Immortality: Don't Be a Prince, Go Become an Immortal

Different from the mainstream cool novels, it truly depicts the frustration and helplessness of the leader of a small affiliated country facing the oppression of a big country and the oppression of ordinary mortals by immortal cultivators. The protagonist gradually grows from it, but the pace is relatively slow, and it feels that the role of being an immortal is not very important [eating melon]. In terms of poison [thinking], I think the main thing in the front is the unclean queen and her attitude towards the male protagonist, which is very unpleasant to watch [laughs awkwardly], as well as her thinking about her sweetheart and other behaviors. I hope that her affairs can be explained faster, or there will be less interactive words, otherwise it will be really uncomfortable to watch. Overall, it's not bad [laughs]. After all, the introduction says it is the experience of an immortal in the long river of time. Maybe the queen is just a passer-by who makes a few ripples in the long years of the male protagonist. Come on, author! I hope you can present what you want to present to the readers. [Like][Like][Like] The less I watch, the more uncomfortable I feel [punches], so the author is quick to update [angry]. How can this be enough? [Please update] The most important thing is that I hope there will be no eunuchs! No eunuchs! ! No eunuchs! ! ! (Of course, because your grades are really bad, if you want to be a eunuch, there's nothing I can do about it)

It's okay, it has a different flavor from Shuangwen, come on!

It looks pretty good so far. It doesn't have a big start, but the slow development of the little characters, which is pretty good. However, the queen's loss of virginity is still a bit unacceptable.

This is the first time I have seen such a good book. It is as good-looking as a man in his 40s. I welcome all book friends with joy [laughter]

The power of writing and writing style appealed to me, and it was well written. Apart from being unclean, the queen's character is okay. As long as you're not with the male protagonist, just find a way to deal with it.

The writing, plot, etc. Are all good. With such a low rating, it's probably because Tomato's audience can't stand this kind of plot. The author has great writing skills and describes the scene well. Keep up the good work.

This book reminded me that when reading a book, you should not just read the ratings and reviews. What you experience yourself is more real. The writing is very good, and the protagonist, who is the leader of a small country, is vividly written, and the sense of depression is really well expressed! The heroine problem. . . Whether it's poisonous or not depends on your own experience. Anyway, I feel pretty good. I can accept losing my virginity accidentally. After all, how many places can it be in reality? In addition, I feel that the description of the progression of the protagonist's strength is too perfunctory to the point where I still don't know what state the protagonist is in, and the system's presence is too weak and does not appear a few times in the whole article. But the main function of the system is immortality. I won't say anything about it, but you didn't show the role of immortality. That's your fault. Hope to correct

The writing is very good. I haven't read such slow and aggrieved writing in a long time. Because I read a comment about a queen who lost her virginity, I didn't want to read it at first. I wanted to squirt directly, but I wanted to squirt to the point, so I clicked in and finished reading. The writing is indeed slow, and the story of the queen is not developed, but I personally hate the longevity novel, the kind where Sima disbands his sword. In the end, I can accept whether the queen is real or fake. I can't accept it according to Y bar standards, and I can't accept it normally. But after watching it, I unexpectedly continued to watch it. Goldfinger is not very open, and the description of the queen is not too great. I don't want it to be a single female protagonist. I hope that brothers who think it is a poisonous point can give me a fair evaluation and wait for the author to give an ending, otherwise I am really afraid that he will cut it.

How can I put it this way? It's pretty good. It's written in a very realistic way. A small country is weak and its leader is humiliated. He doesn't say anything. It's a bit of a waste of money. There is also Miss Su. In the ancient setting of Immortal Cultivation + Dynasty, losing her virginity before marriage is indeed... It would be fine if she was just a tool to help the protagonist grow mentally, but if there is any subsequent plot of emotional intersection or reconciliation of past feuds, it would be really poisonous. The above is a review and some suggestions for the author. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

To be honest, I originally came here for the soft rice flow. The golden finger in the article is not very golden, but the character of Chen Huai is very full, and you can really see the growth of the young man. The changes in the queen's behavior in the first chapters are indeed a bit too fast. The current situation of the world of immortality and the general trend of the world have not yet been revealed, which extends the life of this book in disguise. The old bookworm feels that the author's skills are acceptable, that he maintains the standard and performs stably.

Good! Yes, I finished reading it in one go, and the author quickly updated it. In general, although the beginning is a little bit toxic, it is not unacceptable. I am excited after reading it, but it is a pity. This is destined to be a long-lasting novel, and I cannot carry the people I care about for a long time. This is quite regretful. However, the world is so big, there will always be encounters, one or two old friends in the vast road, meet and go through the vicissitudes of life. No matter what, it is always happy. I am excited to read it. Come on, come on.

