The Start of a Collapse of Heaven? It Doesn't Matter, My Sub-Professional Level Is Maxed Out

Don't miss it if you pass by, the hostess is sober, she must avenge her, she knows how to keep the green hills, and she is not afraid of running out of firewood. The heroine is a beautiful woman with high talent. The important thing is that she is a heroine who studies immortal literature! I just don't know if there will be a male protagonist. I'll withdraw if there is one. I haven't looked at it for a while. I looked at it because it had CP, so I withdrew it as a warning to those who like it without CP.

I'm so unaccustomed to it... This is probably Tomato's only serious female channel about cultivating immortality. There are no childish speeches, childish jokes, inexplicable group pets and many female competing love brains. The heroine is dedicated to cultivating immortality and waiting for revenge. I just finished reading the first volume to comment, and I am very satisfied with it. After all, I am still disappointed. I don't like the heroine's friends, such as those from the Zhou family, such as thieves. I feel that the heroine has no temper. She is happy-go-lucky, hello, me, hello, everyone. Anyone can be her friend [what] I thought I was reading a fantasy novel.

This book is really good. As a 2000-hour bookworm, I highly recommend reading it. Finally, I sincerely hope that the author will not finish the book. Author, one chapter in one day is simply not enough. The author is too short and weak. Can you update two chapters a day? [I'm about to cry]

I think it is a non-traditional novel. Although the heroine's experience bar is full, everything that happens in the story feels logical (at least more logical than what I have seen before), and it is not just a Long Aotian routine.

It's good-looking. The heroine has a strong heart and practices step by step. Gratitude and hatred are hidden in the heart. She is a genius. There is no popular relationship between the heroine and the male protagonist. The only shortcoming is that I need to read more. It is not enough to watch.

The writing is good. I finally saw that it is really difficult to upgrade a person who cultivates immortality. Many male and female protagonists in the immortal novel upgrade like a joke. In just one or two years, the golden elixir Yuanying becomes a god, surpassing those normal geniuses who have practiced for tens, hundreds, and thousands of years.

Wow! I found a good novel, the heroine has a lot of experience in making things or living life! Can it be simpler and narrower in scope? When can the heroine get her spiritual roots back? At this rate...! Is there a male protagonist? This kind of all-around female protagonist doesn't really want a male protagonist! However, most of the authors have written great heroine novels, but there is no male protagonist! No cpyyds! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]

I finished listening to the book, and I have to say that this book about cultivating immortals is really good. I don't know if the author is going to write a long novel, where the heroine conquers the world in one area or another. Anyway, I like this book very much, and I have read it.

It's quite nice to watch, and the setting has a bit of a visual feel to it from a male channel. It doesn't feel out of place if it's a female channel, it's quite natural. At present, the copywriting and content are consistent. I have been practicing and improving my side business, and my strength is also improving. If I have to say shortcomings, they are probably the academy mentioned in the article. Although I only have an intention and have not taken action and have not started writing, I personally don't like it. There is always a feeling of Douluo's academy system. The academy changes, and it seems that I have joined and not joined. The grand family of Xiu Xianwen has a feeling of being brought down. The ideological and operating model is a bit advanced and a bit backward. The two are not suitable to be included together. Overall, it's worth reading, and I look forward to the follow-up.

Orthodox cultivation of immortality. Recently, a lot of them are nonsense and make my head hurt. This article is biased toward men. The author's writing is very good. The heroine's golden fingers are not particularly wide open. Still quite reasonable. Basically, it relies on the heroine's own cultivation. But it seems like the world view is pretty big. . . At this pace, it will probably be over a million words. I don't know if the progress will be accelerated in the future. I really hope that CP will click Qingzhou. At present, it seems that there are not many feelings for Niwai. It's great to practice immortality with a CP. After all, friendship and love both enrich the journey of cultivating immortality. Help each other pursue the high road. As long as you don't indulge in it.

First time writing a book review. At present, there are more than 60 chapters. It is very interesting and I read it in one go. Good writing is rare in Tomato. The writing is very detailed and the plot is attractive. Now just waiting for the update. . . In pain.

