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No girls are given away, no cuckolding, don't worry! It is definitely not written by a studio. I am a professional writer. If I ask a studio to write for me, I will be struck by lightning!

It's well written. It would be great if you continue to write like this. It's light and ordinary, low-key without losing the original intention. Watch the fireworks in the world and taste life. This is the philosophy of life. Come on, put it on the bookshelf and don't leave it unfinished.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

The writing style can be said to be above average. The poems and famous quotes are all used properly. The plot is smooth and the pace is fast, which is very good (not like other longevity novels that drag on and on) There are only two shortcomings. I think the cool points should be increased (properly diversified). And some supporting characters are not profound enough (we should write some deep emotional stories about a small character, so that important supporting characters can make us remember them from beginning to end) Describe the supporting characters as flesh-and-blood and independent-minded as possible, which can also complicate certain plots.

It's a pretty good longevity novel. It has a quiet feeling of moisturizing things. It's upright and peaceful. I don't know why the rating is so low. I think it's probably because there are too many impetuous people [smile]

Even if you are immortal, you will definitely not be able to avoid the warmth and coldness of human relationships. It is certain that you will have a knife. If you are alone for a long time, you will feel whether you are still alive or not.

The Longevity series noodles are above average. Five points is too low. Personally, I think eight points and above are too few and not enough to watch.

My buddies have put you in the completion group, and Tomato shows that updates have been discontinued. Why are you suddenly alive again?

Very good, slim but not soft. Once you have written a love line, you can close it as needed. If a person who lives forever remains a single person, then what is the use of my immortality? Even if you can write a little in sixty years without using too much, it is too easy for you. For now, it is still okay. .

It's only a hundred years, as long as you don't lose your emotions and desires. When Jiang Taigong fishes, those who wish to take the bait will take the bait. You love me and I don't mind if a few female partners are just passers-by. Slowly conceive yourself and write as you like A little more, a free and easy guest in the world of mortals, living the past life as he pleases.

I prefer this quiet and relaxing one

The road of life is as plain as water. This kind of plain writing is good, and there is no need to forcefully create conflicts. Fighting and killing every day is not necessary. People always want to live well, not life and death. Immortality is a road of no return. Birth, old age, illness and death are fine. Live in the dark and die in the sun.

It's quite good-looking, slow-paced, the emotional line is brushed off at the beginning, but the back is very dull and free-wheeling, like writing about daily life. I meet a Taoist at the beginning, which I think is normal. Other auras are more serious than this, such as urban martial arts and the protagonist cultivating immortals. It's too serious, and I like the protagonist to encounter big things every day, and then intervene, etc. If you like this, I can only say that this book is not suitable for you. After all, it can be said that this is a daily novel, a casual novel, etc.

I didn't expect to reduce the cool plot and increase the simple pastoral love story. I didn't expect that sixty years of life would be taken away in one stroke. In fact, it would be a good book to follow three years of life in a new city.

I haven't read a few chapters, but the author's writing style is really impressive, the characters are vividly created, and the plot is very graphic, as comfortable as watching a movie, so I can't help but give it a thumbs up after reading a few chapters.

It is very painful to sit and watch the clouds roll and relax, and listen to the flowers bloom and fall. It is a transcendent feeling. It is very painful to see the people around you gradually disappear.

Very nice! Unlike those immortal novels. Don't dare to love, can't love! The only thing I like about this book is that the protagonist dares to love! Accompany her as she grows older!

It's pretty good. Anyway, there aren't many that I can watch anymore. This is one, and the Tomato score is just that. Those with high scores may not be good-looking.

It's okay, just plain is the real thing

After reading a book for a long time, it is difficult for me to meet someone who is reluctant to skip chapters. Personally speaking, the plot is draggy, but when described from another perspective, the sense of immersion is very good, and it is slightly stubborn in some places. It can be regarded as a handy reading book to pass the time.

The writing is very good, but I felt particularly uncomfortable after reading the chapters of Xu Banxia and Li Qingdai [crying] [crying] [crying] But I still want to read it. Please give it a try, author [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's too slow and not enjoyable at all. . . . Boss, please give me a few more chapters! I've been working on it for so long and it's only chapter 40. It's not enough to read, not enough at all!

Come on, I like it very much, but it's just a little lacking.

There is a book called "I have been in Jiaofangsi for thousands of years." You may wish to read it. There has been no update for three days. Do you want to 💩 or go to heaven? It's your choice.

My feeling is that it is somewhat different from what I want to see or what I think. I feel that many of the longevity points should be mentioned in one stroke. Otherwise, if one event is described too much, it will lose the feeling of a fleeting moment. Come on, author [laughing]

It's okay. It's a way to kill boring time. It looks good. Although it was unfinished before and has been continued recently, it's still interesting. [Note] [Note] [Note] [Note] [Note] Let's see if we can continue writing this book and how much we can write.

Good boy, I like this kind of author who puts the audience first. You boy, you are really good [please taste carefully]

Good book, five-star praise. I hope the author will update more every day. I love reading this type of book.

It's very interesting, and the author is very good at making jokes.

Watching this, I suddenly feel that immortality is so scary and sad.