Siheyuan: A Sixty-Year-Old Veteran Delivers Qin Huairu's Baby

It has shortcomings. The biggest problem is that the main character is over 60 years old. He has to be called uncle, but the other people are called Lidong. It's okay.

There are problems with the setting, the story is cliche, and the writing is a bit childish. 1: I didn't check the information before starting the book. The author set the protagonist to be 60 years old. Note that he can retire at this age. It really makes people unable to feel the slightest sense of involvement. 2: Stories come from life, and novels must also be based on reality. The protagonist is 60 years old. He has been in the army all his life. After he retired, he was still a top soldier. The army officers are divided into "corps, division, brigade, regiment, battalion, company and platoon." So the question is, what level should the old Red Army soldier who has been in the army all his life be? But it's definitely not a big-headed soldier! ! ! ! 3: Siheyuan fan literature is not uncommon on any platform. The storylines and characters are roughly the same. The question is, since they are almost the same, why are the ratings so different? The writing style is one thing, but the main reason is that the characters in the author's works feel unintelligent and the character descriptions are too dull. 4: Fan fiction is the easiest to write among all categories, and it is also the easiest to get results. When writing Siheyuan fan fiction, you need to highlight the character of the character, and the intelligence must not be reduced without thinking. The plot can be cliched. As long as your writing, including the protagonist, all have online IQs, you can go back and forth to the extreme. Pay attention to the settings. If you are between the ages of 15 and 22, you can have both parents dead and one person can eat enough without the whole family being hungry. You can also have two brothers and sisters, which requires writing skills.

At 17 pages, this novel can be said to be completely useless. People steal from you over and over again. In the end, I stole your things and broke my leg. When Yi Zhonghai says something, you just listen to him. You are familiar with the plot of Siheyuan. Also go and cure the person who stole from you. You saved me again and again. Know these white-eyed wolves. You are really a talent. If someone steals something from you and breaks it, you still go to save others. He is really the biggest licker. Please take this novel off the shelves. It can be said that it is Siheyuan's first trash novel. Someone killed your parents and you were hurt. You still save others, you are really talented. My metaphor is not an exaggeration. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

The first reason: Were there so many cars in the 1960s? You said that even if he buys a direct-drive car, he has to wait a week for it to be completed. Why do you write about a porcelain car? What's the fuss about? The second reason is that your home had a zebra crossing in the 1960s? Is there a traffic police? The third reason is that he has been in the army for most of his life and is still a top soldier? After staying here for such a long time, I don't believe that he doesn't have all kinds of votes. The plot is too exaggerated.

As I get older, my brain may be damaged, so I have to fight inside for most of the chapter.

Not bad, not bad.

It's very well written. Why don't you write it?

I can't stand it anymore. You are a teenager. I don't want to say a single more word.

The thief was not punished when he was stolen, but he even helped the thief heal his illness!

The protagonist is a bit of a virgin