Naruto: Reforming the Shinobi World, Starting with Konoha

When I first saw it, I thought it was another novel based on a module. The author wrote a truly powerful time traveler, a time traveler with a red will. However, there are still some problems. Senju Tobirama's character is not one to kill an Uchiha when he meets one. He is still optimistic about the Uchiha mirror. He has also studied the Sharingan and knows that Uchiha is a clan of love. So far, it looks like there is only this little flaw It's not good. Many characters have different personalities from the original work and have been changed in a mess.

Red can be used, but it is just a fantasy after all. The extraordinary world determines that it will not last long, and red will always dissipate at the end of the book.

Big cheers for the author! Long live the author! I would like to trouble the author to update it again. (/ω＼)Shy

Now that this book is finished, how about a trip to the world of One Piece?

It's okay, what can I say? Minato Namikaze is a little overwhelmed by hatred. I didn't see him like this in the original work, but Minato Namikaze didn't see Naruto's life in the original work. Minato Namikaze in the original world in the article can understand it, but Tobirama Senju doesn't. No matter how extreme his personality is that he can't tolerate all the Uchiha clan, he should have at least some sense, right? Such a smart person would not slander Uchiha like this, but instead analyze all aspects of Uchiha. Even if Uchiha does something wrong, just spray it with his mouth. All kinds of smearing are too much. Although he doesn't hate Uchiha, it doesn't mean he doesn't like it. Uchiha Kagami... It seems that Uchiha Shisui has a good character, but it is a pity that he was brainwashed by the so-called will of fire. But he still has some sense. As a grandfather, Uchiha Kagami's character should not be like this.

Overall, it is very good. If the rating of this book is high enough, then it is very likely to be used as a teaching material. After all, this completely explains the world of reform and non-reform, and the current world and the original world. The current world has reached a relatively fair level, while the original world is constantly being persecuted. Those people all hope to go to that world. You have also seen the people in Naruto. Many people hope for peace, but the methods to achieve peace are different. People in despair, what they hope most is the existence of hope, just like a drowning person, he will definitely grab a rope to pull up. You said Yes, people's desires are endless, but people have experienced the pain of despair and being squeezed. When their status is high, they forget their own pain. However, some people still think about the pain before, and think that there are people who were tortured like themselves before. He is afraid that he will fall to this point one time. , They will not accept it if they fall to those situations again. If there is no chance to rise again, they can only change the gap between them and the common people. If the gap is small, they will not change much after they fall down. They will be content with the status quo, but human desires are endless. Over time, no matter what the law is? The iron laws will be slowly exploited by those people, and the laws and iron laws will be modified by him again, becoming more perfect, and education will become more perfect, until it becomes a world of selfless dedication. Such a world lacks human greed, but people in such a world cannot be called human beings. That can only be called gods. At that point, technology will definitely explode, but there are always some gaps that cannot be seen

The subject matter of this book is good, but the author still needs to improve it and arrange the plot to be more logical. For example: because the current Uzumaki Naruto is not dead because of Namikaze Minato, his surname should not be Uzumaki. Come on, author

It's unique in Tomato, but it would be nice to have more contrast and less dialogue. The author is really bragging and licking, and the logic is not good, so he uses private goods to add Naruto and Hokage like crazy

How to say I finished reading it before I knew it, and it was so satisfying, so ridiculously satisfying. This book has not yet started to be recommended, and now only a few thousand people have read it. If you keep writing, let alone make a fortune. But I at least think it will be no problem for the author to earn 100,000+ per month once it becomes popular. This book is indeed well written. I just ask the author not to abandon the book from the perspective of interests. The popularity of this book may be slow to rise, but it will eventually pick up.

Therefore, Naruto's success has been recognized by people, and Naruto's failure has caused people to hate Naruto even more. Naruto should not save the world. Only the destroyed world will know how to cherish it, so let the world perish. In the original version of Naruto, Naruto must have suffered from Shisui's other gods, otherwise people who grew up like that would have gone crazy.