It has a traditional system of cultivating immortals, but also has novel settings. It's super good-looking. That's why it's so slow. [Crying] Many people comment on the heroine, Holy Mother. I don't think so. The heroine is a normal person who has received modern education. When faced with people and things within her ability, of course she wants to do it, and her decisiveness is also obvious. I think this is a normal character who grew up in a loving family. There are many opportunities for the heroine, but it will only make people happy to watch, and will not be too much. Waiting for updates!

Yes, I like it very much, but there are a lot of psychological words. So far, the heroine has been steadily upgraded, and the plot is delicate. She is holding her own before her own abilities. She is not eager for revenge, does not do anything outrageous, and does not like to be awesome and coax her into killing everyone from the beginning.

Just read it once in a while, don't focus on reading [face covering] [face covering]. I have been reading this book these days. It is really good to watch. It is a traditional Goldfinger pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger for revenge. The heroine is a life player (but the fighting is not bad). The author really loves the Talisman Array. There are many chapters in the middle, writing more than 4,000 pages. The heroine is currently in the middle stage of foundation building, which is still very enjoyable, but the pace of the writing is a bit slow. Don't read it if you just like a fast pace. Anyway, I think it's quite enjoyable overall. The author also describes some details of cultivating immortals in detail, which is good (and then the progress becomes even slower). Overall, it's a good novel about cultivating immortals! (ʘᴗʘI can't even imagine how long it will take to finish this series...)

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I'm really good at reading books. The pace of this book is very steady and the author's writing skills are good. It's definitely written by someone with a big trumpet. I can't read the kind of fairy tales that are like blowing water. This book is steady and refreshing. It's really buried in Tomato. The author updates the article quickly. It's not enough to read😭😭😭😭😭

There is no cp, it is very cool, and the world view is very detailed. There are not many places for revenge, but there are enough occasions to show off and be cool. At the same time, it is not like the chaotic strength of the protagonist group in most immortal cultivation novels. In this novel, the strength gap between Nascent Soul, Golden Pill, and Foundation Establishment is very clearly described. The heroine's path of cultivation is also a long and smooth one. After reading it, I felt that I have to work hard and learn and progress down-to-earth. The ending is also very touching. If you like slow-paced and detailed descriptions, I highly recommend reading this book. I think the worldview is well constructed and vivid.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a traditional and good-looking novel about cultivating immortals. It feels like chasing male videos in the old days hahahahahahahahahahahahaha Although the heroine's cultivation is not as fast as in other novels, she is also steady, true and reliable. Although her revenge is not as fast as in other novels, the copy of Cultivation to Immortality is quite interesting. The author's writing style is also very good. Although there are times when the heroine feels a little too kind, but when I think about it, this is also the heroine's way of cultivating Taoism. The heart of Taoism is also part of the establishment of the heroine's image. I really gained something from reading it, and I feel it is worth 9 points or more. The author's wife is updating well, and I'm looking forward to readers following along! (The author's wife must not give up the trap [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]) The writing is really great, but the author may have gone to practice immortality, wait~~~

I didn't see enough, please give me a sequel! ! ! The author is really good at writing long stories, and the story is eloquent but not a running account. Every thing that appears in the previous article has a response in the later article, which makes people feel the author's ingenuity. The ending is really unusual. She is "coerced" by all living beings to save the world, but she is different from other heroines who save the world. While she is the pillar of support, she is also stimulating the people to follow their own path, which is great! The career line is like the so-called lotus law, which unfolds little by little and suddenly becomes clear, which is pleasing to the eye. The pace is not fast, but it is comfortable. (Readers who are looking forward to the emotional line may consider not reading it. After all, there is almost no emotional line [grievance]) Generally speaking, there are no big group portraits (I mean the protagonist group). Indeed, every new map has people accompanying it. Although it changes along the way, they are all wonderful "little people" [Sending Hearts]

It's pretty good. The system is relatively complete. The golden finger is also very open. It's just that the heroine's chance is too easy. This makes the novel feel a little less cool. Tomato Cultivation is one of the better-looking novels. If I have to say a shortcoming, it's also because of my personal preference. The heroine's friends contain too few women, and most of them are men.

