(Villain article) After time travel and rebirth, I see my body shrinking, with no system and no bloodline. However, time travel is the biggest bug. Everything starts from ordinary struggles. Even though Naruto is a world where blood is supreme, ordinary people do not have no chance to rise!
Reader comments
It's very good-looking, and the protagonist doesn't look at him differently just because Konoha has a protagonist.
Where will the future of the protagonist go?
Very good. It would be nice if the protagonist in the novel had more female characters [laughs]
Great, great, this book is so great, ten updates a day is not enough. For me, this is the best fanfic I've ever read on Tomato, and it's just what I like! ! ! ! Like
I want to ask about that, it seems that this tonic is not in the original book, right?
I feel like the Uchiha in the back is a bit dark, and the Uchiha in the original work are not like that either. It just feels like a hard black character, which is a bit embarrassing.
Overall it's pretty good, but the part where it turns into torture and killing should have been a little more foreshadowed. Well, I can't say it was foreshadowed. It's just a little obvious. Some readers won't read it carefully. Some reminders should be added appropriately. Some small details are easy to be ignored. The last sentence, author, come on^ω^
After thinking about it, I'll give it five stars!
I thought the main character's abilities were like undead or ash in Dark Souls.
It's very well written, but it would have been better if the protagonist had more women's clothing.
Not bad, quite novel
It's very well written, especially the women's clothing section.
The male protagonist without a system is not licking Konoha yet. The setting is quite good. It would be nice if there was more plot about dressing up as a woman and going to Konoha [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
I was really looking forward to Nabe and Hatake Sakumo meeting again, but I didn't expect it to end [crying] [crying]
So far so good
I think it's quite interesting, but I don't know why the author would...
It's quite palatable, but most people probably won't be able to accept it.
Reasonable! A book that can be read with the mind in mind.
Very unique and outstanding writing ideas. I am very happy.
Not bad, the writing is very good
Good-looking, good-looking, quack, good-looking
Awesome, really beautiful
Beautiful and worth recommending
Very exciting, the plot is very novel
Wow wow wow wow, maybe it's banned.
That's right, don't lick Konoha.
I thought the women's clothing was that of a naive girl [face covering] I didn't expect it to be the case.
I don't want to give it five stars, but it's still vulgar.
I voted for you based on your five stars, Hokage Bunbu-san.
It's quite enjoyable. Yes, ninjas shouldn't be in this situation.
Come on, it's still quite interesting.
I really liked this book before, and I was waiting for the update all day and early in the morning. It's a pity that I'll work hard to write the next one [punch out] [punch out]
Yes, the main character is not the Virgin, but born
It's very interesting. I hope the author can keep writing.
It's very good-looking, and the protagonist doesn't look at him differently just because Konoha has a protagonist. Where will the future of the protagonist go?
Very good. It would be nice if the protagonist in the novel had more female characters [laughs]
Great, great, this book is so great, ten updates a day is not enough. For me, this is the best fanfic I've ever read on Tomato, and it's just what I like! ! ! ! Like I want to ask about that, it seems that this tonic is not in the original book, right? I feel like the Uchiha in the back is a bit dark, and the Uchiha in the original work are not like that either. It just feels like a hard black character, which is a bit embarrassing.
Overall it's pretty good, but the part where it turns into torture and killing should have been a little more foreshadowed. Well, I can't say it was foreshadowed. It's just a little obvious. Some readers won't read it carefully. Some reminders should be added appropriately. Some small details are easy to be ignored. The last sentence, author, come on^ω^ After thinking about it, I'll give it five stars!
I thought the main character's abilities were like undead or ash in Dark Souls.
It's very well written, but it would have been better if the protagonist had more women's clothing.
Not bad, quite novel
It's very well written, especially the women's clothing section.
The male protagonist without a system is not licking Konoha yet. The setting is quite good. It would be nice if there was more plot about dressing up as a woman and going to Konoha [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I was really looking forward to Nabe and Hatake Sakumo meeting again, but I didn't expect it to end [crying] [crying]
So far so good
I think it's quite interesting, but I don't know why the author would...
It's quite palatable, but most people probably won't be able to accept it.
Reasonable! A book that can be read with the mind in mind.
Very unique and outstanding writing ideas. I am very happy.
Not bad, the writing is very good
Good-looking, good-looking, quack, good-looking
Awesome, really beautiful
Beautiful and worth recommending
Very exciting, the plot is very novel
Wow wow wow wow, maybe it's banned.
That's right, don't lick Konoha.
I thought the women's clothing was that of a naive girl [face covering] I didn't expect it to be the case.
I don't want to give it five stars, but it's still vulgar.
I voted for you based on your five stars, Hokage Bunbu-san.
It's quite enjoyable. Yes, ninjas shouldn't be in this situation.
Come on, it's still quite interesting.
I really liked this book before, and I was waiting for the update all day and early in the morning. It's a pity that I'll work hard to write the next one [punch out] [punch out]
Yes, the main character is not the Virgin, but born
It's very interesting. I hope the author can keep writing.
It's great to watch. Very excellent work