Pirates: Becoming Stronger Starting from Shuoyue Village

Five stars, the author will continue to maintain this kind of writing style. Don't be distracted. Take your time and your results will get better and better.

The author may be able to add some combat situations, or delete some boring daily routines (>ω<), come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Yes, it's better written than many Pirates fics, and the plot is better set up. I just hope it doesn't collapse later. I hope the author won't pay too much attention to rumors, which are just the result of other people's jealousy. Of course, I also hope that the author can adopt some better opinions and combine them for better results.

It's nice to watch, but joining the navy was something I didn't expect. I thought the protagonist would be a pirate or a lone swordsman.

Come on, author! , In fact, the combat power you wrote about is not actually broken. Don't think about it for a moment, now that Luffy is 19 years old and his strength is comparable to that of an emperor. In the Onigashima chapter, he repeated sit-ups three times in a row without saying anything. As long as the author writes a few more chapters every day, that will be fine (it is recommended that each chapter should be at least 6,000 words)

Emmmm He is a great general when he comes out of the mountain. Needless to say!

Very good! The best pirate fanfic I have seen 😁

I have read a lot of One Piece fan fiction, and this one is very good.

There are some small flaws, but the flaws are not outweighed. In terms of the plot, it is quite reasonable. Some places are not well thought out. After all, even the old thief Kishimoto will forget his own settings, but it is okay when viewed as a fan.

I just wanted to see how long I watched it

The author writes more about space and swords. After all, space cutting is quite powerful. If you lack a heart, I am afraid that you will be proud.

It's the first time I've seen a Devil Fruit user soaking their feet. They'll be weak. At this moment, there is a large basin in Tia's office. The basin is filled with deep blue sea water. Dia's feet were currently soaked in the sea water. A strong feeling of weakness spread from the soles of the feet soaked in seawater to all the limbs, making Dedia feel strange.

The logic is rigorous, the plot is good, and the battle scenes are very graphic. It is one of the few fanfics with detailed and reasonable descriptions of battles. It is very nice. Keep it up, come on＾0＾~! [Learned]

You can write. I don't care what the settings are. After all, if you write the same content as the anime, then what else is there to read? As the saying goes, the strong flavor is difficult to adjust. There is always someone you like. Come on!

I personally like this kind of novel. The protagonist values ​​love and righteousness, and does not hesitate to save his friends. He is also very free, and is not absolutely righteous. Similar to Kizaru, he likes to fight with strong men, and his strength improves very steadily. You must read to the end. Please read it and don't jump to the next chapter to comment. The writing is very good, and it should not be left out. The author must persist. I just don't know why I eat shadow fruit. Can the author give me an answer?

I think it's okay... That's the question I'm very confused about. In the original work, Garp obviously has ceiling-to-ceiling combat power. Why didn't he teach Luffy and the others? If Luffy and Ace's talent had been learned since he was young and went to sea, he would be so weak [facepalm][facepalm] How can I put it? This combat power system has collapsed too much. I won't say it.

Personally, I think it's great. I highly recommend it. Just watch it without thinking. If you don't want to watch it, just leave. There's no need to create a sense of presence for yourself and write bad reviews. Come on, author [like]

I hope the author can continue writing It sucks, in my opinion

Very good. I suggest the author not to do things for the Tianlong people.

To be honest in the later period, he was almost like a god. The proportion of fruit abilities was too much, and to be honest, the bug-like ability of cutting space was simply unsolvable. Who else could survive after losing his head except Bucky? Moreover, in the later stages of Pirates, the proportion of domineering is relatively high. Fruits and other things are auxiliary. Otherwise, if the fruit is so useful, why doesn't Roger eat it?

Come on, author, this book is very suitable to my taste, so don't let it end and don't stop updating it. I'm giving it five stars here. It's great, but Momonosuke was written to death later on, why shouldn't he give it five stars?

This is one of the better Pirates fanfics I have read recently, and I support it with five stars.

It looks good, but I don't feel it's that slow-burning (it's mentioned in the introduction to the book). But it's also very beautiful [Code]

@ Cold Hami Melon Author, write astringent, write more, this is the wish of the majority of readers [smile][smile][smile][smile]

To be honest, it's okay, but it doesn't feel like a slow-heat type. Anyway, it's okay. I'll read it as a cool article.

Author, please don't kill my Kuina, it would be better if I support you to continue,,վ^վ,,

This is really pretty, okay! That's Shanks at the back. His hand shouldn't be broken. At this time,

Hahaha interesting

Very nice, come on author

Come on, no matter how hard the storm is, stick to your goals.