You Asked Me to Attend the Awards, and I Brought Reba to Munch on Chips

I hope the cake can go further and further, and there are endless possibilities in the future.

This author is a very nice person and always answers all questions. What should I do if I want to marry him for no reason? Shy and hidden ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ

Newly opened? It's very beautiful (*^.^*) Come on! Why do you have so little! (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡)

One page for leisure and entertainment, one page before eating and sleeping are both good

To be honest, I personally feel that the four stars are enough. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but considering the writing problems caused by the new author's lack of proficiency, I still give four stars as encouragement. Let's talk about the problem: the supporting characters are somewhat realistic. . . Embarrassing, are the reactions of the supporting characters sometimes exaggerated to some of the less funny jokes? The second is that there are not many laughs. We can speed up the plot to make the plot more compact. In this way, we can increase the density of the laughs without having to make it bluntly funny. Finally, I hope that the author will write a good book and work hard to bring good works to everyone. I would like to send the author two reminders here. I must write well 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I read two chapters later, and I retract my previous comment. For this book, just for the first 20 chapters, I can only give it three stars, and no more.

As far as the 58 chapters are concerned, the writing is very good, very funny, with a lot of laughs, but not dense, very nice, it can make you laugh and ignore the details and unreasonable places. Although there is no system, it is better than having a system.

The plot is well written and the writing is smooth, but there is a fatal problem. When you write, you must pay attention to checking the information before writing. So far, I have seen two mistakes. The first place is the performance at the temple fair. The flute is not a national instrument, but a Western instrument. It is only suitable for playing indoors. If it is a little far away from the outdoors, it will be almost silent (of course, if there is no sound around, you can definitely hear it. For example, don't take it seriously). It is completely incompatible with an occasion like a temple fair. I have taken the level 6 flute test myself, and I know it very well. The second part is the piece of pottery. Tang Sancai refers to the glaze color on the pottery during the Tang Dynasty. It is generally used to refer to Tang Dynasty painted pottery. If there is no external color, it is actually the same as ordinary pottery. It does not mean that Tang Sancai is made with special techniques. 🍉

Good luck to the author.

Come on, come on [sending my heart], it's so funny and down to earth 👍

[I have seen the latest chapter sixty-seven so far] Although there are quite a few novels of this type, there are very few that allow me to read the latest chapters in one go. It's really fun, I can say that I laughed from the beginning to the end, and it was very enjoyable to watch. There is no cruel, angry, or slap-in-the-face plot. The little fresh meat in the first few chapters becomes the protagonist's little fanboy. Come on, author, and hope to keep up the good work in the future.