Cultivation of Immortality, the Most Glorious System of Awakening Labor

It's good-looking, has a humorous style, and the characters' dialogues are relatively three-dimensional. It's a good novel for a newcomer.

What to say The plot is that you and a little girl in the village are attracted by the immortal, and then they farm and breed to practice 13th level of Qi. The little girl's awakened talent was taken away by the sect leader, so the protagonist continued to farm, breed, make spiritual food, sell spiritual food, and obtain spiritual medicine seeds. Save 1,000,000 points for supreme foundation building. In the subsequent foundation building period, you need to build 108 stars to break through the golden elixir stage. (The supreme foundation-building 15-star spiritual power has reached the early stage of the golden elixir, and the combat power is about the same) Although I have already broken through 16-star Foundation Establishment in just a few dozen chapters, I always feel like I am being suppressed. [What][What][What]

It feels pretty good, but the number of words is too small and I can't tell where the plot is going, so I'll just leave it and read it first.

The writing is okay. The subject matter of this book is okay. The author's writing style is modest and needs to be improved. Secondly, if the number of updates increases, it can also be read as an enjoyable article. At present, the number of words is too small and it will be gone after reading it for a while.

Although there are a lot of typos, the author will correct them after accepting suggestions and adding some additional character introductions, so I give a good review

Not bad... Positive

Very good, very good, very interesting

How long does it take for his master to wake up?

I would like to call the protagonist's sect the senior sect. Everyone in it calls themselves senior sect, and there is not a single junior brother (it's not such a polite way to be polite).

A little encouragement for myself who is trying to write a book for the first time. Thank you to all readers [adoration] [blowing kiss]