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80,000 Push on the first day, give yourself a good review. After ten years of drinking ice, it is difficult to cool down the hot blood. This may be due to my mentality in writing this book. I still have a huge passion for online writing. I remember it was the second day after starting the book. After confirming that the outline was OK, I wrote almost 20,000 words in one day. At that time, I entered a state of flow. I turned on the computer at 10 o'clock in the morning and refreshed myself by browsing the ghost beasts on site B. Then I opened the coding software. I didn't even eat lunch and kept writing until after seven o'clock. "Sun Tzu's Art of War" says that as a general, you should worry about defeat before thinking about victory, so you can fight a hundred battles without danger. The outline of this book is 13,000 words, from Andy stepping into Hogwarts to... No spoilers, hahaha. I am confident that I can present a wonderful and complete story! But please believe in my structure and vision. I have been reading online novels since I was nine years old, and I must have read more than a billion words in more than ten years. As an old bookworm, I have seen pigs running, pigs taking off, and pigs falling to death. So naturally I can understand some strategies for raising pigs hhh Don't worry, all the characters in this book have absolute IQs (except Goyle and Crabbe [face covering]). I will try my best to avoid all poisonous points. If there are any, please point them out and I will stand upright and quickly correct them. In the novels I have read a lot, I have followed the protagonists to the peak of power, and also followed them through boundless purgatory, love and hate, revenge and redemption, betrayal and loyalty, promises and lies, nobility and baseness, madness and reason. I have seen it all. In those words, I have seen bravery and heroism, encountering injustice on the road, joys and sorrows, separation and heartbreak... I have met countless wonderful souls. Thanks to them, their writing style lets me know that there are always some authors who tirelessly pursue writing the independent life that belongs to the protagonist. The flowers that bloom in the book are so beautiful that I regard him as the Holy Grail and the God. At the same time, I would like to thank my family, friends, and myself. They have given me a wonderful real life. I have seen the materialistic modern world under the bustling night of Shanghai, and I also understand the joys and sorrows of the barbaric and unreasonable lower class in the countryside. I want to thank those who love me, the people I love, I cuddled up with the girl who wandered in a foreign land, and I was also deceived by women who told lies. I have met angels and demons, but most of them are ordinary people who are controlled by seven emotions and six desires and are worse than dead. What a complicated world this is. The education I received, the environment I grew up in, the path I took, and the people I met, they are so complex and fascinating. At this critical point where all the contradictions are intertwined and broken, I deeply feel the disorder and beauty of the world. However, I want to write a world I hope for, a world with other possibilities... Therefore, I took up my pen and wrote this review to share the excitement and pursuit in my heart with you, and with everyone who loves life and ideals. It's just a shameless self-evaluation that will make you laugh.

You don't need to read the previous paragraph at all. This is just a sentence I added to ease the tone, to prevent my tone from being suspected of being superior and instructing others because the words I said during the comment were not processed by the brain. First of all, I am optimistic that the author will make certain optimizations based on the original settings of the original work. Judging from what has been written so far, this optimization is not too unreasonable and does not have any adverse impact on the plot. This alone is better than most fanfics. Secondly, I haven't thought about it yet, let's talk about it later.

See here. It's time to give an evaluation. Long Wei put a lot of effort and enthusiasm into this book. Telling the truth can be felt even through the screen. Very, very fine. The psychological description of the protagonist, the way of using people and the way of dealing with the world are meticulous and interesting at the same time. I write this review to encourage the author who has worked hard day and night. It is also the most direct way to express my love for this book as a reader. I hope Long Wei can live a happy life every day and continue to work diligently to create more beautiful stories. Good night, big dragon tail [laughs] Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! Will you be more motivated if you are in love? [Sinister smile]

The setting of the weak system is great, the character descriptions are very vivid, and the part about seeking power through layout in the academy is quite exciting. The most important thing is that it does not lick Hermione and does not work as a nanny with the protagonist group. Anyway, the heroine is worthy of praise if she is not Hermione.

It's very innovative, the writing is solid and rich in details. I like the supplement to the potions lesson very much! I am looking forward to the next plot, and hope that Andy and everyone in the original work will become more vivid in the author's writing. [Sending Hearts] ps: Will there be any follow-up development between Harry and the protagonist as friends? It feels like Harry's current misunderstanding is a bit deep.

It's very good. It's very, very good compared to the book I read before: A Magical Journey Begins at Hogwarts. That book poisoned me to death.

Okay, okay! There are so many things worthy of praise in this book, whether it is the characterization of various characters or the description of the details of the position, they are all vivid on the page. I would like to say from the bottom of my heart that this is one of the best fan works I have seen so far! [Please update][Learned]

A Slytherin with a dirty heart, really Slytherin, a perfect interpretation of thick black school But it's true that there are too many plots about tactics. It's time to focus on magic. It's not impossible to have plots in HP, but who of the HP fans come here for the plots?

I like the HP that writes a different story the most, not the Seven Years Savior game

I really like fanfics that complement the original settings like this. I can find rigorous arguments from the original work, and then add the author's bold imagination. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development. Especially the Q&A section after the first class on Transfiguration, it directly hit the target of my interest in Kodak. I am very much looking forward to the story of the protagonist in the process of exploring the essence of magic. I even hope to read a novel in which the pure Muggle protagonist dissects a wizard (crossed out) and discovers magical energy.

I have to say that it is very exciting. The plot makes me go numb. The characters are portrayed very well and stably. The psychology of the characters is really detailed. Well, I've never been good at praising people, but it's really good

Okay, okay, wouldn't it be nice to give a good review and explode?

I haven't finished watching it yet, there are no surprises, it's very interesting! I would like to ask if the protagonist has cp? Personally, I prefer no heroine

It is rich in details, solid writing, and also contains details that most fans would not be able to write about. In short, it can be read by both novices and old bookworms.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author! ☆☆☆☆☆

It's pretty good, but I don't know if it has a female protagonist.

Will the author update it again? This book is really great! ! ! It is rare to see that the male protagonist has an IQ, and there is no phenomenon of discrediting the supporting characters. The author is also very rigorous, and there is basically no point that is more dramatic [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

The picture is very good, keep up the good work

Very beautiful, really beautiful

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

Good job - the pattern is huge, keep it steady [learned]

It's great. It's a very interesting fanfic. The author's writing is very strong and beautiful.

Looks great, looking forward to further development

Make a good outline, fill in the details, and write the article after grasping the information. Very good.

As far as Tomato is concerned, compared to mindless cool articles and old routines, this is a rare masterpiece.

The setting is great and the writing is smooth. Whether it is the psychological description of the characters or the main line of the article, it makes people feel comfortable. Even Quidditch, which I don't like, is written so well [please update]

Good comments from a little wizard [Thinking] [Understood] Keep up the hard work! [Make faces]

Directly give it five stars

I can only say that the author is very detailed, has his own ideas, and communicates very frequently with readers

This is one of the best HP novels I have read. Neither the protagonist nor the original characters are very OOC. Although the book only has a few dozen chapters, it is still very good.