It is a very old fairy tale, a female version, and a refreshing novel. It is quite good to read without using your brain. It means that some plots, character reactions, descriptions, etc. Are very cliched, but the writing is very coherent. Many of the heroine's reasons for deciding things will be written immediately, so it is actually quite enjoyable to read without using your brain. It should be cp-free, but I saw that in the end it was possible that if there were extra chapters and sequels, I might end up with that snake. However, when I first met this snake, I wanted to abandon the story. The ending is super rushed, and you may not be able to imagine how majestic it is until the end. In addition, the heroine returned to her original world at the end, which was well received. The heroine met very good teachers and classmates along the way, as well as stereotyped female supporting characters who were very talkative and looked down on the heroine's sour words. The good part was that they all got slapped in the face, but the bad thing was that they were too talkative and very annoying.

This is the first time I have seen such a plot trend. The protagonist will advance more slowly than the protagonists in other books. However, you can feel the mystery and shock of the extremely real world of cultivation... What a realistic script, so well written. It gives me a sense of overview of getting the ancient book in the world of cultivation and studying and reading it until I wake up. Oh my god. I'm not exaggerating, I really feel like this. It's like reading a novel that is a revised version of a Taoist book on cultivation. ⚠️If you like reading mindless books, you don't have to read it⚠️(You can try it for fear of getting bored) It can be packaged. It is definitely very interesting, and the plot is not boring/old-fashioned. It's just that the level rises slowly, but the foundation is laid thickly [Like]

Recommend! It will look better if you hold on until later. The heroine wears it directly from the game without a game panel, but it always feels like the heroine is still playing the game, especially the heroine's self-talk is more like the system reminder of the game: It's morning and you can set off, but the time is not up yet so you can wait. . . . When doing tasks like this, the system prompts you what to do first and what not to do before. When listening to novels, you always have the illusion that you are playing a game. In addition, the heroine design is very good. Some of the heroines I have seen before are either loners, or they will not save someone when someone on their side dies. They watch from the sidelines, and they call it training, some only have teachers or family members, and the others have nothing to do with them. They treat other people's life and death indifferently, and some are just like the Holy Mother. This heroine is very good, she is decisive in killing and not a nymphomaniac or a virgin. When encountering trouble, she will do her best to save people, which is very good!

It's a good read. I didn't expect that I actually prefer this kind of slow pace. I've read a lot of cool novels, but none of them made me interested in pursuing the ending. Every one of them ended after dozens of chapters. This book is very suitable for babies who like to read the slow pace of the upgrade flow. But Qingzhou made me abandon the novel in the middle. I was inexplicably annoyed by him. Some of the descriptions of his grievances were very incomprehensible and disgusting. It would be perfect to keep him away. I picked it up today and read the third volume directly. Please don't have a male protagonist. Otherwise, the only novel I can read will leave me [crying] I just love watching Luo Liba Suo [grieved]

After reading this book, the most intuitive feeling is that the rhythm is great. It's been a long time since I've read such a traditional online novel, and I really enjoyed reading it these past few days. The author's control of the narrative rhythm is very precise, and all the foreshadowings laid out are finally explained clearly one by one. There are no obvious omissions, and there is no sense of forced smoothness. This kind of "response to everything" content makes the whole book enjoyable and practical to read. What impressed me even more was the treatment of the supporting characters in the book. There is no permanent protagonist group. The supporting characters who appear at different stages are just like the friends we meet in real life - they are close at a certain period and then gradually drift apart, but like-minded people will always appear on the common journey. The author did not try to keep everyone, but calmly let them go. But even so, when the protagonist returns to his hometown, he can still remember his old friends and relatives. Real memory does not mean remembering the grand events, but remembering the small connections related to life - such as paying homage to Chen Er's parents, such as meeting Master Jiyu in the market, such as practicing hard and finally getting the opportunity to spend some time with his family in the mortal world. What I admire most is the author's writing power. Even the characters with only one or two chapters are vivid and three-dimensional, with flesh and blood. They are not tools to advance the plot, but real people who have existed. The protagonists only get a glimpse into their lives, but their stories extend beyond the storyline. I thought it would end in a hurry, but the ending made me cry. It's not deliberately sensational, but it's more powerful. Just like a real farewell in life, it's just a word, a look, an ordinary turn, that's all the farewell. The stamina is too great. Long after closing the book, the characters in the story seem to be continuing to live in a parallel time and space. This kind of aftertaste is probably the charm of a good work. Looking forward to more works from the author

