Devil's Game: Skyfall Begins

The author's writing style exceeds most of the novels on my bookshelf. The plot is ups and downs. I like the character of the protagonist He Jingtai very much. More importantly, the novel storyline is what attracts me the most.

Ah? Why does such a wonderful book only get a score of 7 or more, at least 9.5? Don't understand. Is it because reading this book requires some brain capacity? The plot is not procrastinating, the setting is novel and interesting, and the pace is acceptable. Was it because someone maliciously tricked you into giving a low rating?

It is indeed well written and worth a long read. I look forward to the author continuing to write. The book quotes a lot of classics, uses a lot of memes and content from various animations, games, movies and TV shows, and the writing is profound enough to show that the author is also an experienced Internet street slut. The battles of wits and courage in the book, as well as the reversals in which the villain or the righteous come up with new abilities, are all eye-catching. It is indeed an excellent book. At present, I feel that the only problem that affects the score is that the cover is too sloppy. It will definitely be more attractive if it is customized [Chigua][Chigua]

The writing is very good. Except for some inconsistencies in some places, the plot is ups and downs, and the characters and settings are good. Finally, I want to contribute a skill [Dyeing] Introduction: Can change the color of itself and all objects it sees. I thought of a few ways to use it myself 1. Mimicry color concealment, simple and easy to recognize 2. Dye the opponent's pupils black and blind them, or use painting techniques to make the target's skin appear to be aging rapidly to scare people (making the target think that they can control their lifespan or even time) 3. Darken the target object, increase the absorption of light radiation, and even darken the sun. The whole world will only have temperature and no light. 4. Painting on the sky to spread news or fake miracles If there is a price, the author will look at it and pay it. This ability obviously has great development value and is a very strong auxiliary skill. Can the author give it some thought? [Blowing kiss]

It's a masterpiece, but there are too few people, not enough reviews to get five-star reviews, and the description of the characters' appearance is a bit vague. It's my first impression of the character. Not so clear. (Not enough imagination), I suggest the author greatly enhance the appearance of various characters. Clothes to wear. Write it more clearly. As the saying goes, details determine success or failure. With all the details in place, this book is sure to be a hit.

In this novel, the super powers are quite outrageous, and I think it's quite enjoyable. Chapter 1 is about the super powers with no lower limit, the speed force and the command of destruction. Chapter 2 is about space teleportation, time-stop and eternal time-stop. Chapter 3 is all about plundering omnipotence vs copying omnipotence vs trading omnipotence. It's still being updated. It feels very similar to Jojo, which is quite interesting. I wonder how it is about the scientific growth-oriented all-round ability of analytical understanding and learning. In fact, I have always liked the alchemy in Fullmetal Alchemist. Wouldn't it be better if it could be carried out, understood, analyzed, experimented, reshaped, and decomposed more conceptually? It seems that there have been no updates in the past few days [laughing] [crying] Come on, come on [laughing] [laughing]

This book is definitely the most potential book, no one. If it develops, it will definitely be in the first and second echelons. The plot can be written and relatively compact. Even the remarks in the middle do not affect the coherence of the plot. Instead, it shows that the author thinks a lot when writing the book. The protagonist is not brainless, and everyone's IQ is online. The potential is very great. Come on, author [laughs]

It can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy and thought on it. It is very beautiful.

At that time, I read more than a dozen and gave up. Now that I have seen this book with 2 million words, I went back to review it. Maybe it was because my reading mood was different. I can watch it this time. Generally speaking, this book has a lot of poisonous points. Because the direction of superpower intelligence fighting requires very high logic and imagination, there are many places where the logic is not conventional. Moreover, this book has a tendency to be self-explanatory and requires readers to be aware of the radio waves. However, the author of this book is very enthusiastic, and the author's hard work can be seen in many designs (at least the first few hundred thousand words, I didn't see it later) For me personally, it is a masterpiece with a score of 90 or above, because the protagonist's character and writing style are very different, and it is suitable for readers who are neutral and kind or above and who have a loose sense of logic. [Learned]

The setting ideas I had imagined in my mind have been written out✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧The plot arrangement is also good, but sometimes the author's narration is a bit watery, and the updates are too slow (author's quick update!!!)

