Weird: as Soon as He Awakened His Superpower, He Was Chased by the School Beauty.

Very good, at least he's not a dog-licking male protagonist This article beats up all kinds of little fairies However, when I first read this article, my first reaction was very similar to that of Fang Laomo's writing style next door. They are both the kind of writing where the protagonist looks like a demon. It is a new type of invincible writing, right? Compared with many protagonists who are invincible but have to do many things they don't like because of the heroine, I think this kind of invincible novel is truly invincible.

Well, although it has no brain, no logic, is not very advanced, and the writing is very poor, but the only thing about reading this is that it is very enjoyable. I like to read refreshing novels. The more advanced refreshing novels, the plot, logic and emotions are online. This is just a book to read when you are bored. You don't have to use your brain and do not have to work hard to read ten lines at a time. It is first-rate to relax and decompress, so I give it a five-star rating.

The author has some things that are very profound. If you read too much, you will easily get into a car accident and drive too fast. It is better than what Brother Shui wrote @Tomato No. 1 Handsome Guy [laughing]

This book is similar to "Legend Administration" in that it is a closed loop. However, the protagonist of "Legend Administration" personally breaks this closed loop. If you are interested, you can take a look.

After reading it, I felt like a newbie writer. Although the writing is not good, the plot and various abilities in the book are quite interesting.

Writing is okay Well, that's a bit cool Logic is okay The final ending is very profound and lofty Highlights the infinity of time and space Generally speaking, this story is a circle interlocking Very good worth a look

Personally I think it's quite good, although I don't quite understand some parts. Maybe my cultural level is too low. I will follow you and look forward to your next book being more exciting.

This book is a great read. If you want to read a logic article, I will advise you not to read it.

It's good, but it's too short. I think it can be developed to explore other planets. What should I say? I don't think it's a bad ending, it's just that the ending is too hasty, but after all, it's my first time writing a book, so please give me more five stars🌟

It's good that the protagonist is decisive in killing, but it's very dark. It's no longer the Holy Mother. It's all about following one's own interests rather than the truth. But it's really cool. The creative point of the closed time loop at the end is also very good. The amazing thing is that this work has both hydrological aspects and too fast pace. Fortunately, the hydrology is not particularly obvious and acceptable. But it may be that the combat power system is not obvious, so although it is written that the tiger god level is weird. But actually I don't feel much. Overall it's good. It's just fun all the way to low, cheers for the author. ↖(^ω^)↗

The subject matter of this book is very good, but it is a pity that the author does not pay attention to details. He clearly writes things that others do not know, but writes about things that others know. He always gives the character memories that he does not know from the author's perspective. The logic is not rigorous, the backgrounds of the characters are all messed up, the character introductions are one way in the first few chapters, and another in the next few chapters, and the supporting characters' actions are not logical at all. Generally speaking, it is based on a good subject matter. Without this subject matter, no one has read the whole book. No wonder I only wrote more than 200 pictures. It is normal that it cannot be written if it is not good-looking. Basically, you can find the problem I mentioned by looking at more than 20 photos.

It's pretty good, just take off the brain and watch it for fun... Let's blindly guess the following plot: the protagonist's strength improves so fast, after beating Dou Sprout to death, his masters or other things from the parallel world come to the protagonist's world one after another; after the protagonist rules each area one by one, he leads people to resist the creatures in the parallel world, and finally his strength gradually grows and defeats them...

I think it should be able to reach a score of 8 or so, which is pretty good.

The character is decisive and decisive, and it didn't make me feel any discomfort. It was in line with my original intention of reading the novel. However, the ending suddenly stopped, which made me a little overwhelmed. However, the writing was really enjoyable and there was nothing to say. It's not a traditional badass, and the protagonist's character is also very interesting.

It's very interesting and funny [face covering] I try to make things happen from time to time. Highly recommended. I hope the author can finish it [like] [like] [like] [please ask for updates]

It's well written, don't care what others think. Keep it up yourself! It looks good, I hope the author will stick with it

It's very well written, keep up the good work. Be the first to comment

Not bad, not procrastinating, and the main character is not a virgin. Very comfortable to watch

I don't know why the score is so low. This is one of the top novels I've seen among Tomato novels. It's very well written, the world structure is described in detail, the plot arrangement is very good, and it has some laughs and some fun moments. The novel is okay at the beginning, but the more you read at the back, the worse it becomes. As long as you read a few chapters of this novel, the more you read at the back, the more you want to stop. It's so well written, full marks, great author.

Many plots are very funny, thank you to the author! [Like][Like][Like]

It took me two days to read this. The writing is not bad, the plot is very imaginative, and it is quite enjoyable to read. It is the first time I have read a book where the main character is a bad guy. It is quite refreshing. I don't understand why the rating is so low. I will give it a five-star rating.

I read countless books, and in the vast sea of ​​books, I accidentally clicked on it. It makes me feel something when I see it. It suits my taste very well. It's a pity that I only read chapter 180 today! I hope the author will work hard. Be sure to write it down! Otherwise I won't be able to survive this day. [Shy][shy][shy]

It still has some flaws, but it looks pretty good.

Cool article, don't delve into the details and you'll be happy [laughs]

Although the rating is a bit low, I think it's still very interesting. Come on, author [crying]

Not bad. Better than most of the ones I've seen.

It's so beautiful. It's like a five-star review. Keep up the good work, author! It's really not enough! ! !

The killing was very decisive and very satisfying. I just lost two mini-bosses, one was Pang Guang and the other was Right Arm, so I went straight to the awesome one.

This book is good-looking, has a fast pace, is not sloppy, has clear logic, and is a relatively delicious fast food.

Well, there are many talents in the plot, and the protagonist is very good at talking.