Heroine: at the Beginning, She Raised a Sadistic Master and a Rebellious Disciple

Okay, this book is very short, the story is not long, but it is very exciting. The protagonist's apprentice is also born, and so is her mother... Well... A book about yandere, master and apprentice, and a bit of suspense. It will not ruin the three views. At least I don't have any negative emotions after reading it. I hope there will be a sequel or follow-up. I'll finish it.

After reading it, I don't feel anything bad. I feel a bit like myself when I was a child. I daydream every day, can't put it down for the things I like (such as toys), and have a strong possessive desire. Only later did I know how to share and let go. The above is purely personal sentiment, you can regard it as an innocent moan...

I'll give it five stars, but that's not too much. [Laughs evilly]

According to my opinion, this book is still very good, but sometimes the author makes it difficult to get involved. This is a minor shortcoming. Again, it's hard to agree with everyone! People who like to watch love to watch, and people who don't like to watch really don't like to watch. To put it in two words, there must be some shortcomings. After all, it is impossible to have such a perfect book. Sometimes being too perfect is a kind of imperfection, which may be a bit profound, but it is true. Similar to that comment, book lovers who like to take on role-playing roles do not recommend this book. If it is just a story, you can still read it firsthand. In addition, this book may also have a sequel, so now I just need to insert a teleportation anchor point, and remember to call me when it happens. In addition, some people may think that I am getting paid for saying this. I can only tell you that being an online article author is already pretty good without starving to death. Where can I get the spare money to buy a troll? Do you really think everyone is the third young master? Finally, the brothers are destined to meet again in the world!

Overall, it's good, the plot logic is pretty solid, and the male protagonist's personality is quite in line with the heroine's, but he's always being eaten by others [laughing], but he can't lose his virginity every time, which makes me pull up my pants again [angry]

Except for some details that are not described, the overall story is quite good, but there are too many dramatic words interspersed in it. It is good to have ideas, but they must be developed according to the theme of the novel.

As for why I want to comment like this, it's just because I want to comment like this. I feel that if you have a comment, you should comment. Only after commenting can I know your comment. I comment like this first, and then you comment in my comment, and then comment after making suggestions. As for how to comment, just comment like this first. You should know my comment, right?

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Friends, no matter how you live your life, there will always be people making irresponsible remarks. We all come to this world only once, to eat what we want to eat, meet the people we want to see, see the scenery we like, and do the things we like. You don't have to grow into a peony. If you want, you can be a jasmine, a daisy, a sunflower, or thousands of others.

The heroine has been cleared, but not completely. She can't love her. It's too **** "sweet". I'm the author****

Zhen is the best text in the world The ending is considered a happy one Want to see the follow-up

After thinking about it, I should be able to see what I want to see, so I will tell you what I thought of and what I have seen before. The biggest problem is that the pain experienced by the protagonist is not real. The protagonist I saw was drowned in a tide of insects. The insects bit every inch of skin, penetrated into the body, and poured out from the mouth. Even if they came out later, I wanted to eat to improve. I can't even eat it because I hold the food in my mouth, and there will be bugs moving in my throat. The immortal body will not die without eating, and the pain will always follow and cannot be forgotten. The pain suffered by the protagonist does not have much real feeling. Although it is the real pain left by thousands of years, there is not much place to describe the shadow.

It's pretty good. Not bad. When will the follow-up be released?

Looks good. I want to see photos of the male lead.

So which one is the real ending [what]

No, here's the last one, release it quickly😫

Emmm, after reading it, I went to Yamamoto Wolf King's homepage and clicked a follow button, but I found that he only had one book, and it was unblocked. You said it was well written, why didn't you write it again [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's very interesting, but can the author stop breaking the dimensional wall all the time? It's not good to add so many monologues to a good novel. It's not good to keep showing up. Also, come on, update and refuse. Kavin Kavin Kunkun is ten centimeters shorter.

The ending of WC is so cool. I control her and throw the main character's body down, making her life worse than death. It's so perverted. I like it. I've watched too many normal ones and some heavy-flavored ones.

The ending was good, but there was a mess in the middle ^ω^ I wanted to write about a battle of wits, but it wasn't very obvious. Anyway, it wasn't fun enough to watch. It seemed like I had some brains, but it seemed like I was forced to understand. But I was very satisfied with the ending. I hope there will be a follow-up.

How to say it? It's not bad, the plot structure is okay, the characters, especially the inner description, are very clever, which can be said to be the highlight of the whole novel. Overall, it is a middle-to-upper-class novel. If the plot and characters are carefully polished, it will also be a rare book. The slightly open ending at the end also made me look forward to the author's next novel. But! It's already fucking July, why haven't you updated it yet? ! ! ! [Angry][angry] Of course, it does not rule out that I am exhausted and bored, and my evaluation of this book may be a little too high, but it is undeniable that it has indeed brought me a lot of spiritual enjoyment.

I want to watch it like the first volume, where the female protagonist plays and tortures the male protagonist, and it's best to get in the way [laughing]

Author, you are the first person who made me feel depressed when I read a book.

The beginning and the end are okay when you are in the fairy world. Chunchun Dafen in the middle recommends skipping it.

I finished reading it accidentally. Although the author tortured me thousands of times, at least there was a sugar residue in the end [love] [love]

This kind of ending is rarely seen. To me, this ending is quite novel.

Good luck, I hope I can add a little bit of rustle

Okay, just a little bit of that at the end

The ending is good, please encourage the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, why is the rating so low? [What]