Every user of the Bug ability can be a protagonist. This book allowed me to see a different possibility, which is very exciting. The plot of the whole film is full of ups and downs, full of uncertainties, and the battle of wits is also quite explosive.

Give me four stars for encouragement. At least it is better than mine. As the saying goes, you are stuck in a mystery without realizing it. After reading the author's book, I found that the world background is introduced in a manual style, the character communication is simple and simple, and the story is eager to be shown to the readers, so it is like YY writing a diary and other problems. . . In addition to talented writers, all novice writers are like this. Articles with such problems can be seen to be written by novices. Come on, I wish the author to write better and better. This is the blessing of a tourist writer who can't even read his own articles [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

This book is interesting and provides skills ideas to the author 4D pocket: Each player has a portable space, but all concepts and materials in his or her portable space will be at a standstill. For example, if an energy cannon that does not cause damage to other locations in one direction hits the holder, the attack status can be stored in the portable space. When fighting is needed, the holder can control the release direction of the portable space and attack it. Storage attacks only look at the size of the space and don't care about anything else. This means that you can store 10,000 rounds in the portable space and then attack. This is just superficial. There are also conceptual skills. For example, the destruction skills of the God of Death in Chapter 1 can be stored in the portable space, and then multiple destruction skills can be fired at once when an attack is needed. This skill can be developed in many ways. For example, multiple healing skills can be stored at the same time. In the portable space, when used, the launch direction of the portable space points to a friend or yourself to receive treatment. For example, if the enemy uses control skills on you, you can also save them and then attack them. Suppose the enemy uses a control-type conceptual skill on you, unlimited spraying. Whoever is designated will be unable to control his anus, lose movement, language and thinking ability all over the body, and constantly spray feces. At the same time, there is only pain and no thoughts in his mind. When there is no feces ejected in the intestines, all the body fluids in the body will be converted into feces and continue to eject. If the ejection of body fluids is finished, it will become a mummy. This ability is also very fun, but the portable space is more awesome. The portable space is afraid that the user will be attacked by the large-scale AOE skills, and then he will not be able to withstand the damage, and then he will die. This control conceptual skill can also be stored in the portable space. And please note that the focus of the portable space is storage, which means that the skills it stores, and the side effects of the skills are also borne by the owner. For example, the healing skill mentioned above will deduct one's own blood volume when healing a friend. This side effect, this price is borne by the unit that owns the healing skill, but the owner of the portable space skill only stores the effect released by this skill, so he does not need to bear the side effects. I would like to add that this work is so annoying. The previous comments were written on the first few dozen pictures. Now that I have read 50, the level has been at a high level. I think this work, I want to give it 10 points, but it only has 8.3 Points. Damn it, it is so annoying. Holy shit, I am so angry. The objective evaluation is at least 9.5 Or above, it can't be any lower.

There is no discomfort in reading the big frame, the writing is okay and there is no rhetoric, but it is also readable, and the subject matter is novel, which is still different from other infinite streams. In the early stage, there was a section about the relationship between the male and female protagonists that was written inexplicably. The development was not smooth at all and was very abrupt (I adjusted that section to read). This is the demerit point of this book. The rest is okay.

It's a very good book. It has a lot of ideas and is very novel, but this is both an advantage and a disadvantage. The biggest fear of this book is that it will run out of ideas. If the author runs out of ideas, the book may be discontinued or unfinished [crying]

A book of the same level as Ten Days Ending, a rare masterpiece among thousands of novels. The first volume cannot be stopped from the beginning to the end. The ending is unexpected and reasonable. The author really nailed it. I like it. I want more from the author. [Laughter and cry][Love][Love][Love]

It's pretty cool to watch. The only problem is that the enemies have different side effects, and the cost of over-standard skills is too low (compared to the protagonist), which puts a bit of pressure on the protagonist's combat power, but he can still win in the end.

It is an underrated masterpiece. The setting is very novel and suits my taste. It is quite good to resist the bug-level boss, or to fight back in a desperate situation. Although there are some poisonous points, there are not many. It is a masterpiece among the novels that I have read on three accounts.

