Death Note: Rebirth of a Fanatic

It's really beautiful. Both Meishang and Yue are very considerate, as if a god really gave Yue a second chance.

The setting is the rebirth of a charming person. This angle is really novel and interesting. With my IQ, I haven't noticed any bugs or OOCs. It's really awesome. Moreover, the language is also very sophisticated and simple. It does not use the Internet term "Chinese localization" that is used for fun like some other dn fanfics. I really like this [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Come on! It's not enough to watch! ! ! ! Urgent, urgent, urgent! ! ! ! I am the King of Urgency! ! ! ! I can't see enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Why didn't I encounter such a good book after it was finished [crying][crying][crying]

It's awesome. The paragraphs in the latest chapter, whether it's Mei Shangzhao suddenly calling Yue to give up the right to use the notes, or the God of Death suddenly saying that there is surveillance, it's so cool. Watching it, this fresh and exciting feeling reminded me of the scene when I watched Yue versus Naomi Misora.

Yue is a mortal who wants to steal forbidden fruits and become a god to save mankind. He is a failure and a glory. His only fault is that he failed and is not strong enough. He contains the limitations and shortcomings of the times, as well as the brilliance and greed of human nature. I personally think that the moon is the best animal to shape. Comic characters, good and evil, right and wrong, the contradictions and flashes of the times all appear in him. To me, he is like a treasure, a microcosm of the times. The more I observe him, the more I understand him, and at the same time, the more I understand the structure and operation of the world. Just like a small mobile phone contains the crystallization of countless human wisdom.

I downloaded this app for you. It's so beautiful. It definitely takes time to conceive such a high-intelligence work. I really put my heart into it and write it so well [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] So pretty.

The logic, characterization, and writing are definitely the most outstanding fanfic I have ever seen on Tomato. The very good plot makes my heart spin. 😌🙏 Card secrets will definitely become the card secrets of the new world

Teacher, as long as you are willing, you are the card secret of the new world. The plot of wits is completely non-ooc and very reasonable. Everyone's IQ is completely online (this is the real moon😭). The dialectics of "justice" are also very exciting. After reading it, I feel like I am a stranger [shy] but it is so logical. Teacher, I am willing to give myself to you [KISS] It's just not over yet ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ Teacher, are you still here TT

I'm in love! Recommended by lof. I didn't expect Tomato to have such a good book! ! Very rigorous. I look forward to the day when it will be completed.

There is no cp intellectual battle, the author's research is very rigorous, the IQs of Yue He L and the original characters are all online, the original characters are not obtrusive, the original characters are not OOC at all, and it is amazing when the foreshadowing is revealed. Many of Yue's speeches and psychological descriptions made me say: This is the Kami I have followed my whole life! ! ! I read a lot of tweets, and most of them are CP-oriented, and there are very few monthly victory endings. Please read and cherish this kind of good articles about non-CP wits. So where on earth can I find an article that is comparable to this? Heheheheahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

A super nice dead-end fanfic! The personality, behavior, and thinking patterns of each character are very well controlled, and they completely fit the original characters. They are super right and have all kinds of classic speaking tones and logic. A feast for sapiosexuals, the loyal dog believer Charming with online IQ, the more mature and restrained Kami, L who has a bad start but can always use every opportunity to fight back, plus the rigorous and smooth plot designed by the author, I really enjoyed it! The author is great, this is really a fairy tale, and fans of dead-pen writing will be rewarded after reading it!

It's really a very, very high-quality fanfic that can bring back the feeling of Kami back in the day... The structure is reasonable and complete, the context is very clear, and the plot is also very good. The IQs of all the members are online. It's completely because Kami and Meishang know how they will do things in the future. In short, it is very special! It was so exciting that I read more than 40 chapters without even realizing it. Oh my God... The author is so amazing. It feels like a waste of my brain to write such a good plot. Come on! When it's time to rest, rest more and don't tire yourself out. It's really unsatisfactory... Even after reading it for the second time, it makes people want to "watch it again". I really want to see the follow-up...!

You can feel the author's efforts and the best character design. This is the meaning of fan fiction! The author hurry up and marry me, or let you marry me. The author, Yagami Yue and I, the three of us, living well is more important than anything else💋👄😍😍😍

Kira Cult is a must-read, looking forward to the follow-up The ingredients are very complex, and the plots of comics, animations and movies are integrated into it. Currently, Dk Yue and Meishang have a good grasp of it, and I finally have the opportunity to take a handsome photo with my face😎😎

(There may be spoilers, please read with caution) A very nice fanfic! The battle of wits is very well written. Looking back at the past from the perspective of Mei Shangzhao's rebirth, you can't read it without thinking, you still need to use your brain. Another perspective on bedtime reading (not) is that it needs to be read more carefully. The writing style is very delicate. Whether it is the promotion of the storyline or the characterization of the characters, it does not feel stiff and is well written. It is highly recommended to watch it on the monthly recommendation. I personally feel that there is no OOC. Some of the psychological descriptions/plot promotion of the month make me feel like I have watched another episode. The charming photo/the monthly recommendation is ecstatic hhh [full] [full]. It's actually very difficult to write a fic with bad writing, and you'll get OOC if you're not careful. But based on my impressions of the 50 or so chapters I've read so far, this fic is really well written, and it's also free on Tomato. Everyone should read it and cherish it. I also hope that the author can continue writing! The writing is really good~ Because I haven't opened chapter comments, I may receive less feedback, but many people really like this book! I also hope that everyone will comment and post more book reviews ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧

The later independent plot is completely in line with the level of the original work. Use the information gap to carry out a stranglehold on Black Rose, so that the most popular person can be benevolent and die in the morning. It is the cause and effect of two timelines.

