Retire*******

Hello, author, I don't mean anything else. In fact, I think it's because you said at the beginning that the protagonist has experienced many worlds and done many tasks, but I feel that you later wrote it as a child who has not been in the world. How can you say this? I think it might be better if you write more maturely. By the way, I don't mean anything, I just want to make a suggestion. (The above is my personal evaluation) But overall this book is still very good.

It was fine before it was changed. Why did it change?

It's good to read. I like all Xiaohua CP's articles. Come on, the author. Come on.

Didn't the author write very well in the beginning? Why did you have to change the copy later? Ah, I want to see the first version of the beginning.

The protagonist is so cute

It's pretty good, but I still like the parts before they were changed.

It's good-looking, but a little lacking. Come on, author!

Nice! ! ! As the saying goes: As the saying goes. As far as I know I know nothing. For every minute you breathe, 60 seconds pass. People who go to bed so late should still be awake. Eating noodles without eating garlic means not eating garlic. The smarter the person, the smarter the brain. Not seeing each other for seven days is like a week. If I'm not wrong, I'm not wrong.

I like it so much. The setting really touched my heart. Come on, the author. [Blow a kiss]

It looks good, I hope the author will work hard ＾0＾~

It's super cool, but how can you tell the difference between Part 1 and Part 2?

It's good-looking, I like it very much. The one before the revision was also good. I suggest you open another one and continue writing the one before the revision. It's a bit regretful that the previous one suddenly disappeared. I want to read the follow-up.

It looks great, come on [love][love]

Very beautiful, love it

Very nice, I suggest you take a look

Can it be faster? I feel really bad when you're like this. Well, it's okay for you, but the update is a bit slow. Can you write more excitingly when you return to Beijing? I beg you to die, please update the author. The later part is more exciting. And when you go back to Beijing, if you can, you can stay longer there, because if it is longer, um, it may look better. And then, in the later part, um, just try to have as many words as possible. The child is really hungry

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The protagonist is cute and the book is also very interesting😁

Very good (I can't speak)

Super beautiful, five-star recommendation

Come on, author (ง●°u°●)งThe child is hungry (●°u°●)

Big boost to the author 😊 Besides, I have already sung Sekirei for free. Why can't we arrange Cijiumen memories?

I lost it before, but I found it now! ! The author writes very well! ! !

Don't just look at the ratings, it's really nice, but a bit short, especially the details are really well described, the protagonist's character, and the background description are also very good. This is already my second time reading it. I forgot to add it to my bookshelf after reading it last time, and I just found it now. Highly recommended😍😍😍

It's very interesting. I recommend everyone to watch it.

Good-looking·good-looking-highly recommended [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Except for the slow update, there are no shortcomings [send heart][send heart][send heart][love][love][love][like][like][like][like]

A super nice book.

The book is very good, good luck to the author

Super super pretty! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

Still looks good without changing