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Very good, Xiaoyuer is the best in the world!

It is real and beautiful, the writing style is like a scumbag, and the portrayal of the two female protagonists, Xiao Yuer and Shen Youchu, are the most similar to the original work among the fan fictions I have read. The changes in their attitudes are also very logical. The rating may not be high due to the reputation of the original work and the slow pace of this article, which is sharp and then sweet. However, it can be regarded as the pinnacle of the fan fiction. Highly recommend! ! ! ! ! Also, can the update be faster? [Blow a kiss]

Really, as a fanfic, the writing is already very good. Where Lao Liu didn't do it well, the author has done a better job. Personally, I feel that if you want to read Tomato, I really don't want to be reborn. I just read this fanfic. The author is very creative. Up to now, the relationship between the two girls is still very sweet. Xiao Yuer has let go of her pride and worked hard to pursue her love. It's great, please give it a try.

In the early stage, Bian Shishi helped Chen Hansheng persuade him to get back together, which was a bit inconsistent with the character. The original work helped him get back together, mainly because Professor Sun said something about the child not having a father and Xiao Yuer being pregnant. And it's a bit strange that Xiaoyu can't see through Chen's thoughts. It should be easy to guess Xiaoyu'er's character. After so many years together, he still doesn't understand Chen's character. Chen intends to take everything. In this case, Bian Shishi is even less likely to help Chen get back together. Help Chen get back together with his ex. Shen Youchu was asked to leave. How could she get back together and persuade her to leave? She was not stupid. If she tried to persuade Shen Youchu to get back together at this time, Chen would definitely want to take everything. But she didn't know that Xiao Yu'er would suffer even more, so he would not help persuade her to get back together. It can only be said that Bian Shi helped persuade them to get back together, which was a bit unreasonable. They should all know very well that Chen planned to want them all, not that he didn't know how to choose. Xiao couldn't see this, and it was a bit unreasonable. But the overall feeling is pretty good, come on! ! ! It's great to be able to write like this.

I am convinced that "Power Generation for Love" can publish 400 chapters. Although the writing style is a bit immature, it is really written with great care. Come on, by the way, how old are you?

If the fanfic is of good quality, you can see that the author has his own ideas. Although I have only read half of it, it has already greatly alleviated the discomfort I felt when I just finished reading the ending of the original book. Come on, boss, thank you, boss!

Come on, it feels good

Xiao Yu'er's tsundere, how can I put it, is a bit inconsistent with the original work. The characters who were buried in the original work have come out, which is good. There is also Shen Youchu's kind of naiveness, except that he can't turn on the light. Luo Xuan's line seems not very easy to write now. I guess aborting the child can be written as foreshadowing. It depends on how to fill in the holes. There is also Yanyan, my best friend, there is basically nothing to explain now, and there are many lines to be written, but I still support it, come on, come on. I hope we can coexist head-on and peacefully

Do you feel uncomfortable when you read comics? Spreading dog food back and forth, but he turns out to be a scumbag. Damn it. Such a good girl, you can give it to me if you don't need it. The author must write it well.

I hope to give Xiao Yuer and Youchu a good ending.

Come on, author, don't let Chen Hansheng think he was born again

It's very good. The character's personality is very different from the original work, and it also makes up for the regrets of the original work after the second Shura field. I hope there will be more emotional scenes in the future. Chen Shengsheng owes Xiao Yuer and Xiao Hanbao too much [crying][crying][crying]

Can you bully Xiao Yuer less and make her suffer less injustice?

Come on. Feeling sorry for Xiao Yuer [crying]

Come on, my heart is tilted toward Xiaoyuer Wow! The author writes so well, I envy his imagination

Come on! ! ! Looking forward to seeing a different ending Update your review and check how long you have read it. Big cheers for the author! [Please update]

The writing style is about 60% as good as Lao Liu, and the character of Shen is relatively restored. Xiao's description is a bit strange. If Xiao in the original work is arrogant, white and rich, Xiao in this book is a bit weird like the male version of Huang Rong, a tomboy. At the same time, Chen's personality has been weakened. The dissonance brought about by the weakened career line is that a rich second generation like Qian Xiaoxiao can make a fool of himself in front of Chen, but Chen is helpless... The scumbag character in the emotional line has also been weakened, which makes Chen appear more innocent to a certain extent, so that I always feel a bit want to complain when I watch the interaction between Chen and Xiao. Overall, it's pretty good. I've written 500 chapters as a fan, and I'm a true fan. I'll give it five stars out of four.

