Another World*******

A little problem, but nothing major

It's pretty good. I have some suggestions for the author. For example, you can read another book "Handbook of Conquest of Different Worlds" for reference. I also hope that the author can describe the background more. For example, the emergence of magicians will definitely hinder the development of productivity and form a special political system. You can refer to "Alien: The Rise of the Industrial Empire" to improve the world view. In addition, in order to equalize the strength level of both parties, it can be more reasonable. For example, some magic can create electromagnetic fields and weaken kinetic energy. In order to survive, the monsters in it will evolve hard carapace with high chromium content. If the power of a rifle bullet is equivalent to that of a high-level magician, then the animal must have the same strength if it wants to stay alive. It's also possible that animals can do magic, but with significant limitations.

A good book. The author writes it for the first time. I don't understand many things, but he will listen to suggestions. He is a rare interactive author.

Did the author refer to Fantasy Self-Defense Force? I have been looking for this type of book and finally someone has written it. Come on, author [laughs][laughs] The author is careless. The advantages of modern science and technology are not reflected at all. There is also the power of modern weapons. If you don't know, you can look for popular science videos on this aspect. It can be said that as long as it is a carbon-based organism, there is nothing that cannot be eliminated. Even with the current level of science and technology, it can crush the Middle Ages. The gap between civilizations cannot be bridged [face covering]

Although there is a slight problem, it is not a big problem. It is rare to see this kind of book on Tomato, and it is very suitable for me [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

The writing is pretty good, but the author needs to work harder. There are many areas for improvement in writing and plot. Is this book like a dark room?

Nice looking, quite interesting

So far there are no major problems, the author keeps working hard

I like it very much. It's well written. Thumbs up.

Take a closer look, it's really wonderful. The author's descriptions of some scenes are very detailed and vivid

To be honest, there is a show of this type, it's pretty good [like] It's Fantasy Self-Defense Force

Okay, okay, the subject matter is quite novel and there is nothing toxic about it at the moment.

I've tried the poison, it looks good.

I hope you won't send it. It's national wear.

This kind of subject matter is still relatively rare, and it is still acceptable at present, but there is an obvious word count, and some tone is not important. It has appeared several times.