I Got the Investment System at the Beginning and I Became Invincible.

Could there be less monologue? It doesn't look interesting, but the subject matter is still good.

OK, a little bit less

It's a good system to create a new system.

Really nice to look at. Only. I... I finally came across a good book. Just wanted to take a closer look. Just finish it for me. You can say. It's well written, I won't deny it. But…but. I give it to you. To use an analogy, for example, when you are writing an essay, you write an opening that allows the teacher to give you full marks. The result was a hasty ending. Don't understand. But this is indeed the most interesting book I've read among all the investments in The Chosen One, so I give you full marks. I hope the next work won't be so anticlimactic, okay? The author is great

It's a good and exciting story. I don't know if it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. I hope it doesn't turn into a stud male protagonist and his 108 little wives.

It's pretty good, but I feel like I can't express many of my talents. There are so many invincible talents that I feel are at the same level as the Son of Destiny. Supreme Bone, Double Eyes, Chaos Holy Body, and Supreme Sword Intent. Look at this configuration.

I knew this book was going to be unfinished when I looked at the word count, but because it was a new subject, I continued reading it. To be honest, if the latter part could be written in more detail, it would be a really good book. I still recommend reading it, but it's really a pity that I didn't get to see the extended plot at the end of this book.

It looks great, thank you to the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

There are many novel and attractive aspects, but in terms of content, this novel should have more content about playing in a group with the people who are invested in it, and shouldn't be mostly about the protagonist's own promotion. Structurally, it would be great if there were more growth content where the protagonist and supporting characters travel and have adventures together. It would be even better if there was a female protagonist. After all, the protagonist is generally very affectionate and attaches great importance to emotions. The premise is that there is no ambiguity. Generally speaking, the reader thinks it is very good!

This book is very good, but it is a little short. The protagonist can be said to have a strong background, and he is calm and decisive. It is not a brainless novel. Moreover, the supporting characters also have small stories, and it is not a black and white kind of novel. Except for Jiang Xiaoxiao's early stage, there are some words or actions that I really don't like [facepalm], and because of the data, it's unfinished. Oh, it's a pity [facepalm]

Wow, if you read it patiently, there is something new in this book that is not found in other books. It feels like you are chatting with the author. It feels like reading a classic. (It may be a bit exaggerated, maybe there are some flaws in it, but it really has a different feeling from reading other novels)

Although the result is a bit rushed, overall it is still very good. The author writes more logically according to your current ability. Don't just give up on the last few pictures like this book. I think you can write better, come on! ! !

What a pity! It's a very good book. Maybe because of poor grades, the author made an outline and wrote a lot. You can see that the author laid it out very carefully. It's a pity that I didn't finish it. I want to read the complete book! Another thing is that in the part that has been written, the protagonist accounts for a large proportion. In the follow-up, the protagonist's style is almost invisible, and almost all of it is in retreat. Is his brother Jiang Changkong dead? Has the protagonist figured out the origin of the system? Have the Divine Ancestor and the Dao Ancestor gone ashore? After reading the outline, I still don't quite understand these questions [laughing and crying]!

The fantasy investment system is really good. I don't really like reading investment articles. But when I read this one, I was a little curious when I saw the expression, so I came in to take a look. I didn't expect it to be so good. Each character's personality is written in a very three-dimensional way. And the character of the protagonist is also very suitable to my taste. Really, this protagonist really pokes fun at my character. All in all, if you want to read fantasy investment stories, you can read it. This one is really good. The writing and description are also very good. Remember to read my book review next time! ~

The author said that you wrote too early, please write more, it's not good enough, okay?

It's very good-looking. It's better than many of the fantasy novels I've read on Tomato that have a rating of 8 or above. It doesn't seem to have any bad points so far. Why is the rating so low? ? Only 6.9? ? ?

It's really pretty, I don't feel tired looking at it

It's very beautiful, but I'm afraid that the author won't be able to grasp it and it will collapse later [Thinking]

Super exciting, come on, author＾0＾~

Very nice! ! The character design of the protagonist and the plot are very novel and interesting, the plot rhythm is also good, and it would be nice to have more descriptions. However, the current novels lack details and descriptions, and readers are impatient and do not like to read detailed novels. This kind of genius system invincibility would be better if it had a description. Otherwise, it would be just as interesting as just looking at the plot. I like the character design of the protagonist the most. It is very novel and a respected young saint. I like it! ! I still hope that the author can update more often, don't abandon the trap, don't stop updating, and don't forget the old books when you have new books, and it's really not enough to read [crying]

It's a very good book, but it ended badly. Otherwise, it would still be a classic.

"Once you enter the cultivation years, you will be drunk like a drunk in the world." "Killing is to protect life; killing karma is not killing people." "How can an earthworm shake the big tree in the sky? How can the light of a grain of rice compete with the sun and the moon?"

It's a very interesting novel. I just feel that the heroine is very attractive in this style of writing. However, the author portrayed the heroine very well, so it's still okay.

Very pretty, I like it very much. Very good, I'm really convinced. It's rare for me to find a novel that I like more. What's the result? You treat me like this. Did the author already make a fortune when he wrote about the war, and then didn't want to write about it? Did you just send us the outline directly or what? This is the first time I've seen an ending like this. It's really awesome [punch out]

Very pretty! (♥∀♥) This is the first time I've seen this type of book! Finally a protagonist who doesn't stand up to Destiny's Child! Wouldn't it be nice to be a follower?

I have read a lot of novels, many of which I can no longer read. This novel is not bad, and it makes me want to stay up late to read novels again. Damn it, it ends badly

It's very interesting and makes people want to read on. It is humorous and interesting to read, and both the protagonist and the supporting characters have a positive outlook on life. The plot is not very exaggerated. I learned a lot about buying people's hearts and being humane.

It's not bad. It's quite in line with the real-life immortal family and holy land in fantasy novels. It can survive forever and never be destroyed. It not only has fighting and killing, but also has a human and sophistication. It has a good start and a good birth. The character setting and temperament are well grasped. Even if the true spirit awakens after time travel, there are quite few protagonists in this kind of book, and most of them are villains. It just sucked at the end and I was a bit upset [smiles]

The ending was not very clear, but it was still quite exciting.

It's pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. It stands to reason that an eight-point score would be no problem, right?