Longevity: From Wandering Alone in the Mortal World to Everlasting Through the Ages

I watched it till the end of Ji Le Lou. It was so great. I stayed up late to watch it. It felt like watching a movie. The author's writing is so good. He is really talented at Tomato. If it takes more than ten years, I might become a good writer by writing martial arts.

It's not bad, but the protagonist is not as good as the previous one, but more than the inferior one. The enemy is afraid of killing the protagonist, so they only send people who are similar to the protagonist in each stage.

It's really one of the best novels I've ever read. I express my own opinions! The author writes about the protagonist's visit to the Taoist temple at the beginning, which also sets the stage for what follows. The beginning seems to be just a very ordinary beginning, but in fact, after reading the story, you will know that the plot is closely linked. Taiwei Mountain is not just Taiwei Mountain, and the Taoist temple is not an ordinary Taoist temple: including the plot that the protagonist later returns to the Taoist temple after making money and has strength to find that there does not seem to be such a Taoist temple at all, which also casts a mysterious veil on this Taoist temple. Then the author writes the time transition very well. There is no such thing as jumping for decades or not perfecting the plot. After the author completes the time jump, he will use some plots to tell readers what happened in those 10 years or so, and there will even be some secret plots for readers to think about that will be explained later. As for why many people think that every time they fight with the protagonist, they are almost as strong as him, then you also need to look at where the protagonist is. The place where the protagonist first learned martial arts from Fang Duzhou was just a remote place. Later he went to places like Dayu, Dayin, and Zhizhou. This is a big city, and there will definitely be many high-quality products. In addition, not everyone is He is that kind of genius, (when the protagonist was learning Qilin Jin from Fang Duzhou earlier, there was a sentence that he did not understand after learning it several times). This proves that the protagonist's talent is ordinary, it is just immortality. When the author wrote about the protagonist using poison to stimulate his own cultivation, he wrote it as a data flow, but he never wrote it like this later. Wouldn't it be good to do it step by step? (Yu Xiaoer also said at the beginning that the protagonist is passionate, can't stand injustice, and is cautious) The protagonist is originally a cautious person. When his cultivation is not in place, he will definitely not go to a place with many high-end products. This book is not an invincible flow, nor is it a data flow. It is a story about an immortal with average talent and slowly practicing martial arts. Not every protagonist in a book has to be invincible or a genius. Isn't this kind of mediocre the normal status quo? Many people say that the author is suppressing the protagonist's cultivation (I also mentioned at the beginning that the protagonist failed to learn it after reading it several times when he first started learning martial arts). The martial arts that the protagonist learned was originally a fourth-level martial arts (it is mentioned later that the protagonist guessed that Fang Duzhou was a fourth-level martial arts). It is not a peerless martial arts! Besides, why does the protagonist learn the three skills so quickly? Isn't it said that learning martial arts can cultivate true qi? Isn't the reason why you are not good at learning many martial arts because the qi in your body is too mixed! Fang Duzhou asked the protagonist to learn the Qilin Jin, which is a very powerful Qi technique that can suppress other Qi. Moreover, the protagonist's technique was practiced since the seventh level. If it is a fourth-level self-created technique, it proves that it is enough for the protagonist's fourth level. Excellent, and the author has done a very good job. The novels all have one level of realm and one level of hurdles. However, many novels are about the main character learning very good skills and being able to fight at multiple levels, but there are few novels that can write about this kind of one level of realm and one level of hurdles. In this place, the protagonist can skip a level not because of how powerful the skills he learned, but because he has learned the skills and martial arts to the ultimate level. Moreover, when the protagonist fights against a level, he will only jump one level at most, not two or three levels, and he will not win, just He just had the upper hand, but there was a plot in the middle where he was forced to retreat to the fourth level of the Dingjiang Alliance with a few punches. Many readers must have thought that the protagonist had won when they saw that, but as mentioned later, the protagonist was just a trial to force the fourth level to retreat with the fifth level cultivation, and the fourth level retreat was just a matter of peace talks. Why can the protagonist leapfrog to fight? He has learned the skills to the extreme, and the protagonist did have a noble person like Fang Duzhou to help him at the beginning, giving the protagonist fourth-level skills to lay a good foundation for Qi, otherwise there would be no subsequent protagonists. But why does Fang Duzhou help the protagonist? If it weren't for the protagonist meeting the beggar grandson and drawing a knife to help, he struck fiercely and responded to Fang Duzhou's reminder with a smile on his face, but the knife in his hand was wiped directly on his neck. Even the protagonist's calmness when he was cutting weeds and eradicating the roots in the back killed the ninth grade with an inferior cultivation level (many people say this is another poison, but I don't think it is. In the small town where he started, Fang Duzhou did it for Duolin to listen to Bai Na's affirmation) The further away, the better. Even if you are a ninth-level person, you can't cultivate any qi without any skills, and it is not much better than those who are not in the lower level. Moreover, the protagonist has cultivated some qi in the Taiwei world. The protagonist may not feel it himself, but even if you use the immortality method, you can definitely cultivate the true qi. But to kill the ninth-level person, the main thing is for the protagonist to calm down and kill him in the end.)

There are a lot of bad books out there, but this book is a masterpiece. The fighting is exciting and the logical thinking is very good. It's just that the protagonist's aura is a bit bigger, and it feels like a refreshing book. Highly recommended by bookworms of thirty years, not to be missed. Worth 8 points or more

I think it's okay, but your requirements are too high! Also, the rating has been seriously lowered! The author still needs encouragement! It's hard to agree with everyone's opinion. The author is working hard to update it.

Very, very well written. Clearly underrated. It's very exciting from a martial arts perspective, and it's also a very good novel from other perspectives.

That's okay! Has the rating been maliciously brushed? Good books rarely gain popularity, but bad books never lose their popularity. This book is as good as watching a TV series, so good luck to the author.

It's a really good book. It keeps on keeping on from the end. It's definitely a masterpiece.

"Before I was three years old, I competed with the heroes of Heshuo with my lyrics. When I was five years old, I traveled across the Eastern Wilderness with my poems. After I was ten years old, I no longer stagnate with things. I can compose poems on plants, trees, bamboos and rocks. I am known as the Immortal of Poetry, and nicknamed Dugu Qiubai." At this point, I only have three words to express the thousands of words deep in my heart. Update!!! What do I think if you don't update? Do you know how I go to work every day to read novels and wait for updates? Hold head high!!! Five updates a day are not negotiable!!!

This book shouldn't be rated so low. The writing style of this martial arts novel is really good, the logic is flawless, the upgrade system is concise and clear, the protagonist's mental state is normal, the climax of the Paradise Building is well written, and it will not collapse in the later stage.