精灵：开局捡漏幻之宝可梦蒂安希

Give yourself a five-star rating, the newbie is on the road, please give me your advice [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] If you have any suggestions, please give them~ [Blowing kiss]

It's okay. Some parts are actually not very good, but it's acceptable. The flaws don't hide the flaws. The key point is that the writing style is warm and harmonious. Pokémon is not suitable for a style where people are full of bitterness and hatred, and they can destroy people at every turn.

Hum ah ah ah ah, the writing is beautiful, the writing style is concise and capable, and it is not invincible. Where can I find a Pokémon author who can conquer a Pokémon? Woo woo woo woo (because the fins are too short and I can't clap continuously and I get angry and cry) Lao Lao Hao, I miss you. . When will it be updated? In the past few weeks, I almost vomited from listening to Pokémon articles. Teacher, your writing is better. . Therefore, teacher, you will always be my god❤❤

This is the first time I saw a story about Emperor Anxi. I also like this elf very much. As long as the author doesn't want eunuchs, I will keep reading. Come on, don't leave the harem.

This is the first time I have seen Dian Xi. The author's writing is great, but can the author let the protagonist recover a Vulcan E? [Send Heart][Send Heart] I rarely see authors write about Vulcan E [Send Heart][Send Heart]

Therefore, Luton, you are a good motorcycle. It is obviously a male channel, but there are no novels written by other male channel authors that contain some malicious descriptions of women. Female readers can read it very comfortably, and they will not make jokes. The Pokémon they have conquered also have their own characteristics and personalities, which will be discussed later. It's okay that I've become accustomed to this kind of description in the early, middle and late stages. Now I've read your novel three times. The first time I saw more than 400 chapters, the second time more than 900, and now it's back to more than a thousand chapters. It's really easy to read long articles, but I'm not very patient. Hahaha, but your writing is very good, come on!

The author's writing is very good, and there is no cp. I can't stand Pokémon stories with multiple female protagonists [face covering]. The bond between trainers and Pokémon in the Pokémon world is always touching. I also saw what I wanted to read in this book, and the overall writing style is very relaxed and I won't feel tired after reading it [please update]

There is not much content for now, I read it in one day, let me tell you my opinion. Overall, there are good points and bad points. The plot is very good and not boring or procrastinating. It doesn't have the talent settings that I hate most in most Pokémon fanfics, and it doesn't have too many slap-in-the-face plots. There are also shortcomings. The description of the battle is too monotonous. For some plots, monotonous battles are what you want, but there should also be some special parts that are described in detail, such as the finals. It may also be that there is not much description because the current strength gap is too large. Looking forward to the author's future updates, come on!

It felt a bit awkward at first, and the writing and plot conception were a little lacking. The more you watch to the end, the more you can see the author's progress. The protagonist has a distinctive and likable personality, and he doesn't rely on NC supporting characters to promote the plot, which is a big advantage. I just can't get enough, so the author will try to update more. [Sinister smile]

Not bad, not bad. Based on my experience of more than 20 chapters, it's nice.

It fits my fantasy about Pokémon.

The plot feels quite special, it is Mr. Lu with an urban cool writing style. In the battle against the rogue, the Pokémon he chose were all defenders (Dianci, Roaring Tiger, Menas), but in the end the battle was all about output skills and bombardment [laughing awkwardly]. Dianxi doesn't have Puff and Diamond Storm, Roaring Tiger doesn't intimidate or throw out harsh words, Menus doesn't carry a fire orb, and it doesn't regenerate itself. If you simply like the hot elves, you can replace the two ordinary joint defenders with Xinye Miao and Gyarados. This way you can attack unscrupulously instead of forcing the Pokémon to develop in a direction it's not good at.

It's good to watch, there's nothing bloody or embarrassing, everything is good

Good-looking Pokémon articles, highly recommended

It's not bad. You can see the shadow of the leader in quite a few places. The plot structure is okay, but the writing style is a little bit poor, and the description of the fight is rather sloppy, but it's still very good on Tomato.

It's a very good elf novel. The protagonist's character is very suitable for the author. At the age of 18, he has seen many mythical beasts and has become a real brave man with the fighting power of a first-level god. He can't keep the people he knows, and he can't keep the people he doesn't know. Food and accommodation are provided for those he doesn't know. He doesn't make a nest for those who have prophecies. Things always happen one step slower. It doesn't feel good at the climax. The villain can't always be retained. There are a lot of big events, which makes it tiring to watch. The quiet periods are too chaotic, making me dizzy to watch. There are also many unnecessary descriptions. I feel nothing after reading one chapter. The baby cup is okay, and it has a tomato flavor of going back to the past. In short, if you like to be the protagonist, you can watch it, but you won't like it after watching it [laughing evilly]

It's a very good book, but I think there are some problems with the gym. Of course, this belongs to the world view and cannot be changed. I think based on the size and national policy of our country, combined with the functions of gymnasiums to guard and educate, there must be more gymnasiums, which can be graded, such as one first-level gymnasium for each province, and one second-level gymnasium for each city at the municipal level. Instead of just eighteen gymnasiums with eighteen attributes, we can have eighteen kings. With such a large population, it is normal for us to have more kings. Personal opinion, light spray. But overall it's still a good book. Well, my pot has been chased. Later, the author opened the gym [face covering]

It's really beautiful, but there are too few, not enough to watch (sad I like Pokémon very much, but there are too few without female protagonists. The same is true on Tomato and QD. It's rare to find one I like. I will keep reading. The author just doesn't have to be a eunuch. I wait for the update every day. It's really good [crying]

Okay, ok, it's very interesting. I like novels without heroines, and the protagonist doesn't conquer too many mythical beasts. It's not like seeing a mythical beast conquering one. It feels very good. However, the description of the mythical beasts is a bit too different. Some mythical beasts feel a bit out of line in IQ. I feel that the emotions are a bit too rich, but everything else is pretty good. Among the elf stories on the tomato-colored platform, it's pretty good. The thing that attracts me the most is actually that he has electric cats and Zeraora, especially the part when he was just born. He's so cute. I want to play with the cat.