I give it 4 stars, the writing is quite good! This book is indeed not easy to read. There are many dark elements in reality in it! The male protagonist's incompetent rage and tolerance at the beginning was really frustrating to watch! The reality is like this. There is no regret medicine, no time machine, and no reset button! The setting of the role of Queen Su Yu is very reasonable and realistic. People who really understand Su Yu will hate and stay away from her! Su Yu is usually gentle and quite smart! Logically speaking, he should be very likable, but Su Yu has a problem with principle! This is the bottom line of life! Of course, modern people will definitely not care about the legacy of Wei Wu. I hope the Taikang Kingdom can recover as soon as possible and live a peaceful life!

If the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles are your idol, then you have come to the right place. The main character is a tolerant person who is very tolerant. The development and plot are also slow-paced. The protagonist's queen became a wife when she was young. This book is a must-have for travel. [Like][Like][Like]

There is no such thing as Long Aotian, and there is no brainless system. The protagonist's IQ is online, and the villain's IQ is even better. It has the feeling of a spy movie in a TV series, using all kinds of brains, and the thrill of a martial arts movie. The characters are becoming more and more mature over time. Good, so far, it is still okay. It is not the type of cool novel. Good luck, author.

How should I put it? You still have to read the book before you can comment on it. Maybe the small details in the early stage are not handled well, but in the middle and later stages, as the plot unfolds, it is very good. After reading it, others can decide whether it is good or bad. If you experience the love and hatred in it, you will find that many parts are quite good. Not bad, not bad

Although the previous Queen was a failure, the book is generally very good. If you are used to reading cool articles, you can read this This thing.

It's okay. I'm used to reading cool articles. This type is not bad, but the pace is a bit slow.

This follows the development of the story, conforms to the character image, has foreshadowing and echoes, and is lyrical and combined with line drawing. It is very good. The shout in the broken city, the parting postscript with the old beggar, the protagonist is written with flesh and blood, and it is obvious that the spiritual growth can be seen. This is an immortality article, which has just begun, and I am a bit looking forward to it. I don't know why the rating is so low

How to say it? The logic of this book is clear, and it is considered to be of the highest quality. Unfortunately, the rating is too low. If it could catch the wind, it could skyrocket to 90,000 miles. It is a pity that if it had been published in a few years, it would not have ended up like this.

I don't know how long it's been since I started reading it, but I gave up on it by Chapter 37 and decided to keep it. Until one day when I was organizing my bookshelf, I felt it was an eyesore, so I deleted it. I don't know what the fate was, but I saw him on the recommendation list three or two times. Maybe it was unwillingness, maybe some persistence, or maybe it was lost time. I thought, I should read this book again. From the immaturity at the beginning to the proficiency now, the author's growth is enviable. Maybe this is the book I should read [shy]

It's okay. If nothing else, I see that I still have the desire to read on at least until now. This rating is actually too low. I think at least eight points is appropriate.

I like the personality of the protagonist, and I fully support it. I hope you can continue to update [laugh][laugh][laugh]

This kind of subject matter is good, the author will give it a thumbs up. I thought the title of the book was very interesting. I read a few pieces and was attracted by the plot/experience of Su Yu (thought it was a cool novel? Torture first and then feel happy?). Between the lines, I felt that Su Yu would have a reversal (the only motivation to pursue the book). I look forward to this author's update every day until I saw a comment today saying that there is no heroine in the introduction, so I went back to read it. This sudden bolt from the blue... However, the characters in this book are really well described (at least the book I have read). If there is a female protagonist, it would be better for readers like me. Although it's not my favorite genre, I hope the author will work hard 5⭐️Praise Support the author's creation [Like]

It's okay. I read it in one sitting. Although it's a bit toxic, it's still okay overall. The helplessness of a small country leader is vividly written. The subsequent plot is still okay. Come on, please update more.

After knowing in advance that the previous plot was a bit toxic, I was able to watch it. People's hearts are complicated, and the author's writing is quite real, and because it is real, it is a bit poisonous.

The protagonist should be an upright person, who can be cold but not cold-blooded, and can be indifferent but not pick up the slack and watch the fun. And maybe it would be better without a female protagonist, similar to Lanke Qi Yuan.

So far, it's okay, the plot is still relatively solid, but if Su Yu's past is not smoothed out, it will ruin the good impression.

It's a nb book, and it's also very interesting.

Plain and continuous, endless aftertaste

The author will continue to update, and don't worry about those who only read extremely cool articles.