The Bking Development Record of Cubs in the World of Cultivation

It's so beautiful. It's my first time to compete with CPs from two sects, and there are 1,400 Sons of Destiny. I'm really looking forward to Yun Han defeating them one by one.

I really like this type of writing! [Learned] 1 [About the appearance/character of the male protagonist]. The male protagonist is very good-looking and is currently a child. She has short platinum hair, waveless golden eyes, a platinum sun pattern on her forehead, and a sealed wolf mask! Cool and cute. In terms of personality, he still has some funny attributes in front of the system, but the persona he establishes outside is that of a little genius who is exactly the same as the cold master. I love you so much! ! 2 [About the plot] The plot is very interesting. First of all, if the male protagonist systematically improves his reputation, he will gain access to things. The male protagonist caused many images of heaven and earth before he was born (the male protagonist himself bought it), which caused a huge stir among people outside, making everyone outside look forward to the birth of a peerless genius. Therefore, it attracts readers' interest 3. [Key Points] I like articles without cp and female protagonists, and this article is exactly that. Moreover, there is also a master who is cold, powerful, and very good to his disciples. He is also a sword master. Although he is not a CP, he is very good at fighting. [Blowing kiss]

I really like the character of the male protagonist, Master, and I hope it will have a happy ending. I really don't understand what you are saying about Yun Feiling. He was abandoned by his biological parents, and then grew up with a pack of wolves. In the end, he watched the wolves die in front of his eyes. Just because these wolves were valuable, he hunted them, the survival of the fittest, the weak and the strong. I won't say anything about this. After that, he began to hate humans. This is normal. Moreover, when it comes to personality, everyone has their own personality. Moreover, in the world of cultivation, the law of the jungle is the survival of the fittest. If some saints can't stand it, just ignore it. Do you have to say something like "You can't kill him, he is still alive"? It was a world where the strong were respected, and he was slowly being influenced. Then let the male protagonist become his apprentice and name him. 1. There is no harm to the male protagonist becoming his apprentice. 2. The male protagonist also likes this master. 3. The male protagonist's parents agree, so what if you don't agree. 4. This is just a novel, he is a one-dimensional character, and his actions are determined by the author. Anyway, I quite like this character [laughs awkwardly]

I really like the master. I feel that he has devoted all his emotions to the protagonist. The protagonist creates strange phenomena and makes everyone think that he is extremely talented. Then, he is raised by the master who has extraordinary strength and status as a disciple right after he was born. I hope that in the future, the master will only have the protagonist as his apprentice. The protagonist has no cp. Without cp, no matter who is good to the protagonist, male or female, I can secretly poke him.

Very beautiful, a fairy product! ! By the way, is the author a girl or a boy? The writing feels a bit like a girl, but are there really girls writing male videos (deep in thought)

It looks good, but it's too short. Please don't take a rest. Update it soon.

Damn, you are really awesome. These books are so awesome that they are so long that they hit me hard. I can't stop reading [lick the screen][lick the screen]

Okay, okay, the female profile really made me feel at ease. There is no male Ning and Mei Nan, nor female Ning and Mei Nv. Most of the psychological details are described, which is more funny. There should be no heroine, and the author should be a girl. I can only say that it is very suitable for female readers, readers without CP, and readers who like to easily heal their daily lives. It is really reassuring😌

After reading two other books, I clicked on this book and found that it had been discontinued! What's going on? DaDa [Crying] This setting is also very interesting. It really pokes me. I hope DaDa will not be passive and slow down and continue to update. After all, I am already a big fan of DaDa. I have finished reading DaDa's three books. I really like DaDa's writing style and the plot is very consistent with each book. It really pokes me. [Blows a kiss] DaDa, I know you are working hard, but please don't work hard and continue to update. This book will become popular in the future [shy] I don't know which point I read in the later chapters. I felt the malice toward women, so I stopped reading. I had saved it before, but I removed it because I felt it was discriminatory against women. I haven't read it since. Then I suddenly remembered it and came here to review it.

It's quite comfortable to watch, but the combat system is a bit broken, and it's forced down for the sake of storytelling. The plot is pretty good at this point, but the jokes and other small humor should be changed. You can't keep using the same type all the time. You have to come up with something new. Overall, the flaws don't hide the flaws, it's good. From the back, it seems to be average, so I don't want to give full marks.

