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This book has a much more complete setting than the average routine novel, and the plot is also quite good. It can be seen that the author really pays attention to the readers' thoughts (even likes every comment, and replies to most of them). The writing is smooth, the plot is fast-paced, and the plot is dense. In short, it should get at least 9.1 Points.

It's well written and very thoughtful. After the character change, the protagonist is very cute, smart and kind. I also like Yan Wencheng, Chu Feng, Wu Xiu and Ruonan, they are very kind. The plot is also very good, and the author's thoughts are also mixed into it. It can be seen that the setting is very rigorous and well thought out, but it actually doesn't need to be said that much. The story is very rich in ideas, and the plot contains a lot of the author's thoughts and insights. It took a lot of effort and a lot of brain cells. Therefore, the novel is very good, but it doesn't really need to explain so much. And I think the author is more suitable for writing popular science fiction, which requires so much explanation and so much thought.

The writing is quite good, but the few 10,000-word chapters that introduce the worldview in the early stage make people feel dizzy, just like when they watched Fate/Zero and the duo turned around in a few minutes. Wouldn't it be better to unfold it slowly in the plot? Worth reading, a rare masterpiece in Tomato Transformation

The writing is quite good, better than those mindless cool articles and most of the same type of writing I have seen. The logic is quite strict and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I have only read half of it now. The overall impression is good, but it is a pity that the results are not good [face covering]

I really like the heroine, I must keep her female body! ! ! ! !

It's very, very, very good-looking. The author's writing is really good. The structure and plot of the entire novel exceeded my expectations. I originally thought it was a relatively ordinary transgender novel, but after reading it for a while, I found that it is one of the few high-quality novels I have encountered. I really admire the author's thinking and imagination. The quality of the work is very good, and the flow of the entire novel is also very smooth. The settings in it are perfect. I think the character creation has reached a very high level. It has a strong sense of immersion and is worth reading. From the foreshadowing in the first few chapters of the novel, we can see that the author's vision is very grand. There is no conflict with the setting. There are also many foreshadowings in it. Many plot directions are unpredictable. I also like the character of the protagonist very much. It is unique and novel, and the appearance is also very good-looking. The white-haired bare feet are very graphic. The author's writing style is very strong. I rarely see writing like this author's. Nowadays, many online novels become boring after reading them for a while. But this novel by the author kept me interested and kept reading. I even stayed up late for several days in a row to read it. It is really beautiful. I admire the author and hope that the author can write better and better [love] [love] [love]

It's amazing to see such a detailed book on Tomato. As a Western fantasy, the author has presented it well in the narrative, and the writing style is very comfortable to read. There are also some settings mixed in, and when I look at it, I feel like I felt when I watched Journey to the Dimension (?) Writing a book on Tomato is really a bit humiliating. Overall, the plot is complete, the setting is complete, and the pits dug are well filled. I can feel the author's intention, but many things are destined to fail to cover everything. The author's ideas are too powerful, and even a million words can't seem to support the content the author wants to depict. So some parts are more for the plot and setting, and the emotions and interactions of the characters are not as delicate as your second book [laughing] Overall, many chapters are particularly amazing, and it is a rare good book~

Excellent book. Full characters, magnificent and scientific world structure, twists and turns of growth, and intertwined destinies. "What kind of ending is worthy of this journey of wandering?" People live for themselves, and no one can stay away from changes. Deep friendship and common experiences break down the barriers between people, and our unchanging original aspirations and firm self will surely point our way forward. From destiny to beyond destiny, I find that the trajectory of my life has been arranged. Should you go with the flow, or break through reincarnation and reach a new ending? The truth is not only in the hands of a few people, but also in the hands of those who hope to break their destiny, who always strive for progress, and who never give up. Only by forging ahead can we have no regrets.

