Ye Luoli: Crime of Lust

This book confused me. I pray that he seems to be a pawn from beginning to end. I cannot judge her good and evil. His and her fate is something I have never owned or sympathized with. I sympathize with that pure white and kind prayer, and I also sympathize with that extremely dark prayer that no one can help or turn to. I also sympathize with the hopeless water prince who was pulled down from the altar, or Yan Jue. . . All in all, this book gave me a feeling of depression, yes, it is depression. But it was very well written [Like][Like][Like] Maybe it was when the heroine was abducted to Lingxi Pavilion to have sex every night or at other times. Maybe Xiu Yas was the most pitiful. He regarded Prayer as his god and watched her fall in love with and have sex with others step by step. The whole book seems to be ending. But the author's writing style is very good [Salute] [Note] It's worth encouraging

It has always been difficult for me to accept abuse. The moment I stepped in, it was destined that I would not be able to get out. Is the bondage in the name of love really love? Pure white when she was born, but in the end, was it really her who was polluted by the world? For a moment, I really hoped that it would be better if she were not pure white. I would rather that she was born evil so that she could at least live a prosperous life in the world. The world kisses me, but I sing in return. There are so many words that I hope she can hear. When you treat the world gently, the world will show its teeth and claws at you. When you treat the world fiercely, it will suddenly become gentle.

In other words, Jinben has read all of it, except for the last 3 or 4 chapters of Preface. But after reading all the way, I just want to ask, is the author a stepmother? I like the prayer very much, and the author's conception is also very good. But it was really frustrating all the way. It's hard to watch. Who is a good person who would let his own daughter be raped? Who is a good person who would let his own daughter remain weak and bullied for more than 300 chapters? You said that everyone's shortcomings should be written equally. That's fine. But there's no need to make the prayer so miserable, right? This is not writing about shortcomings, it is clearly writing about the most miserable person in the whole book. I know A-Yuan is "alien", but there is really no need to make her weak enough to be raped. Put yourself in someone else's shoes, would you like to be raped? Even if you don't kill the other person after being raped, you will be angry, unwilling to forgive the other person, and still treat the other person. Yes, it was humiliating him. It was quite humiliating, but not enough. It is indeed easier for him to die (even a relief), but he can be fulfilled in the same way. Let others qj him too. In addition, A-Yuan's setting is that he is always pure and kind. But being pure and kind does not mean that you are like the Virgin Mary (but not the Virgin Mary). If you don't forgive the other person and only take slight revenge, it doesn't even count as revenge. I really don't understand it. The writing is really good and quite engaging. The setting is novel, if you don't mind the above, you can take a look. You can read it if you are curious. People have endured it till the end and only have 3 or 4 chapters left, which proves that it is indeed worth reading. I gave it five stars because I respect the author's work, and it's really okay. Generally speaking, Wendu is a five-star person who is not particularly poisonous. Although I don't understand it very well, I respect it. Everyone has different ideas, and it's normal for me to like you or not. Therefore, the above is just my personal opinion. I wish you all a happy reading. I hope I can stand by the author when we meet in the next book (I really like the author's writing style, +1 for be lovers)

Although this book is not based on the original plot, I still love the heroine very much. I really like it. However, there are no ratings for this book. I hope the basic rating is there and above 90. [Adoration]

It's so cool. There are a total of 297 pictures in the first chapter, followed by the second picture. Most of them are from Se Se. I like them very much. Hehehe [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

To be honest, when I first started watching it, I didn't have a great impression of Xiu Yas. Instead, I really liked those Shura fields, praying, and dealing with crazy criticism from all parties. I thought Xiu Yas was just an insignificant little character, but then I really liked it haha. Ah Yuan is a very cute little girl. She is not nearly perfect like many heroines in fan fiction (it can also be said that she is the image we expect, without too many flaws), but sometimes she behaves a bit real (that's what I think hh). Although the love between her and Xiu Yasi is not much written in the book (I think so because of skip reading), her preference for him can be seen. Xiu Yas loves her, and he is the only one who loves her without any impurity and use. People like Yan Jue, Pang Zun, Huo Liaoye, etc. Are more interested in Ah Yuan and even like her because of her body and some kind of influence. Some of them can't even be called likes (they are more possessive of possessions). Therefore, when I saw Ayuan and Xiu Yasi rushing to their deaths, and everyone had a happy ending but they did not, I felt a little uneasy and regretful in my heart. They should have and deserve a better ending [almost crying]

This book would be better if you could add something else, such as the dual heroine setting [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is one of the top three Ye Luoli fanfics I've read. It's very good. The heroine was very confident when she first appeared, but now I feel like she has begun not to believe in herself. Before, Shu Yan said how much he loved her and liked her, not because he was affected by her power. Now that the heroine's magical power has weakened, he has no influence. I didn't see the back, no. I know if he still likes the heroine, but after seeing this, I can't stand it anymore. The heroine has been repeatedly saying that she has no ability to empathize, but now it seems to me that she is still a little lost because Shu Yan doesn't like him, and it feels like she has deviated from the heroine's original character.

