Naruto**********

When I first saw it, I thought it was another novel based on a module. The author wrote a truly powerful time traveler, a time traveler with a red will. However, there are still some problems. Senju Tobirama's character is not one to kill an Uchiha when he meets one. He is still optimistic about the Uchiha mirror. He has also studied the Sharingan and knows that Uchiha is a clan of love. So far, it looks like there is only this little flaw It's not good. Many characters have different personalities from the original work and have been changed in a mess.

Red can be used, but it is just a fantasy after all. The extraordinary world determines that it will not last long, and red will always dissipate at the end of the book.

Big cheers for the author! Long live the author! I would like to trouble the author to update it again. (/ω＼)Shy

Now that this book is finished, how about a trip to the world of One Piece?

It's okay, what can I say? Minato Namikaze is a little overwhelmed by hatred. I didn't see him like this in the original work, but Minato Namikaze didn't see Naruto's life in the original work. Minato Namikaze in the original world in the article can understand it, but Tobirama Senju doesn't. No matter how extreme his personality is that he can't tolerate all the Uchiha clan, he should have at least some sense, right? Such a smart person would not slander Uchiha like this, but instead analyze all aspects of Uchiha. Even if Uchiha does something wrong, just spray it with his mouth. All kinds of smearing are too much. Although he doesn't hate Uchiha, it doesn't mean he doesn't like it. Uchiha Kagami... It seems that Uchiha Shisui has a good character, but it is a pity that he was brainwashed by the so-called will of fire. But he still has some sense. As a grandfather, Uchiha Kagami's character should not be like this.

Overall, it is very good. If the rating of this book is high enough, then it is very likely to be used as a teaching material. After all, this completely explains the world of reform and non-reform, and the current world and the original world. The current world has reached a relatively fair level, while the original world is constantly being persecuted. Those people all hope to go to that world. You have also seen the people in Naruto. Many people hope for peace, but the methods to achieve peace are different. People in despair, what they hope most is the existence of hope, just like a drowning person, he will definitely grab a rope to pull up. You said Yes, people's desires are endless, but people have experienced the pain of despair and being squeezed. When their status is high, they forget their own pain. However, some people still think about the pain before, and think that there are people who were tortured like themselves before. He is afraid that he will fall to this point one time. , They will not accept it if they fall to those situations again. If there is no chance to rise again, they can only change the gap between them and the common people. If the gap is small, they will not change much after they fall down. They will be content with the status quo, but human desires are endless. Over time, no matter what the law is? The iron laws will be slowly exploited by those people, and the laws and iron laws will be modified by him again, becoming more perfect, and education will become more perfect, until it becomes a world of selfless dedication. Such a world lacks human greed, but people in such a world cannot be called human beings. That can only be called gods. At that point, technology will definitely explode, but there are always some gaps that cannot be seen

It's unique in Tomato, but it would be nice to have more contrast and less dialogue. The author is really bragging and licking, and the logic is not good, so he uses private goods to add Naruto and Hokage like crazy

The subject matter of this book is good, but the author still needs to improve it and arrange the plot to be more logical. For example: because the current Uzumaki Naruto is not dead because of Namikaze Minato, his surname should not be Uzumaki. Come on, author

How to say I finished reading it before I knew it, and it was so satisfying, so ridiculously satisfying. This book has not yet started to be recommended, and now only a few thousand people have read it. If you keep writing, let alone make a fortune. But I at least think it will be no problem for the author to earn 100,000+ per month once it becomes popular. This book is indeed well written. I just ask the author not to abandon the book from the perspective of interests. The popularity of this book may be slow to rise, but it will eventually pick up.

Therefore, Naruto's success has been recognized by people, and Naruto's failure has caused people to hate Naruto even more. Naruto should not save the world. Only the destroyed world will know how to cherish it, so let the world perish. In the original version of Naruto, Naruto must have suffered from Shisui's other gods, otherwise people who grew up like that would have gone crazy.

The author can write more deeply. With nuclear fusion and quantum communication, we can develop into the microscopic world. Particle collisions are started, and the processing scale is slowly dragged into nanometers, and then atoms. At this point, chakra and natural energy can be abandoned.

Notice, your spirit is worthy of our praise, but your actual actions are relatively short. I hope that comrades will correct the shortcomings of short actions and update 10 chapters a day as soon as possible to better serve the people!

I think it's well written. I still prefer peace to war without chaos. Those who have never experienced the cruelty of war or seen the cruelty of history, but who travel there every day and think about it endlessly, might as well read this meaningful novel. Although it is more interesting to me, it may not be a good thing for those who want to travel through Naruto and conquer the world, but cannot achieve peace in the end. [Almost crying][smile]

Although the character image has some problems, fortunately, the plot line, the collision between the original world and the current world, the story of the ups and downs of the current world, and the uprising of the people in the original world... Made my blood boil with excitement.

The best Naruto fanfic so far! ! !

Although this book is very confusing, I don't care anymore because my body is already pineapple and pineapple.

Except for some problems with the character at the front, it's pretty good.

I was tired at first, but after reading a few more chapters, I started to feel better. I hope the author can work harder.

Very good, there is no need to pursue the original work, the novel is just a second version. I think it's pretty good, but it's a bit sparse and not enough to watch. If you keep pursuing the original work, you won't be able to surpass it. Since it is a comparison, there are always some differences.

Just one sentence: Great Stalin Ula! ! !

Very good, I have never seen this kind of Naruto

It's great to watch, but I still want to see them conquer the stars and the sea... Anyway, what's next?

Every day I get up early and go to work late at night, and read your novels at night, and I feel inexplicably beautiful.

Come on, please update soon. As long as it's not under supervision or bad, I will always support it.

I think this is a very meaningful book for me, covering a lot, as well as the struggle of a revolutionary and the happiness of the people [Salute]

It's not enough, and I really like this kind of novel. Not only can I see how our country developed (although there will be deviations, but it's not bad), but I can also watch Naruto. It's really good. Come on

Come on! It's a wonderful book. I hope it can be updated to the finale smoothly. Good luck to the author!

After watching it, my heart was greatly affected. The combination of animation and reality, the collision of ideals and concepts, what impressed me was not the passion and strength of the young man, but the heart of shouting for the people and devoting to the people.

All I can say is that the author created something very new, but it was very successful.

I feel like this is the most exciting novel I have ever read! ! It's super interesting, because I've never read a Naruto novel about reforming the ninja world. It's really exciting! ! !