It's wonderful, there are no major problems, and it feels like it's not inferior to those books with a score of nine or so. The main reason for the small number of people is that there is a lot of paving in front, which affects the perception. Personally, I feel that this book is a slow-burning one. The author can focus on attractive elements when recommending books, such as: sexual transformation, lolita, white hair and bare feet. As far as I know, there are not a few perverted lolita fans like me in Tomato. [Laughing evilly] The main purpose is to attract readers to read the foreshadowing at the beginning, so that they will naturally continue reading.

It's very interesting, but I feel that the progress is a bit fast and it's too easy to get confused. I'm afraid that it will become more and more confusing later on, and the readers will not be able to figure it out, and the author himself will not be able to figure it out. I also want to ask, the combat system you wrote as the author should be based on Xingyue's combat system, and there are wishing elves in the Heroic Spirit Space and wishing elves that misinterpret other people's intentions. So will the protagonist participate in the Holy Grail War in the future?

The setting and author's imagination are very good. Some of the characterizations are slightly flawed but acceptable. The main reason is that there are too many settings, and many times rely on God's perspective to explain the causes and consequences of the settings. As a result, some plots do not look like a tightly operating machine, but like a few missing gears. It is difficult for readers to understand why this is the case. There is a feeling of: "Ah, this works, it makes sense."; But overall, it is a rare good work by Tomato.

It's very interesting. After reading it, I felt that it was one of the best books I've ever read. The protagonist and the surrounding personalities in the book are well developed, especially the protagonist who is kind-hearted but not a virgin, and has his own firm direction to move forward.

It was well written, and the plot was interconnected and logical, which made me feel deeply. Some of the moves, thoughts, and understandings of the world are described in great detail, but they are also easy to understand and easy to relate to and then bring in yourself.

The writing is very serious, and it seems that a lot of effort has been spent on setting these settings. However, because there are too many settings that require too much explanation, there is a bit of delay, and it doesn't look good. I was mainly attracted by the transformation. The transformation took a bit long. The outline of the story is pretty good. I just need to make some choices in the setting next time. After all, online articles are fast food and many people can't bear to read them. Looking forward to future performances w Good luck to the author

After reading this book, it feels like I have finished reading a story. The end of the story makes me unable to help but think about this. Hehe, especially the chapter "Get Out of the Future", I feel that I can tell Yu Si that this is a "story that exists because of you". The story ends here, but I feel that she is still moving forward. The unextended story is conceived in my mind, but I know that it is a fantasy. The story constructed by others has ended, and the story constructed by Yu Si himself has just begun. This is a good book. She needs to read it with a peaceful mind. It is her story...

Finished with flowers~ Thank you to the author for bringing us such a wonderful story. I still feel a little bit sad to end it after such a long time, but the ending is also very good. The writing of this book is excellent and the story is wonderful. People can read it with confidence [Blow a kiss] Don't give up just because a chapter is too long. Good stories are carefully crafted by the author.

This book is still very good. One big drawback is that the first few dozen chapters made me extremely uncomfortable and I almost couldn't finish reading it. But after I got through it, the following content was still very good. I recommend it.

It's a good book. I've finished reading it. It's very interesting, and it's related to Maomao's other book "The Ogre's Children". It's a good Western fantasy novel.

It's a very good-looking story about transformation, I like it very much. It's not bad, but it's just a low rating! But I just feel that the rating is low, let alone 8 points or more! So I don't accept this skin a bit! I like the logic and the plot. After all, for people in the second dimension, this book can be a god! Of course, it's only for people in the second dimension! If it were in Pineapple! This book should be very good!

This book is really good. I found my past and growth in it. Now after reading it, I feel that the author is writing about another me. I believe everyone will find a microcosm of themselves here. In addition, I hope the author will change the second part to five a day (crossed out) and three updates.