This is my first non-jumping novel, I like it a lot, but when I saw the heroine was forced to take her back to have fun, I still felt unspeakably uncomfortable. The final ending should be considered He in my eyes. After all, they both died. I can't judge the fate of the heroine. I can only say that in the first volume, I felt quite aggrieved. She was used by everyone. If I want power, just I have to be forced to have fun. Although the heroine is essentially a lustful fairy, I feel quite depressed. Fortunately, the second volume is quite good. I give it a five-star rating. But I feel that the only one who is really good to the heroine is Xiu Yas... However, this is also the first novel with more than 300 pictures, which makes me feel that there are quite few novels. I can only say, go read another book by the author...

I only watched the early stage, but I think it looks really good. And the heroine is a perfect match. I recently liked the song "In the Fog" and there is an episode where the heroine is helplessly wandering back and forth between black and white. It just so happens that there is a line in the song about their black and white heart, and this line feels like it really suits the heroine. I have a hunch that it would be even better if the heroine becomes crazy about beauties in the later period. I can't describe that feeling, but I just feel like it. It's just me personally liking it. Just don't tell me if you don't like it.

Based on the author's literary talent, I can definitely give it five stars. But should the plot be so cruel in the early stages? I have no desire to continue reading. It only hurts to be teased and stabbed constantly. It really hurts me to cry to death. Can you not write such cruel stories in the future? Your diploma is completely in some sweet articles. I think it is very likely that you will be successful. Don't be so cruel! ! !

How can I put it this way, when I first clicked in, I was very much looking forward to it, and I have been attracted to it. If I continue to read it, it is really great [Love] But what makes me care about it is that it is indeed too frustrating. I can understand that everyone likes the heroine and is seduced by the heroine. However, there is no retaliation after being forced, and they can still get along well with each other afterwards, it seems that the heroine is really just their sexual tool, just used to vent, and they don't care about their feelings at all (although they will coax the heroine). Well, I feel a bit contradictory myself. Finally, the author's works are really beautiful! ! !

Actually, to be precise, the whole story is okay. This is one of the few harem stories. Although the ending is very hasty and all the nine gods are dead. I hope they are slowly watching the coming of desire and being dominated by desire. You can find every ideal type in this book, but I don't recommend reading it if you want to have a double knot. I read it as a post by Shimizu in the early stage. Others said that the heroine was dominated without any awareness of her own, but in the later stage, she will write that he was really good in the early stage. This kind of article is unique and unique in Tomato. I really hope to read it.

I like it very much, please update soon. How will the second volume end?

To be honest, there are several passages in the book that made me understand the heroine's heart: "Huo Liaoye and Jin Litong, who have evil powers, don't need to guide the new forces to do good. They really just enjoy lust. They know that their prayers will be stained by their power, but they still sleep with her regardless. Because they think that prayer is just like that, they indulge in lust and feed on lust, so they enjoy themselves as much as they can. No one noticed the real idea of the prayer, no. Even if I pray to myself, I can hardly see my true self anymore. "I just want to say that praying is something I can't calm down in my heart. No one cares about her true thoughts. She knew that the wish would be dyed black but she still slept with her. No one asked her if she would feel uncomfortable after being dyed black. No one asked her if she wanted to be pure white or dark.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I can't stand it anymore [crying] Baby Wish Wish shouldn't be like this [almost crying] She deserves the best in the world, just like other people in the book review said, except for the little snake, everyone is not pure about wishing [crying] I really feel bad, wishing has lost her original self, lost by them [crying] [crying]

It's very depressing, sadistic, and I like it very much. Maybe I'm a pervert at heart [laughing] I love it so much, no matter whether the heroine is having sex with everyone, her impatience and depression are all very real. So many people can't accept it, so go read the brainless cool article [cover your face] (don't criticize if you don't like it)

The author's conception is very ingenious, the ideas are very novel, and the character of each god matches the character of the peer. It is not easy and deserves praise! But what I can't accept is Yuan Yuan's experience. To be honest, when I was reading Volume 1, I wanted to give up the article several times, especially when Yuan Yuan cried to Xiu Yas that she had lost herself, and no one firmly chose her or loved her. When I learned about Yuan Yuan's early experience in Lingxi Pavilion (forced to have sex day and night, emm... It's hard to comment on this setting, I don't really like it anyway), I really felt sorry for Yuan Yuan. Yuan Yuan is a very good little girl, and she deserves everyone's preference and firm choice! Regarding the "admirers" of Yuanyuan, I find it difficult to comment. They are almost all caused by lust and possessiveness. They use Yuanyuan as a means of venting and have no intention of caring about Yuanyuan. I suggest that they be castrated┐(ﾟдﾟ┐) except for Prince Water and Xiu Yas. I prefer Yuan and Xiu Yas to find an isolated island to live together. In my opinion, the two of them have firmly chosen each other from the beginning. When Xiu Yas was born, Xiu Yuan regarded Xiu Yuan as his god and the only light, and Xiu Yuan also fought against the God of Jealousy without hesitation when he learned that Xiu Yas was "dead". Many people have criticized Wish Wish in Volume 1 for being "watery" and not worthy of Xiu Yasi's firm love, but in my opinion, it is simply nonsense, because Xi Yas was affected by Wan Yuan's weak fairy power under the influence of the contract and was on the verge of death for the first time. In the end, I can still accept the ending where both Wan Yuan and Xiu Yas die. The article is very good, and the author deserves a lot of credit (*＾3＾)/～☆

[Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] My wish, the author would be nice to wish [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] She is so pitiful [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] The author could really organize and delete the outline. There are only 300 chapters in one volume. Now that I have read 30 chapters in the second volume, I feel so depressed. Really, the author really wants to delete all the little things in the outline and what happened to the protagonist group (Ye Luoli) and them. The sentences should be shorter, and the small things will be deleted directly to speed up the development of the story and quickly develop the plot. It is very necessary to end the plot in two or three sentences so that Yuanyuan can grow up quickly. After all, those who can read Ye Luoli's novels have basically seen the anime. Everyone probably knows the growth of Ye Luoli's protagonist group. There is no need to describe too many details and it will end quickly. The details will be deleted directly. If you find something you forgot to write later, you can solve it by recalling it. Just write clearly what will happen when this big event happens to Ye Luoli's protagonist group. The general details and what the protagonist group said will be omitted directly, and the scene will be transferred directly to other events. If there are more than 300 chapters in the second volume, and there are more than 600 chapters suppressed in the front, no one will be able to hold on to the so-called "sweet" third volume. Thanks

Hee hee, I don't know what to write. Anyway, it looks good. I hope you won't scold me. ✌︎( ᐛ )✌︎

I love this beginning so much, I like the setting of the heroine (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) It's really nice to pray and Xiu Yasi [blowing kisses] Xiu YaSi is the only one who stands beside Qi Yuan from beginning to end, willing to dedicate everything to her, but because of this, I also feel sorry for his humbleness [almost crying] I don't know how to describe it. At first I thought this article was a harem article about "not even a leaf among thousands of flowers touches me". I didn't expect it to be a kind of forced control and confinement. They treat prayers as their own possessions and dye them black or white at will. Their emotions are so depressed. Whether they are pure white or pure black, they are all prayers. They all selfishly decide what is good and evil. How do you evaluate her good and evil if she is the same body as black and white? Everyone is evil [angry] Damn it, I want to abandon the article but I can't help but keep reading (＞Van＜) I finally finished watching it. The Game of Gods is a bit convoluted. I almost didn't understand it. Two of the identities were guessed wrong [laughing awkwardly]. It's a calculation that lasted for several eras. Double death is he. I think this is the best arrangement for Xiu Yasi and Qi Wish.

This book has good and bad qualities, but I can be sure of the author's great writing style, but I personally don't like be very much. I pray that I will cultivate one person from beginning to end. As long as any one of them dies, the remaining person will definitely follow him/her.

It's really good to watch. The heroine was a little frustrated in the first 100 chapters, but it was so cool to get to the end. He didn't help anyone. But, when I think about Xiu Yas dying in the future, I feel really sad🥀 My favorite is Xiu Yas.

The author writes well, but it's not my type. The heroine goes to the human world and is given a bracelet by Xin Ling, which limits her power. (It is set that the heroine will be controlled by black desires.) Secondly, the heroine contracts with Shu Yan after she contracts Jasmine and becomes Shu Yan's doll. I won't read the rest of it. If you don't mind, you can read it.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, but the heroine's charm is a bit too great. Everyone who meets the heroine falls in love with her at first sight. This setting is a bit strange. I think there should be more emotional foundation, but overall it's still good. I recommend watching [Adoration]

I like this book very much. My wife's writing style is really great (›´ω`‹). All the characters are villains, the characters are very vivid, and the plot is very rich. However, it just feels like it burns out my CPU a bit. But I recommend that you like strong writing. Shuangwen's "Don't Enter" article is generally depressing, but it doesn't affect me. I love you so much, madam (*/∇＼*)

It's pretty good, but the numbers at the end of each chapter are a bit annoying since I'm listening to a book.

I just like reading this kind of erotic articles, thank you to the author!

To be honest, I really like this book. When I read it, my emotions changed. Sometimes I cried and sometimes I laughed. I really like the character of Prayer. I love her and feel sorry for her. It is very beautiful. Each character has its own personality. Although sometimes I read this book with emotions outside the book, I still think the characters are well portrayed in the book. I also like the meaning of the name Prayer very much. What is the original sentence for the meaning of Prayer? I thought I drew the line, but it turned out I didn't draw it and couldn't find it. Can anyone kindly tell me which article it is in?

I personally feel that this book is quite good. Maybe everyone has different preferences. I feel that there is no particularly annoying "villain" in the book. I like to pray for it. I feel that the world view of this book is quite large. In the past two months, my mobile phone was collected at the beginning of May Day. I immediately read it as soon as the summer vacation came. I feel that only Xiu Yas' love for praying is pure and not driven by desire. I am very curious whether Xiu Yas was a god before and gave up his status for praying. Because I remember there was a passage in the article that was about bewitching Xiu Yasi, saying that he would kill and pray to return to the throne of God.