(Villain + system + cultivating immortals + cool articles + sweet articles + pua + anti-routine + invincibility + the mastermind behind the scenes)
There is a plot inside: the training of a young swordsman, the heroine is still a pitiful little girl, sprinkled with sugar, and the pure love warrior of the Virgin reads carefully.
I, Dong Xuanluo, am actually the next stepping stone for the male protagonist?
The Lord acts as a matchmaker and marries the heroine to me, but the hero jumps out and wants to slap me in the face?
I can't defeat the male protagonist, so why can't I poach him?
What age is this? There is no such thing as "pua" when it comes to licking dogs.
Let the heroine feel what "extreme pulling" is, what "spiritual internal friction" is, and what "pua" is!
The fury from the chosen female partner is +233, +66...
Very good, I just like the way you look like you're angry but there's nothing you can do about it.
After ten draws in a row, I got "Crisis Management and Risk Hedging (Quick Course)"...
God can control me, but you can also control who the heroine falls in love with?
Dongxuanluo's slogan is:
As long as the hoe is wielded well, there is no corner that cannot be dug down.
Since ancient times, true love cannot be retained, only tricks can win people's hearts!
False villain: Kill him, kill him, kill him until his blood flows like rivers, and his head rolls around. Those who are dissatisfied, kill him. Those who are unhappy, kill him, and those who disobey him, kill him.
Real villains: treat guests, behead people, accept them as dogs, kill people and kill people. PUA heroine, the chosen one of nrt, the "Poké Ball" subdues the wild heroine, allowing the heroine to defeat the hero.
Realm: Heaven, Earth, Saint, Zun, Emperor, Emperor, King, Marquis, General, Prime Minister, Master, Master, Disciple.
Reader comments
It's very interesting. I hope the author writes slowly and doesn't make the story about a child of destiny going offline after a few chapters and being invincible all the way. It's really boring. There are too many articles about villains that have been promoted all the way. A bunch of "Child of Destiny" was written like cannon fodder and disappeared soon. It's really boring. Watching the plot slowly develop like this is much more interesting than pushing forward. I hope the development of the plot will not be driven by the continuous introduction of new female characters. There are too many stud stories that collect harems along the way. The characters want to stay within a suitable scope, and the plot is written by exploring the stories of existing characters. Keep up the good work, author.
After reading it, there are some typos and some sentences that are not so smooth, which affects the perception. It is best for the author to read it by himself after finishing writing. Then I felt that my combat power collapsed. It was unreasonable for Tian Zhenzhen to easily cut the arm of the king at the master level. It is unreasonable to kill the arm of the king in the three realms. No matter how skilled you are, the power gap is there. It is outrageous to cross the four realms.
There are relatively few people watching it, and the ratings are relatively low. What should I say? In my opinion, this book is quite good, but some parts are quite shocking. However, as you slowly see, it becomes more strategic. The author, some of the abstract descriptions used to joke are still very funny. The writing style is much better than most Tomato books. You have to look at the content to be honest. It seems to me that there is no problem with the logic and it is relatively good-looking. There are no bad points, the writing is quite interesting. He writes it bit by bit, and you feel so good all at once. It's nothing interesting. This kind of thing suits my taste. If you don't like it you can leave but there is no need to give a bad review. This is an interesting book.
Wow, it's really hard to find a good and refreshing novel. A refreshing novel also requires brains. Compared with those mindless novels that treat readers as fools, this one is really much better! It's hard, I like this kind of book so much. The author's writing is very suitable to my taste. I stayed up late for a few days to finish reading it. It's not enough, it's really not enough. I just hope that the author will not stop updating it! I really like it. It's hard to find such interesting articles.... I also just read the comments. The author really made me cry to death. Some of the points I particularly like have been complained about by others. It's okay that some of them haven't been changed, and some of them have actually been changed! I cried to death... [Crying] For example, the one where a woman disguises herself as a man was very exciting when I first read it, "Yes! It must be a girl!" But then I saw that it was really a man in the back, and I didn't understand it. Not only did it not explain many places, but it also made the article seem stiff and unnatural, and made me feel constipated, which was uncomfortable, but it's not a big problem to skip it. There is also that girl who likes to speak ancient prose, I really, really like her! I feel really sad when I see someone commenting that they want the author to change it. Xin Hao probably didn't change it because of the outline or a lot of content. I'm really glad that there won't be many scenes later, but it's not a big problem. The author writes well. I really like the author's story, the protagonist, the supporting characters, and the content. Wow, I love it so much!
