I Started Out as an Elder, but I Turned Out to Be a Girl

I hope there will be no CP ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The book is very good, but there are too few. I also want to ask the author if he is single, lily or married [what]

Take care of the new book, it is a transformation fantasy novel that is rare to read in Tomato. I will give it a five-star review for the time being.

The development is fascinating, but there are only so many chapters

I originally wanted to give it 3 stars, but I still want to encourage the author. There is no need to write the title of the book, which makes people mistakenly think it is an invincible article. However, after clicking in, it will be written as a title. If the title is written from the beginning, some people will accept it. Finally, I hope the author will not do this kind of plot in the future [awkward laughter]

I think Chapter 10 is a poisonous point (nothing has happened in the main world yet, so you go to a different world), and the part where Qingyuan turns into an elixir (there is a difference between a knife and poison. If you can't write a knife well, don't forcefully write a knife, we can take your time), and why is the original personality also a loser? Are you being protected too well? [Think]

Beautiful, really, very beautiful. The plot is interesting, with twists and turns, and some unexpected points. I like it. The characters are good-looking. I like the main character very much. She is cute and beautiful. Of course, I also like her alter ego. It's very cool. The other character creations here are also very good, I quite like it, not bad. There are just a few uncomfortable things. First, it's not Lily, which is really a pity. I really want to see the protagonist Lily with dual personality. After all, I've never seen it before, and I'm unhappy. Secondly, the protagonist is too close to her master and disciple. I really, really, really, really dislike it, I hate it! This is not allowed, absolutely not! Finally, the most important point is that this book is bad, and the author of the miscellaneous fish has cut off his tail and is convinced.

This book is considered very good in Tomato. I highly recommend it. Although it suddenly lost its strength in the first volume, it is still worth reading as long as you persist.

The setting is OK, and it's not toxic at the moment.

Yes, come on, author. In fact, I prefer reading this kind of writing. It's not that I like knives or anything like that. I just like the kind of semi-happy writing. Those that are fun from beginning to end without any hardship at all. I don't want to read them at all, because they are too unreal. This kind of thing is okay [Like]

Come on, author! You

This setting is quite interesting, but 150,000 words is too little. I want to take back what I said. The writing of this book is not very good, and it is even a bit poisonous. As for what is wrong, you will understand after reading the first volume.

I rely on one card a day [laughs awkwardly] To be honest, I really don't understand what your little realm is like. You like to torture the protagonist, but then you add it later. Do you want to torture the protagonist to death? We just want to see if it's fun and good. The protagonist can't improve his realm at all and keeps showing off.

Woohoo😢, it's such a pity that such a beautiful book is gone, alas😧.

There's so much foreshadowing here, don't run away before the time comes.

It's really beautiful. I don't know why the skin is so low. It really fulfills all my fantasies.

For most people, it is indeed a bit toxic, but for me, a book-hungry person, it's okay. Come on, author [please take a closer look]

It's okay, just don't have too many emotional scenes, otherwise Tianzun's character will collapse. After all, Tianzun who has lived for tens of thousands of years is generally not that sentimental.

I thought it was too slow to update so I decided to read it, but it took me so long that I forgot about it. I read it for more than half a year, and I finished reading it today. It's a very good book, but it's a pity that the ending is a little rushed. Anyway, five stars [blowing kiss]

A year later I found this book on someone else's bookshelf [face covering] and read it again

It's very good, but the author has run out of ideas. It's a pity. I hope I can continue this experience again.

This book itself is quite interesting, but it's a pity that the author didn't update it due to some other reasons. It's really a pity, but it gave me some inspiration. I'll see if I can try to write a similar book [laughing]

It's very interesting. As for the omitted parts, I really want to continue writing based on the author's outline. But let's forget it is the author's first book after all. Indeed, Volume One and Volume Two have little to do with each other. The first volume is a bit strange to read, and it feels like the plot is fragmented, but if you don't look at the names and settings that appear later in the first volume, it will be confusing. The main content of the novel should still be related to time and cause and effect. This theme is still relatively rare in novels of the same type. And judging from the outline, the author's construction of cause and effect is relatively complete, but there are also problems: whether the protagonist Ziyan is in the future or in the past, this cycle needs to be supplemented and improved. [Smile]

The writing is okay, but I don't like this kind of wandering around from world to world. Why don't you just write about the world you live in?

I hope the author can finish the book one day

It's pretty good. I finished reading it, even though you ran away [almost crying]

The book is a good book but it's a pity that I didn't continue it. All I can say is that I haven't read enough.

I really hope to continue writing woo woo

I quite like this type

I think it's good to be with the second personality [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]