It's the best [giving heart] without CP. Although there are a few that are a bit ambiguous, but overall it's within the acceptable range. I like Shi Yu's character very much, and I'm curious about the story of the second senior brother and his aunt, but I feel like the second senior brother is gone [I'm about to cry]

It's a great book. It feels very comfortable to read. Everything is logical and every part is very detailed, especially some of the views on cultivating immortals. It makes people sink into it, as if I have witnessed everything beside the heroine. It is not a traditional upgrade novel. The main character upgrades slowly but other parts are full, so it will not make people feel boring. It is rare to see a book that fits the title of the book. The heroine has many small climaxes one after another, which is very enjoyable. The heroine herself is also a very good person. Although she hides her beauty, her unique charm can fall to both men and women. This is something I like very much. When I read this kind of book, I like books that do not mythologise the male characters and focus on portraying the heroine. I love the author so much [blowing kiss] Now that I have read the third volume, I am very much looking forward to what follows. One thing is very important! Don't leave comments to read it. Sometimes it's really hard to watch, even though I was watching it well. I've finished reading it. I love you so much, the author. It's so well written. I enjoyed reading the next few chapters. Can you please start a new book? I feel uncomfortable after reading it now [crying]

The pace of this book is relatively slow. Although the heroine has met many mentors and friends along the way, overall it still feels like she is wandering alone. However, many passerby characters who have only appeared in a few chapters or even a few strokes in the author's writing are also very vivid and charming, rather than being stereotyped as good or bad as in many books. Because the pace in the early stages was too slow, when I read the last few dozen chapters, I was a little worried that the author had forgotten some of the previous foreshadowings. Fortunately, the author finally got it right. I was a little moved by the sublimation at the end.

It's really good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking! ! The heroine is a master of the modern holographic immortality cultivation game. The experience bar of the talisman array weapon pill is full, and the spiritual veins of the soul-transportation immortality world are pulled out. With the road of revenge as her goal, the heroine strives to become stronger. Although the progress of the practice is relatively slow, I really finished it without realizing it! ! The first 250 chapters are Qi refining, the next 250 chapters are foundation building, and the last 50 chapters are golden elixir + revenge + saving the world. The last bit is not as good looking as the previous one. The only pity is that the article is too short. The author is really suitable for writing about ascending to several worlds, the kind of traditional immortality article with thousands of chapters. Because it took 500 chapters just to write about Qi refining and foundation building (praise) I can't get enough of it. I can't get enough of it.

Overall, it's a pretty good read. I originally wanted to give up the story and give it two stars because of the slow pace and because I really hated Qingzhou. However, I thought it wouldn't be a good review if I didn't finish it, so I finished it anyway. It's good that there is no male protagonist in the ending. I think it would be a constraint for Shi Yu if he has a partner. The author's writing style is also very good, but the pace in the early stage is slow and I think many people can't stand it. Waiting for the female protagonist to dig out that person's spiritual veins is like I was waiting for him back then. Bai Qian has plain eyes... Generally speaking, this book has no shortcomings except for the slow pace and the charming characters. The writing style feels a bit like the writing style of early male comics, which is like Perfect World/Douluo Continent, and the world view is relatively large.

It has the feeling of ancient fairy tales. You randomly save a person and you are an ancient bloodline. The plot includes others being disdainful→slapping in the face→changing your disdain in another place→slapping in the face. In the end, it turns out that you are the savior again. The plot is very smooth and the wording is very cultivating. I don't really like the ending, so I'll rate it this way. Keep up the good work.