Finally, I hope that the author will not give up on the idea of better or worse, ball ball! Ball ball! It's so hard to find a book I like [I'm about to cry]. Another thing is, stick to your own ideas and don't always change the content because of other people's opinions. There will always be people who like it. It's impossible to cater to everyone's preferences. Some people hate it while others love it. The author can just write it himself!
4⭐️Grain and grass, not a brainless villain template article. It can be seen that the author wants to construct his own world system. Although it is rough, it does not affect the overall content of the article. There are excellent character interactive plots. At least the characters are written with flesh and blood.
Literary Opera 4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Martial Arts 2⭐️⭐️
Um, it suddenly disappeared. I was caught off guard. I haven't seen enough.
Overall, it's good. I love watching it anyway. I'll keep reading. Let's do some extras. I didn't understand the low score. Apart from the ending being too fast and too abrupt, there's no other bad points. The characterization is also very vivid. At least I can remember it. Alas, I hope the author can have a good collision of ideas.
It looks good, but PUA takes up a little less text, basically 15%
85% is taken up by fantasy descriptions.
Not bad, keep up the good work!
It's a good book. The author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
The writing is pretty good, not so brainless, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง
The writing is pretty good, keep it up!
The more I read, the more exciting it becomes. Really, the character positioning is well grasped. In my opinion, I can't fault it. It's very exciting. Good luck to the author.
I haven't seen enough yet [covers face] Hurry up and write, I'll give you a higher rating
Ah, why did it end so inexplicably? The rest of it felt so fast.
Interesting support remains unchanged
Not bad, the protagonist has a brain!
Read it in one day, not bad
Except for a little mess, everything is fine
Ouyang can't die.
It's not easy to make, so I give it five stars!
It's a bit bad in the early stage, but it's quite enjoyable in the later stage.
Can be seen
From a general point of view, Shangjia
That's right. After reading this, I still haven't understood the realm.
The character design is good, but after a sudden rise, I knew it was going to end, and finally it went back to the cycle [I understand]
Come on! Hope to see this book finished.
The writing so far is still very good, keep up the good work
It's a pretty good novel, and the author's ideas are also very good. You can read it (the ending is too fast, but it comes full circle)
It's not bad. The ending is a bit rushed, but it's rounded off. Compared to other writers who have interrupted the book, it's considered a more conscientious author.
Not bad, not bad. Although I feel that the combat power system of this book is lower than others, the names are better than the other two.
This novel has a lot of Naruto elements
It's very interesting. I hope the author writes slowly and doesn't make the story about a child of destiny going offline after a few chapters and being invincible all the way. It's really boring. There are too many articles about villains that have been promoted all the way. A bunch of "Child of Destiny" was written like cannon fodder and disappeared soon. It's really boring. Watching the plot slowly develop like this is much more interesting than pushing forward. I hope the development of the plot will not be driven by the continuous introduction of new female characters. There are too many stud stories that collect harems along the way. The characters want to stay within a suitable scope, and the plot is written by exploring the stories of existing characters. Keep up the good work, author. After reading it, there are some typos and some sentences that are not so smooth, which affects the perception. It is best for the author to read it by himself after finishing writing. Then I felt that my combat power collapsed. It was unreasonable for Tian Zhenzhen to easily cut the arm of the king at the master level. It is unreasonable to kill the arm of the king in the three realms. No matter how skilled you are, the power gap is there. It is outrageous to cross the four realms.
