the protagonist cares about, right?
I want to ask the author that the psychiatrist Lu Ziqiao went to see at the beginning has helped Lu Ziqiao examine the deepest part of his heart. Why did he suddenly want to go back to the way he was before without any warning four months later in the article? He also said that these four months were not him, and he gave up all his career and returned to the previous state of starving for nine meals in three days. Original text: Chapter 20: Inside the door, Dr. Ouyang watched Lu Ziqiao take her seat, and planted a psychological suggestion. This process will not cause the person to have any abnormal thoughts, but will express the deepest things in his heart, and then "I used to be a bastard. I admit that I have broken the hearts of many girls. I also know that maybe I did something wrong. I should not have left her. If I had been braver, or if I had not made excuses for my incompetence, Will the result be different? She and I are obviously very close now, but I always feel that I am getting further and further away from her. If I change my mind now, will there be a possibility of getting back together with her again..." Lu Ziqiao seemed to have completely opened her heart and told everything. In just a few minutes, she was already in tears. "Dr. Ouyang, thank you. If it weren't for you, I really wouldn't know when I would wake up and go out. This time, no matter what Meijia does to me, I will understand her, love her, and be with her forever." Chapter 29: "I don't know what illness I've had in the past few months. When I woke up this morning, I discovered that I was sleeping in the same bed as Meijia, and then I recalled everything I did during this period. Yanyang, haven't you noticed that I've changed? It doesn't look like me anymore." Lu Ziqiao began his eloquent story. If we really want to follow the plot, there is really no need to write the part where Zi Qiao changes his mind.
It's too messy, we don't want to watch Guan Gong vs. Godzilla, Lu Bu vs. Ultraman, or any other mess. There is no main plot and no system release tasks. Now many writers are facing the problem of having no goals. Do you know why there is neither the main plot nor the system release tasks? Now many writers are facing the problem of being without goals. Do you know why Douluo Dalu and Dou Po Cang Qiong are so popular? Because they have goals.
What are you writing about? Can't understand at all
I read a few chapters and felt like I was reading nonsense literature. Nine out of ten sentences had little to do with the plot, so I thought 121211321 I didn't like it and wanted to give it one star, but I really didn't read much and I don't know what the rest of the writing was like.
It's too messy. Thirty-three reincarnations, plus eight protagonists, don't have the writing power, and it's a thankless job.
It's too messy. The author's writing skills obviously cannot support him in writing such a subject.
To be honest, it's a bit nonsense. If you don't have a plug-in, it's useless. After all, you have to fight with your life. If there is a plug-in that costs so much, it's really nonsense. It's still an enhanced type. You're not a human being, so why do you use it like this?
So far good!
Come on! ! Don't send it! !
Who is the heroine?
It's not that I really don't understand.
Why! ! ! I worked on it for a long time and it turned out to be a stallion story.
How should I put it? Generally speaking, it's fair, but I don't quite understand how you wrote two happy urban bureaus like this.
After reading it for a long time, why is it a harem story?
Where were the photos taken?
There is no sense of immersion. I can't stand it. Come on, author.
It's quite strange, but not very appetizing.
Um, I can't understand it a little bit