Well written, looking forward to future developments

The plot... Is a bit brain-burning, but there are no pitfalls. Everything is filled in, and the cycle is complete. There is no routine plot to reach the top of the transcendent world. It can be seen that Maomao has put enough effort into the plot. The final ending also allows everyone to think divergently, allowing Yu to live not only in the novel, but also in everyone's memory. Maybe one day she will be resurrected in the real world [laughs]

There is a lot of content in the first twenty chapters, and each chapter has a lot of words. Most of them are setting content and theoretical reasoning. When I first read it, I felt like I was reading a "thesis". If you read it patiently, you will find that so many settings are necessary, but today, 26 years ago, , this is actually a bit of hindsight. Although you may not understand it if you don't explain the setting clearly, but if there is no point in attracting readers at the beginning of a novel, it is easy to drive readers away. The content of the story is novel and connotative, and it abandons conventional routines and settings. After more than ten chapters, we enter the main theme. In fact, the content is very attractive at the beginning, but I always feel that the pace becomes faster later. On the one hand, the world view is too huge and it is difficult to continue writing. On the other hand, because of the huge world view, I have to keep explaining the settings, which leads to a bleak number of viewers. However, this does not affect the fact that this is a masterpiece that is truly worth appreciating. You can't extricate yourself if you get addicted to it. Sometimes the look and feel in the middle will look split due to the interspersed large number of settings. I feel that the look and feel of old bookworms will be much better and will not be affected.

It's a profound thought. I originally thought of giving up the book because I didn't want to read the plot at first, but because I still liked the world described by the author, I insisted on reading it. As a result, I liked it more and more as I read later. The growth and sublimation of the protagonist's thoughts are very thought-provoking. When reading the book, it is like debating with the author. Judging from the author's writing style and some sources of inspiration, the author is quite knowledgeable. Moreover, where can I find the author of Xiangxiang who can respond almost instantly? Maomao Xiha Xiha [Love]

It's very beautiful and made my CPU spin like crazy. To sum up briefly, in the early stage, Maomao was digging holes and burying holes like crazy. It was hard to persuade me to quit, because the protagonist in the early stage was relatively weak and was being pushed around all the time. He was deleted as soon as he had some ideas. My poor little protagonist. But that's just the first 20 chapters or so. I haven't watched the back yet Except for the last note, I have basically finished reading it, but I am not going to read the last few chapters. I will briefly summarize it. It is a good book, but not a good story. Maomao wants to express a lot, but because it wants to express too much, the story is not so good. It seems too tired, and there are too many thoughts and philosophies instilled in the whole book, which should have made the whole story better. But the story trend of the whole book is to break fate. This is not to say that the story of breaking fate is bad, but it is just that it is not as rich in portrayal. Forget it, I won't say more, it's all over anyway, unfortunately there is nothing I can do, I can only hope that the beautiful ogre boy will not be like this

Keep updating, it's very interesting, the plot is similar to a serial dream, a double dream, it's a bit confusing, but it's okay if you watch it slowly, the main line is still very clear

Very nice. This is the first time I have seen a novel with such a grand world view. I prefer this kind of novel. I hope the author can write more of this kind of novel. Finally, I picked out a poem. I personally think it is very suitable for this book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Evening view of multi-view building Song Zhao Shixiu There are suspected old heroes coming and going between Langan and Yanping at sunset. The tide is growing in the sea, and the sea is slightly white, and the wheat is beautiful and the meandering green of Huainan is green. Far away from Jia Bozhou, the old monk points to the urn and explains the shape of the state. A lingering wind suddenly blows at the corner of the camp, making me sad and unable to hear the sound. Everyone, may your past, present and future belong only to you.

Two years later, here's a book review Although there are some shortcomings in writing, the story is quite exciting and the world view is very good. And the name of the protagonist is very good - Yu Si - it has a feeling of being unconventional, free from restraint, full of vitality, free and uninhibited - it is a name that you will never forget at one glance. I'm glad I came across this book when I first started writing online.

One of the few novels that are good-looking, sophisticated, thoughtful, intelligent, and logically rigorous, come on comrades, they are not in the false red spirit, but are truly the protagonists for the people and all living beings in the world.

The training system has various settings, the protagonist's heroic spirit space is integrated (there will not be the common problem of infinite flow and complexity), the world view is grand, and there is also a description of the development process of the training system. Friends who like a complete world view can read each chapter (the development process is in the extra chapter)