Update soon. Didn't this book just come out? It's gone soon. The system treats the host very carefully. It's really good. There's also a master. I really love it. Just don't arrange a heroine later and just keep writing like this. Jue Juezi

Looking forward to the new book! I think this question is very interesting! (Urge the boss to quickly code and beg [please update])

It's so beautiful hehe~ The daily life between Master and Weiwei is super warm!! The others are also very nice! But I think the daily bickering between the two sects is more interesting😎 It feels like the eldest lady and the little bodyguard have seen each other [shy] It's boring and I can't stand it anymore. I like the master as a person, but is it a bit too much for the master to appear? It's the same as the two protagonists [Petrochemical], Samsung said that he loved before, goodbye (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ

The setting is very novel, written from the perspective of a male cub, but it is also in line with girls' reading tastes. The handsome male cub grows up without taking a single step, but the protagonist studies hard and steadily. The golden finger is accumulated through continuous learning, which is equivalent to the system giving the protagonist a learning space, and then the time in the learning space progresses very slowly, equivalent to a day outside, and the protagonist has been studying like this for 5 years for 10,000 years! ! ! ! ! It feels great! ! ! And I feel like the protagonist's master is more to my liking! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting and quite funny, but the protagonist's different treatment of his master and his parents and the author's description of these two characters made me uncomfortable. It's completely obvious which character the author is partial to.

I read two and a half books. The first one was about the housekeeper, and the second time was about Chen Qingge. Halfway through, I felt a familiar sense of profiteer. Then I opened the homepage and saw that it was the same author. The writing style is guaranteed. Every book is well written. Even the dark history is written much better than most. You can use some brains when reading [shy] Although the previous articles were not long, I still felt moved after reading them. By the way, don't just focus on the housekeeper. There are only four chapters here, which is better.

In fact, the protagonist of the novel is well portrayed, and the dialogue with the system is also very interesting. The various supporting characters and the main characters are also very good. This book is good in every aspect. The master is the only poisonous point. The master's views on human beings have not changed at all for thousands of years. When you are strong, you will plunder and plunder, and you will not speak well in a sparring match. You insist on attacking someone's hometown and forcing them out. This is also the case when you take the protagonist to challenge the foundation-building monks later. People who are righteous will be beaten just by squatting at home. Come to the door, the city is damaged, the ancestor is injured, and he has to rush to give gifts to others [what] [what]. This notorious person is not besieged by the whole world of cultivation. It is really the people of this world who are kind. Don't tell me what the world of cultivation is about the jungle. Master Although my father is very powerful, he is not the strongest in the world of cultivation. If someone with some intentions uses some tricks, the reputation of the master will definitely be ruined. In this case, the sect will also be implicated, so the master and the sect can still be stable. I think it depends purely on the kindness of people in this world.

Super super super super love it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍I have read all the books by my wife ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

The following is just my personal opinion, don't criticize me, it's your opinion: Overall, the article is quite interesting. The characterization is very fleshed out. There are many flesh-and-blood, lovable characters. But the article is not without its shortcomings. What most affects my perception the most is that the supporting characters and other story lines account for too much. I'm a real protagonist. I was attracted by the name of this book. But I skipped a lot of chapters while reading the book. The main reason is: one thing can be said many times and written in many chapters. For example: Regarding the relationship between Linyuan Sect and Lingxiao Sect, the author has already shaped it very well. There are already more than 400 chapters. Do you still write it? If I write any more, it will be a bit watery. There is also a dialogue between the protagonist and the system. The protagonist misses his past life, and the psychological activities of his supporting characters are too miscellaneous. I understand that this article is mainly humorous. But this leaves me, the protagonist, to find the main text in the cracks. But generally speaking, the writing style and the character design are still the type I like. So I gave it four stars. I hope the author can adopt my suggestions. Write more stories about the protagonist's upgrading, fighting monsters, and growth, and describe less about other supporting characters as long as they don't affect the main line of the story. Thank you very much [send heartfelt message]

The male protagonist was dragged into his own world to pay off debts, bound to the system, and relied on admiration points in exchange for skills. He worked hard to earn admiration points, worked hard to learn various skills, and constantly improved his own attributes, just to be a favored man of heaven. He knows a lot, which is the result of silent efforts behind the scenes. He has been studying since he was born, learning and practicing every day, which makes people feel inferior. Cheating + working hard, he is not the proud man of heaven, who is the proud man of heaven! I really like the character of the master, Yun Feiling, who is born with a sword bone and mutated top-notch ice spirit root. He became famous at a young age, has explosive martial arts, and dominates the charts in various ways, crushing a generation. He has no understanding of the world, is dull and straightforward, relies on force to solve everything, is free and wanton, and acts as he pleases. I feel that he is the true pride of heaven, the kind that God chases after him to feed him!

The protagonist's ability to appear saintly in front of others is still great, but if he uses it to appear saintly in front of others, is it like the 15-yuan bracelets at roadside stalls? Just a suggestion, I still like this book. You have to use the divine sanctification as a general attack, author.