There are relatively few people watching it, and the ratings are relatively low. What should I say? In my opinion, this book is quite good, but some parts are quite shocking. However, as you slowly see, it becomes more strategic. The author, some of the abstract descriptions used to joke are still very funny. The writing style is much better than most Tomato books. You have to look at the content to be honest. It seems to me that there is no problem with the logic and it is relatively good-looking. There are no bad points, the writing is quite interesting. He writes it bit by bit, and you feel so good all at once. It's nothing interesting. This kind of thing suits my taste. If you don't like it you can leave but there is no need to give a bad review. This is an interesting book.
Wow, it's really hard to find a good and refreshing novel. A refreshing novel also requires brains. Compared with those mindless novels that treat readers as fools, this one is really much better! It's hard, I like this kind of book so much. The author's writing is very suitable to my taste. I stayed up late for a few days to finish reading it. It's not enough, it's really not enough. I just hope that the author will not stop updating it! I really like it. It's hard to find such interesting articles.... I also just read the comments. The author really made me cry to death. Some of the points I particularly like have been complained about by others. It's okay that some of them haven't been changed, and some of them have actually been changed! I cried to death... [Crying] For example, the one where a woman disguises herself as a man was very exciting when I first read it, "Yes! It must be a girl!" But then I saw that it was really a man in the back, and I didn't understand it. Not only did it not explain many places, but it also made the article seem stiff and unnatural, and made me feel constipated, which was uncomfortable, but it's not a big problem to skip it. There is also that girl who likes to speak ancient prose, I really, really like her! I feel really sad when I see someone commenting that they want the author to change it. Xin Hao probably didn't change it because of the outline or a lot of content. I'm really glad that there won't be many scenes later, but it's not a big problem. The author writes well. I really like the author's story, the protagonist, the supporting characters, and the content. Wow, I love it so much! Finally, I hope that the author will not give up on the idea of better or worse, ball ball! Ball ball! It's so hard to find a book I like [I'm about to cry]. Another thing is, stick to your own ideas and don't always change the content because of other people's opinions. There will always be people who like it. It's impossible to cater to everyone's preferences. Some people hate it while others love it. The author can just write it himself!
4⭐️Grain and grass, not a brainless villain template article. It can be seen that the author wants to construct his own world system. Although it is rough, it does not affect the overall content of the article. There are excellent character interactive plots. At least the characters are written with flesh and blood. Literary Opera 4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Martial Arts 2⭐️⭐️
Um, it suddenly disappeared. I was caught off guard. I haven't seen enough. Overall, it's good. I love watching it anyway. I'll keep reading. Let's do some extras. I didn't understand the low score. Apart from the ending being too fast and too abrupt, there's no other bad points. The characterization is also very vivid. At least I can remember it. Alas, I hope the author can have a good collision of ideas.
It looks good, but PUA takes up a little less text, basically 15% 85% is taken up by fantasy descriptions.
Not bad, keep up the good work!
It's a good book. The author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
The writing is pretty good, not so brainless, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง
The writing is pretty good, keep it up!
The more I read, the more exciting it becomes. Really, the character positioning is well grasped. In my opinion, I can't fault it. It's very exciting. Good luck to the author.
I haven't seen enough yet [covers face] Hurry up and write, I'll give you a higher rating
Ah, why did it end so inexplicably? The rest of it felt so fast.
Interesting support remains unchanged
Not bad, the protagonist has a brain!
Read it in one day, not bad
Except for a little mess, everything is fine
Ouyang can't die.
It's not easy to make, so I give it five stars!
It's a bit bad in the early stage, but it's quite enjoyable in the later stage.
Can be seen From a general point of view, Shangjia
That's right. After reading this, I still haven't understood the realm.
The character design is good, but after a sudden rise, I knew it was going to end, and finally it went back to the cycle [I understand]
Come on! Hope to see this book finished.
The writing so far is still very good, keep up the good work
It's a pretty good novel, and the author's ideas are also very good. You can read it (the ending is too fast, but it comes full circle)
It's not bad. The ending is a bit rushed, but it's rounded off. Compared to other writers who have interrupted the book, it's considered a more conscientious author.
Not bad, not bad. Although I feel that the combat power system of this book is lower than others, the names are better than the other two. This novel has a lot of Naruto elements
Fortunately, I can give it four stars.
Damn, it's rare to find a good book.