Under One Person: I Was Watching the Big Boss Live

I really like this book, and I'm looking forward to what the King of Wu-Tang's expression will be like when our protagonist's strength is revealed? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I like this type of drama very much, but now the heroine in the plot doesn't like Ma Hongxian, right? [I'm about to cry] It's very good-looking, but I still feel that it matches Taoist Wang Ye better. I feel [sending my heart]

I didn't read it for long, I admit it, but the book does have quite a big problem. Firstly, this kind of fan fiction mentions the CP of the original work, especially in the BL direction. To be honest, some people will be offended (although there are not many elements. I don't mean to find fault and get scolded, I just hope that people who mind will go around and don't step on the offender); secondly, the heroine's character It's quite wrong. We are indeed very enthusiastic in this industry, but we don't blush when we meet people, let alone pick up nicknames and blurt them out naturally when we just meet them. Thirdly, hasn't the heroine been a cow horse for so long in her previous life? Why are you so innocent and childish like a child? Not very understanding. It seems that there are actually elements of Mary Sue in it, author. However, although there are many loopholes, there are also very big advantages. The characters in this article are not broken, and there is no OOC, which is congratulatory. Many fanfics cannot do this for the sake of fun; and the heroine has clear psychological changes, which is in line with the impact of social changes from the peaceful and prosperous world to the alien world; the storyline is okay, most of the original plot has been slightly modified, and there is no discomfort caused by the huge changes in other fanfics. Generally speaking, the highlights are very bright, and there are some highlights, so read as appropriate. Finally, I want to point out here that I give my opinions objectively and hope that the author can improve his writing style and thinking. I have no intention of denying the author's efforts in producing food to feed poor people like us who are about to starve to death (I actually cherish this fan book very much), and I have no intention of provoking a fight. Some people should not over-interpret it and come uninvited. I am very hard to listen to and my mouth is poisonous due to personal experience. Don't blame me for being unreasonable and breaking your defense [shy][shy][shy] Finally, I give you a kind and shy∀ Forget it, I looked back and saw that the characters were not very good, and some of the plots were extremely awkward. I won't say more, I will understand it after reading it myself. If you like real Mary Sues and accept a series of stupid and cute behaviors such as the heroine's coquettishness, then go watch it. The front is fine, but the back is broken

Good-looking and good-looking. If you want a male protagonist, Wang Ye is good hahaha

Great author! Has it been updated? It's so beautiful that I can't get enough of it [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Is Wang also the male protagonist? It feels so cp-like. The author is great. Please update it soon.

It looks good. The corners of her mouth are raised. I feel really good looking at this.

It's a very novel type, I personally like it, but if you like fighting, please be careful [smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, but the heroine's remarks sometimes make me dig my toes into the ground (◦`~´◦)

The author is great, do you know? I have been chasing from storybooks to tomatoes just for this book. I have been following you since the first day you posted it. Is it super wonderfully written? Every time I can't get enough of it, I still have more to say.

There are very few female videos written by one person. I have only found two of them so far. They are really good! It's totally different from me! It's really fun to do CP on the spot!

Is Wang also the male protagonist? It feels so CP. I hope they can be together. Can you please update a few more episodes? It's not enough to watch [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's super good-looking. The way Yaya knocks on the cp looks very much like me [shy]. It's the first time I see Zhang Chulan. It's really embarrassing. Everything else is okay. It's the author, why haven't you updated yet? The update is so slow, I can't wait to see it!

I like it very much, I hope the protagonist doesn't have cp(⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

It's quite interesting. I've read several fanfics of Under One Person. This one is my favorite. But can you please don't arrange a CP for the heroine first? The age of the heroine is too young, so it's really not suitable for CP.

Wow, it looks good, but if you want a male lead, you always [cry][cry][cry]

It's good to read. I give the author a five-star review, but overall there are still some flaws. How can I say that the author writes the emotional aspect very well, but the protagonists all have a bit of ambiguity with Feng Yueya, especially her and Wang Ye. At the beginning, she was particularly scornful of Wang Ye and her, but later on it became a bit too arrogant. Feng Yueya is a little arrogant or something. The protagonists are very good to her, but I feel that sometimes she does not know how to do things and is too self-righteous, but the overall writing is okay.

This plot is really exciting, and it is one of the few books that fascinates me. I also really like the heroine. If I can, I can marry the heroine home [Chigua] [Chigua]

No, sir, why is CP Ma Hongxian? ! ! Why? !

The most fun, it made me laugh all the way through it

It's written in big letters, good, good, good, good, good, good, hehe, flowers are for you 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 (I think no cp is good) I didn't say anything!

I have read the latest chapter now. To be honest, I am in a bad mood now. The heroine has fallen in love with a person who only thinks about refining weapons and his furnace at this time. I always thought that the hero might be Wang Ye or Zhuge Qing. I also thought it might be Qiu'er, and even everyone will. But I didn't expect that he would fall in love with Ma Xianhong. It was obviously very enjoyable to watch from the front. It felt very comfortable and refreshing for female nerds like us. But after arriving at Biyou Village, I felt bad (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

In fact, as far as fan fiction is concerned, it's quite interesting. Apart from the small number of words in each chapter and the slow update, there are no shortcomings that I can't accept. The most important thing is that I want to see how long I have been reading it.

It's really good. There are no broken characters and the protagonist is not obtrusive. It's just that there are too few chapters. The author will update it as soon as possible! (∩ᄑ_ᄑ)⊃━☆Becomes Gugua ( ◠ x ◠ )

I like it so much, one of the few good fanfics I have read

It's great to watch, and the relationship between Wang Ye and the heroine is so good^ω^ The author has done a lot of good coding!

It's good-looking. (I personally think) this book adds a new plot to the original plot, making it more interesting. On this basis, it also modified some plots (without changing the characteristics of the characters) to increase the readability. (The above is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you🙏)

It looks good. When I read the comments, I found that there were many comments from 20 to 3 years ago. It must have been discontinued for a while. I was really lucky to read it when the author updated it. It was great. I liked reading it. I just hope that the CP can be Wang Ye. It's really good.

Wow, wow, it's really good to read. It's the first time I've seen it written from this perspective. It's just that there's too little written about it, and it's not enough to read. (ˊ ᵕ ˋ 💦), The author must not stop updating. [Almost crying]

It's very interesting, but it's a little short and I finished it by accident [crying] Can the author update it more? I'm looking forward to the plot in the future [Sending my heart]