Let me briefly talk about the points of avoiding pitfalls (the poisonous points that I can't accept the most). The master of the protagonist made me feel very uncomfortable. Basically, I had an unknown anger from the beginning, including but not limited to: stealing the protagonist when he was born, regardless of other people's feelings, drawing a sword when he disagreed, pretending to be a disciple to follow the protagonist, beating people for no reason, etc. I am very unhappy, maybe because I will bring in a supporting role. I will be beaten for doing nothing, and I will be beaten for helping. Although his childhood experience was very miserable, it is also for the good of the protagonist, but the author has given him the gift of high intelligence, why not write him as a normal person? Moreover, the protagonist is very strong, and his worries are completely unnecessary! So angry! He still has so many roles! ! ! ! ! It feels like he really has no regard for the protagonist's wishes! ! ! ! ! But the whole text is really good! The character of the protagonist is very well developed. I feel like it is the reaction of ordinary people after suddenly being exposed to the system. The interaction with the other supporting characters is also very interesting! The storyline of the supporting character (Child of Destiny) is also very interesting! The scene descriptions are also great. There are no fanciful descriptions of female body parts like those in male-video novels. It's great and very enjoyable! But I had no choice but to give up after reading half of it. I really couldn't accept this master's setting! Finally, I look forward to a new book~

The writing is quite good, and the setting is also quite realistic. At least most of the comments section are talking about the characters, which already shows that many people have brought the emotions into the characters. In fact, I think it's okay. The character settings are very full. Hmm, even if most people are angry because of that one person's setting, it's okay. Many novel writers have incomplete characters and settings, which can't attract readers' interest at all. And if this novel can really be mentioned, it is considered a success of the novel. And I really don't think it's anything, plus I think the protagonist's mentality is very similar to mine.

I've been reading it for a while. It's a very good book! Every character has flesh and blood, the plot is interesting, and everyone feels good. There is no intrigue in the clan, only the love for Xiao Yunhan, which is full of warmth. The change of the master also makes people feel warm [send heart] These tender feelings are very healing! But the most important thing when posting a review is——When will Xiao Yunhan grow taller [crying][crying][crying] It seems that Yunhan's thoughts are becoming more and more dependent on the thoughts of children. It doesn't matter if he is tired of it, it is just a bit unattractive? After reading it, I just remembered to write a follow-up review. I felt it was a bit of a pity that the ending was a little rushed. I wanted to see the interaction between brothers more, so I ended up not writing much, which is a bit regretful.

This review was published when the book was first updated. At present, I can only roughly understand the story from the introduction. But for me, whether it is the character of the protagonist, the functions of the system, or the plot, it is very 👌🏻. I feel that it will continue to implement the author's previous style, no CP, and it is still a relaxed article with a little bit of nonsense! I don't know yet, but I have always been very confident in the author's writing. After all, there are not many authors who can hit me more than once in every novel! I will wait until the novel is finished or the plot reaches its climax to review it. It's just that the author is currently in double-edit mode and has not updated [I'm about to cry]. I have already finished the previous part n many times.

The writing style is good, the protagonist and whoever the destiny child is have a sense of CP (), the protagonist and the system are like father and son (nod), the rebellious son and the worried father, I think it can be renamed the Host Development Program (?) After reading other people's comments, I feel like… I am indeed buying corruption…e…

Finally finished chasing! From the serialization in 2004 to now, this book has accompanied me through many days and nights. Although I put it down for a while because of my busy real life. Oh, I am so emotional. It's very interesting. It's the first time I like a system novel so much. The interaction between Xiao Wei and the system is really fun. Haha, the relationship between Lu and his son [making faces] and the Master are also very touching. The final exit is really so tearful. I really hope that the author can write a story about Shen Wei, Master and the others going through time [crying]. I really want to read it! The plot is very exciting, the writing is also very good, and the background setting is quite unique. I like it!

The protagonist is a little darling, and the description of the master is very detailed. Although he is rough in the early stage, he is a rough and medium character, and he still has the kind of beautiful, strong and miserable character, and he has the feeling of an old father taking care of his child. You can listen to the book in your free time. This feeling is very comfortable. It is a very good novel to relax the mind. I support the author. It is even more amazing if you insist on reading 2 books every day.

This book is good, but the chapters about robbing children gave me a slap in the face. I felt speechless and a little angry. Although I know this is the world of immortality, if this plot is brought into reality... I hope the author will pay attention to it in the future.

The system tells the host that it needs to learn on its own, and what it learns is its own, and only then can it be set to be a true genius with five stars! I read it just for the sake of being a bitch, and I just ignored the inner feelings of the main character, Master Boss. As a result, in the latest chapter, the author directly wrote the system as a human being, which I couldn't stand anymore. The system can be a bit of a joke, but writing it as a person who has adopted the system is low. I am kicked out of writing about a system like Moss, thank you.