This is the second four-star novel I have found after many days. The plot is really well-written and thoughtful, but it is a pity that there are so many novels on this subject that it is hard to stand out. Five-star seedlings, with the potential of four-star completion. It is well written but not popular. It is logical and unique. It is less interesting and the theme is not new. I hope this book can be accumulated.

I have a cool move that works well for the protagonist, and I can push Fantasy Killer to its limits. Fantasy Killer restrains all supernatural powers but does not affect the power of technology, so you can use technology to strengthen your body to match Fantasy Killer. For example, if the right arm is replaced by a robotic arm, if the original Fantasy Killer is ineffective against the robotic arm, you can use skill points to upgrade it to be effective. I remember that the power of Fantasy Killer will not disappear immediately after cutting off the right arm. If a long-range weapon is installed inside the mechanical arm, the Fantasy Killer on the bullet will still be effective for a short time after the bullet is fired. Or use Blitzcrank's mechanical flying claws. Fantasy Killer from afar must be interesting

Not to mention anything else, just say that the setting is quite good, with magical abilities and weird and cruel prices, and the writing is also excellent. What is strange is that the score of this book is only in the early eighties. Where are the deductions?

It looks good, but there are some places. . . . . Emmmm, it's so strange that I can't describe it. After it was revealed that Arrogance was the heroine, the pleasure of guessing was gone [note] (rough review, no in-depth reading)

Very well written! The author's imagination is really big! Don't pay attention to the comments of those little black guys. Why don't they write their own books if they are so capable? Support the author! Come on! (Also, one update a day is too little)

Poisonous point 1: At the beginning of Tianfu, the protagonist was cut off many times and the villain was strengthened. Poison Point 2: Everyone is good, and most of them have no city. It is not like other infinite streams, but other than that, it has a new setting, many mechanisms, and exciting combat. It brings together all the bugs in the comic. It is recommended to turn off the paragraph reviews, because there are many nitpicking and inappropriate poisonous points and spoilers, which is disappointing.

This book is still worth reading, with wonderful ability settings and battles between ability users. I can't watch the Omniscient and Omnipotent Battle so far. I thought it was Omniscient and Omnipotent, but it turned out to be a Gundam Battle. Just like in the Marvel universe, you thought the enemy was Thanos full of infinity stones, but it turned out to be future technology. Look forward to Doctor Destruction.

Very interesting, a lot of things I haven't thought of, Combo, author, come on!

It's good to read. I saw this book on the book recommendation list last year, but I didn't read it. Now that I'm reading it, I realize that I really didn't read it at that time. Take a closer look. But this was avoided and I was allowed to wait one by one. It only took me two days to read nearly a million words.

I submitted a super power combination, which is the main character's ability in a novel I have read before. The ability is: the leap process and reaching the end point. Effect: When one's own ability can complete the result, the process will leap forward to reach the result. For example, skip the exercise time and get 8-pack abs directly. Skip the flight time of the bullet and directly reach the result of the enemy being hit. Disadvantages: If one's own abilities are unable to complete the result, the result cannot be achieved. For example, if one is imprisoned in a cell that one cannot break, the ability will fail to activate. This ability, if improved, eliminates this disadvantage. Disadvantage 2: It will be locked and invalidated by the current view. Failure principle: What leaps forward is the process, and the person locked in the present view is always in the present. (If you are facing Huang Zhen, it will probably be higher than the priority) Cost: The leap process is like leaping life, and using abilities will reduce life span. (It's not time deletion, it's the superior replacement of time deletion). With a development ability, you can achieve omnipotence, such as the Alchemist: equivalent exchange, madness, resources are obtained by activating abilities, resources are exchanged for life, and the cycle is endless.

It's great to watch, and the plot is pretty good too. Although there are some minor flaws, it's overall pretty good. I hope the author writes better and better! Then I hope that the author Shaoshui will update more comments [sneered laugh][sneak laugh][sneak laugh]

The writing is very good, but the author suppresses the growth of the protagonist very hard. Many battles are at a disadvantage. The battle for the position of the Demon Lord is frustrating. The protagonist lacks the background but the momentum is sufficient. I suggest adding three unforgivable curses to the protagonist to make the opponent suffer. This not only enhances the comprehensiveness of the protagonist's skills, but also enhances the protagonist's prestige by torturing the opponent and increases the sense of satisfaction.