I think the quality of this book is quite high. The author has also illustrated most of the chapters. Those who have not had much contact with elves can still read it. However, I feel that the development of the protagonist is a bit suppressed in the later chapters. He has been relying on the frozen bird, emmm. It is not bad, but the villains the protagonist encounters often control mythical beasts and other things, such as Aquaman, but the protagonist is still in his job. Industry level, I feel the gap is huge, and then I think the most interesting thing about elves is to explore outside, rather than being delayed by the competition. And then being forced to be pulled in at the Sanshen Lake is a bit unbearable. Forget about pulling in, and the only good frozen bird is forced not to be taken with you, which is a bit frustrating. The part of traveling to the parallel world is also a bit boring. But overall it's still well written. Especially the pictures are very nice.

The only one on Tomato that I am following the serialization of is really good. The character of the protagonist is also a bit fun. The appearance of the Pokémon is also very three-dimensional and the plot is not too draggy. However, some of the Pokémon that appear later feel like they have not been seen for a long time and are mentioned in a sentence or two (Torako and Minus). Although it is unavoidable in Pokémon fan fiction, I still hope that they can have more descriptions (as well as daily interactions).

It didn't look very good at first, but then it became better. Don't read the first half of the commentary, there are always people criticizing it which affects the perception. In fact, it is a double protagonist, the male protagonist Su Hao and the female protagonist Dian Xi. Of course, this is my feeling (Su Hao is of course the absolute protagonist), and I don't mean to knock their CP. They are more like father and daughter, just because they are both irreplaceable and unique. But when it comes to cp feeling... Hehe, I like Freeze Bird in the early stage, Lysiram and Mewtwo in the later stage. I like all three of them very much, and I feel very connected to them all. It's not ambiguous, it's the kind of tacit understanding, respect for each other, and the occasional feelings such as longing, worry, and the feeling of giving everything for the protagonist in times of crisis... It's just that I feel that I am frustrated. Regardless of these, the friendship between the protagonist and Pokémon is also very touching. My favorite is Lucario, a super handsome dog, very reliable. When the protagonist died, he was the only Pokémon to face all this. It was really heartbreaking. It wanted to die for the protagonist, but was forcibly sent away. Also, this book has a high content of tsundere [heartfelt], it smells so good, who knows the charm of tsundere, but those who are a little too arrogant often miss the opportunity to go with the protagonist, such as Ancient Sword Leopard, or even more so Rayquaza (Rayquaza is really good, he has been struggling with himself, he has a good impression of the protagonist, but at the same time he refuses to admit it) Blessed are those who like tsundere

Oh my god, I really like Su Hao's character. He is very gentle towards Pokémon. Each Pokémon's character is very interesting, and there is basically no brainless plot. The legendary Pokémon that appear in it are also very interesting. (I don't know when I will write about cute little Xie Mi). Rayquaza is also very handsome. Is the author trying to make him an enemy? ? (Don't know how to say it)

Great writing, keep up the good work.

It's quite interesting. It's better written among the Pokémon fanfics I've read. It's logical and plotted. It's not mindless in a way. I still like it very much. What I like most is that the author will add a beautiful Pokémon picture at the end of each chapter ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪ I hope this book will get better and better, and the author will finish it smoothly at his own pace. Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

It's good to watch. I like it without a female protagonist. The plot is always very strong and there's no brainless cheating.

6 Super masterpieces of good elf literature

Overall, it's a very good fanfic that suits my taste. I don't really like Mr. Lu's fanfics that have too many game settings. I prefer this kind of fanfic that is more realistic and not turn-based.

It's a pretty good book. The author's battle is actually not very good, but the setting is always crushing, so it's acceptable. The daily interaction with the elves is also very good. The character writing of Elf is also passable, among which Huzi is really good, and I really hope to make Huzi a genius who relies on his own efforts. You can see it overall. There are no obvious unacceptable shortcomings

It's very good-looking. It's the most comprehensive book I've ever read that covers all combat systems. It's also very funny and humorous. But I feel there's a slight flaw in the early stage. Because the author has no qualifications in this book, so in order to give the protagonist's elf skills, he wrote too many legendary elves in the early stage. The protagonist's elf skills are too strong, and it feels like the fun of the battle is less. It's basically instant kills. It's much better in the middle and later stages, and there's a lot more passion in the battle. More, and one thing I don't like is that there is a little bit of battle content in the whole book, and the content between legendary elves and saving the world basically runs through the whole book. It's a bit too much, and it reminds me of another book. The protagonist's own elf appeared in the early stage, and in the later period, it was all about the legendary elves. I don't like this a bit, but this book is much better than that one. All in all, it is worth recommending despite its shortcomings. Five-star praise