Dare I ask the author, what would Huang Hui and Yan Ning do with this book? Can you make Huang Hui's fate a little more miserable, like if you go in for ten or eight years? I'll give you a reward.

Come on, author, you have made up for the regret I had a few years ago, thank you Woohoo, this is the most similar fan I have ever seen to Lao Liu's writing style, come on!

It makes up for a lot of regrets, it's not that sharp, and it's very comfortable to read. This adaptation gives Chen Hansheng time and space to operate. It's not like the original text where he was caught off guard and had a child all of a sudden. Chen Hansheng could only use the child to tie up Xiao Yu'er and Shen Hanhan, but the price is that the relationship is not as good as before. As a result, the subsequent chapters are basically centered around the two children, but this one is much better! Xiao Yu'er is still arrogant, and You Chu also has eyes for him. His character is very consistent with the original work. The author's writing style and writing ideas are very good. The plot is very fascinating, especially the Han Han Fish Plan. The author spent a lot of effort to win back the two of them step by step instead of using children's unnatural manipulation. I think this book is better than the chapters after the second Shura Field in the original text. Cheers, go, go, give it a thumbs up [sending heartfelt] In the end, Shen Youchu is number one in the world! [Blowing kiss]

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. Okay, I'll never touch it again, please, brother, really, it's just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore😭😭, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you, just one more chapter.

I hope the author can create a perfect story for Xiao Yuer

I hope the author can keep writing. Thank you very much for realizing the regret. Many people say that the original concept and plot of this book have big problems, but I think since it is "I really don't want to be reborn", all regrets should be resolved. Not because regrets exist, but to realize the beauty. Well, let regrets never exist. Chen Hansheng may have given Xiao Shen the hope of a tenacious life and gave Yu'er the regretlessness of youth. However, rebirth does not mean no regrets at all. Otherwise, the original book would not be so popular. But in the eyes of our readers, what we need is not the super popularity of this book. When others talk about it in the future, I can proudly say that I have read this book well. What we want is that since regrets have been eliminated, we should be perfect and have no regrets, instead of being like the original book where the fish and the treasure lost their own humanity and brilliance in the end. Thank you very much, the author, for giving us this book. Taking this opportunity, I hope you can continue writing it unswervingly. Of course, I am not criticizing the original work for being useless. In a way, the original work is both a success and a failure. I really hope you can keep writing this book. I also hope you will not forget the original intention of writing this book. Thank you.

Hope to continue updating The atmosphere is much better than that in the later period of the original work, but Chen Hansheng has a much better temper and lacks the gangster temperament of the original work. Although he is a scumbag, that kind of temperament can be used in the business war plot. Then the two heroines handled it very well, I hope there will be more sugar

I really like the plot, and the author's writing is also very good. It's one of the best among fan fiction. However, the peach blossom eyes, pear dimples, high ponytails, and some modal particles in Sichuan and Chongqing dialects of the two heroines are not as prominent as in the original text, and the sense of substitution is slightly weaker. However, the flaws do not hide the advantages, and the five stars are very good. Come on, author, please update more, I can't get enough of it.

The author's rating... Damn! Personally, I still hope for a sweeter one, but in the original work, there are two female protagonists. If you change it, it will be a bit..., Just don't abuse it, I just want the three of them to have a good ending. Tomato is the wrong author! Change it to something else, remember to send it to me! [Please update]

I can't bear to read it, I'm afraid I'll lose it after reading it [top post], if I can, I hope to keep reading like this, but the story always has an ending, and what we hope most is to have a perfect ending. Thank you Tan Jun for writing [laughing] [love] [love] [love]

I read the manga and it was only chapter 200. When the two reconciled after the first Shura field, can anyone tell me how they ended up in the original version?

What I play is reality

Come on, come on, come on. After reading it, I hope the author will not hurt Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu, and let Chen Hansheng treat them better. Alas, this Chen Hansheng is still too naive, and his slickness is revealed in every line.