It's an unpopular concept. Although not many people will read it, and those so-called normal people can't get some points, I support it if you write it. I don't see any bad points. I really like this. Come on, come on. It's good that I didn't rewrite the original anime. The writing is also very detailed and well written.

I think it's pretty good and very restored. The characters are very realistic and the plot is well written. But why are there so many good books? Hateful. [Grievance] [grievance]

Full marks, the story line is smooth, Kami is handsome, Meiyue is delicious😋

This book can be said to be the top dn fan novel. It matches the character design of the original work, the exquisite details, and the plot development independent of the original work are the icing on the cake and fascinating. The plot is suspenseful and brain-burning, but it also makes sense. Taking Mei Shangzhu's rebirth as a guide and leading to all the subsequent plots, the Butterfly Effect not only incites one person's fate, but also affects the heart of the entire world. Although this novel has two protagonists, it is actually more like a group portrait. Everyone is moving towards their own goals for their own ideals and justice. A super heartwarming novel!

I came to read it from Lof Amway. The first chapter immediately made me feel the atmosphere brought by the original work and made me excited. This is the story I want to see about Yue on Mei Shangzhao! I'm currently busy chasing a book. It's my first time using Tomato Novels and I don't know how to contact the author's wife. I would like to ask if I can draw some comic scenes for the plot of this work, because it really has a strong sense of imagery. If the author's wife reads this comment, I hope she can reply to me [Sending Hearts]

I never know what to say to those wonderfully written and simply beautiful articles. But this article is really good, so I wanted to write something, so I analyzed it from the perspective that I am good at. The following is the highlight of this fanfic. When writing a fanfic, the first is the original character design, and the second is the original setting. I think this article is brilliant enough on both points. First of all, the character design. Whether it is L, Yue or the protagonist (but often absent) in this article, their charm is consistent. The two factions are evenly matched. You come and I write enough tit-for-tat. This is the correct way to open a dead pen. Next is the setting. I originally thought that how Yue, who has such a big cheat, can easily win the competition will make the story exciting, but the author is very bold and introduces new settings and new characters. The sudden appearance of a third faction or even multiple factions makes the balance that was originally completely tilted towards Yue slowly tilt towards l. This variable will attract people to read.

The writing style is excellent, the characters have no OOC, the chapters have strong control and character tension, and the foreshadowing is progressive. It's been 10 years since I started reading novels in the second grade and now in my third year of college. It's one of the few novels I've read that is both unfinished and shocking. Kami is writing Kami's story. It's God's turn. The author updates it frequently and the rating is around 9.6. It's not a problem.

Great writing! The characters are all very realistic, and the high-IQ plot is very tiring and difficult to write. It's amazing.

Full marks, absolutely full marks, the writing is really good, not OC at all. I rarely see this kind of fan fiction that is not OC at all. I feel like my brain is not enough for each person's psychological activities and descriptions, as well as the foreshadowing. There are also those wonderful debates. It is really that everyone is a perfect martyr on the road of justice in their own opinion. It is impossible to judge right or wrong, but it is really amazing. The character created by the author is really, really awesome. I can't express it in words. , How can it be written so well? It's so great, so great, so great. Highly recommended, highly recommended. This is truly a masterpiece!

Miracle, it's so powerful. I listened to it again after reading it. If the author doesn't update it, I will read it three times. There are still too few dead-written fanfics, especially those that are consistent with the original work and can create new plots without any sense of inconsistency. The writing is really great. I want to write a movie version of this book. Really, every transition is very smooth, and it is more obvious when listening to the book. It is very suitable for editing into a video or writing a review The feeling of the shadow is really full of twists and turns. Every time I thought Yue was about to win, there was a reversal, and I escaped suspicion several times. It made people feel like riding a roller coaster. It was exciting and even more exciting [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] I hope the author will finish it in one breath, otherwise I will write a "diary" [smirking] [smirking] [smirking]

It's so beautiful. Why haven't you updated it yet? It feels like it's completely original. Whether it's the interpretation of the characters or some of my own ideas, the descriptions are super good. There's nothing that people can't understand. You must continue to update it.

As a derivative work of dead writing, it can get full marks. It's difficult to write about a battle of wits, let alone a derivative work. But not only do the characters in the author's works have no OOC, but the interactions between the characters are natural, the plot is well advanced, and there is even a plot adapted from real events. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it. I've also read a lot of spin-offs, but this one is one of the best where the plot and characters are very consistent with the original work. If you are not satisfied with the original ending of Death Pen and are interested in Meishang, you can watch it at your own discretion. This derivative work is something I would recommend to fellow fans!

This is the fan fiction that most restores the characters of the original work that I have seen so far. The logic is clear and the plot is compact. Whether it is Mazda, L, Misa, Chief Yagami, Kami↓, or Mei Shangzhao, the psychological descriptions are in place, and there are also analysis, which makes it very engaging.

A very good work, as if the author had seen them with his own eyes and recorded them. It gives people the idea of ​​"Ah, this is how it should be" and "As expected of xxx". The original characters also have a very original feel. The disadvantage is that there are too few chapters and it feels unsatisfying. Good works need to be polished, so interruption is not a shortcoming.

It's really great. The butterfly effect is handled so well. It can be said that every word is not nonsense and not written in vain. The logic is so scary that many places are even more logical than the original work. It's a pity that it has been discontinued...