Hp's Efforts Are in Vain

HP is undoubtedly a big IP and has influenced more than one generation. There are plenty of fan creations, but the level is hard to describe. This can be said to be a novel rather than an online novel. It enriches the world of the original work from the first half of the protagonist's life, and it is a more realistic world that focuses on the era rather than the protagonist's group. Looking up at the stars from deep in the quagmire. From a woman with a mediocre background and experienced ups and downs, she pursues herself and pursues freedom, from drifting with the crowd to enduring hardships to being decisive and fearless. The plot is reasonable, and the thoughts are profound, transformational and pursuing. It's a rare work that can hold up even if the original work is put aside. Thank you very much to the author for your creation. Your work not only enriches my boring daily life, but also inspires and confirms my life. I wish the author good health and all the best. Thanks for the creation.

Landed smoothly, now I can recommend it without any scruples. There is no cp growth flow. It is a rare article that can feel the sense of oppression. The overall tone is relatively depressing, the writing is not dramatic, and there is no sticky relationship between the characters. As I saw in the mid-term evaluation, 2/3 of the plot was like struggling in the mud tide, which was inevitably a bit embarrassing. She persisted until the mud tide receded, and she still had enough time to enjoy the hard-won freedom. I'm also glad that I had a final fight with No-Nose. The stars won't have lingering clouds for the rest of their lives. Compared with the previous ones, the final battle can even be called relaxing and joyful. Perhaps being feared and treated with caution is the most reasonable ending for a powerful wizard who is not the protagonist. It's too early to tell. I really didn't expect to talk about it in the future. Xing finally has a sense of déjà vu as the protagonist. He has money, power and fun. The ending is that Xing becomes an astronaut (I'm sure

What is very rare is an HP non-CP fanfic that is not about falling in love with Snape/Draco/Gemini/Tom and others! ! I almost missed the good article just by reading the introduction. First of all, the heroine is 1.9 Meters tall, has short red hair, and is super handsome in a suit. I really like this image. There are even elementary school girls who are asking around if this "senior" has a girlfriend, hahahaha. Secondly, the heroine's magic power is strong, but due to family reasons, her expressions sometimes lack common sense or even awkwardness, such as the defense between men and women. Her family has not taught her these things, which makes her very weak in this aspect. She feels that Snape is completely getting along with him as a brother + a paper template tool person + a potion bribery collaborator. Snape often calls him a guy with a brain of splendens, hahahahaha, and they sometimes get along very much. The thing that the heroine pursues from the beginning to the end has never changed, and that is home. I really feel sorry for Liz, and her left arm has never healed throughout the whole story. It has been injured all the time, whether it is the injury to her left arm caused by her family, or the subsequent soul healing, and the Dark Mark. The exchange of her left arm in order to bring her father back always makes me feel a little regretful. But fortunately, the ending is good. She has Snake Gabeng who has always been with her, her brother who puts her first, her parents who have stepped out of the gloom, and Lulu who regards her as the light of redemption. Everyone has a good ending. Her obsession with "home" is gradually becoming more complete. It is a very warm ending. I like it very much! In addition, the side story of Liz's Hufflepuff world line is also very cute, one of my favorite side lines! Finally, this is the best HP fanfic I have ever seen. There is no sweet love, only a firm and persistent heroine. Her faults do not hide her faults. I highly recommend it to an eleven-year-old bookworm. It is absolutely worth it! I hope the author can continue his efforts and look forward to the next work! (I hope it's also CP-free [thinking])

I've finished reading it, it's pretty good Mine points: Very abusive, the family is very deformed, which makes the heroine have a very strange personality, very paranoid, her feelings towards her parents make me think that the heroine has Stockholm Syndrome, Black Lion House, friendly to Sri Lankan fans

This book is really great! This is the best Harry Potter HP I have ever read! It has the heroine's own story, but it's also connected to the main storyline of Harry Potter, but it's not too much, and it's controlled just right! It's great for people like me who don't like fans to repeat the plot of Harry Potter! This is the only HP I've finished reading. The author's words made me feel the feelings of Little Star. I actually felt Liz's feelings and fear of Voldemort when Liz was talking to Gellert as a food master and apprentice and fighting for Free to symbolize her freedom. Maybe I watched it at night, but I really felt a little afraid and depressed about the Dark Lord in the plot. The final ending was happy, but I felt a sense of regret in my heart. I thought Liz was able to kill the Dark Lord in the end, but the gap in strength over the past few decades was really too big. It was expected, wasn't it? How to put it, I feel like Liz has a heart full of holes, but that heart is still there, looking forward to the future for everything she insists on, and for her freedom. I loved the emotion of this book! Not vulgar and special! No Mary Sue plot, purely indigenous!

Compared with other fanfics, this is a great book. It has no OOC and the writing style is very delicate. The era of Little Star was the peak of the Dark Lord's power, so the background and the middle and later stages will be a little darker and more depressing [I almost cried] Just to mention it, Grindelwald was so cruel when he died... I kept crying [Crying] No CP is great!

This book is really unique. The whole text sets a tone of contradiction, restriction, and regret, which made me depressed, resonate, and think. Conflict refers to the psychological and even physical contradictions of the protagonist. The contradiction between spirit, soul and memory, The contradiction of emotions, the contradiction of choice, Curse mixed with wolfsbane potion to balance each other, An arm marked by a Death Eater, Unable to control the magic that attaches silver to objects when released, There are also contradictions between inner vision and external conditions. . . Limitations are the inner bottom line as well as the limitations of strength and objective conditions. Keep the limits of your inner bottom line, The limitations of having good intentions when they cannot be avoided, Strength can never break through the limitations of the top level. Limitations to protect your family, My brain is never very good at limiting it, Inability to resist the limitations of mental attacks, The future of the original plot cannot be changed, The fulfillment of the protagonist's two prophecies. . . Regret means that the author never thought of changing the original regrettable plot, but like a mature writer, Put the real misfortune bloody before your eyes. In fact, Rowling does the same, and so do many famous novels. Only a few characters escape their original fate, seemingly just because the plot requires it. Regardless of his strength, it seems that the protagonist is just an ordinary wizard in the original version, living a rough life in such a background. The magical world is not as magical and beautiful as it seems, it also has a real and clear side. The character of the protagonist is actually a side of us. The longing for family affection in childhood, The sense of urgency that screams in the heart when studying, huddled with insecurity, Confused or fearful about future destiny, Or maybe he has a straightforward personality, I can't understand the meaning behind the words, But there was a flash of inspiration at the critical moment of life and death. She faces the truth without indulging in fantasy, Be determined, push yourself and never give up. Even if you don't know how to twist and turn, you are still sensitive to the current situation. This is what I envy. This book has a great impact on my state of mind, because it is not a qualified novel. We have long been numb to people's suffering, or we have learned to deceive ourselves and others. Because we can't solve it and can't bear it, how can we still have the motivation to go on? Therefore, we can only forget and deceive ourselves and others. Maybe it's because the protagonist's characteristics are similar to mine, so I was attracted to watch it till the end.

After much debate, I gave it five stars. The book is a good book, but the plot is a bit bitter. It's not the refreshing style of most HP fans. To a certain extent, it's quite depressing. Especially when I was halfway through it, I wanted to finish it but it was a bit uncomfortable. The heroine was a bit too miserable. The author's plot design is very good. It was written from the student days of Si Jiao and James's generation. Except for the finale, basically no changes were made to the original plot. The main story is about a story passing through your world, and the plot is inserted into the blank space of the original work. This is rare. I have seen many fans who have changed it beyond recognition, or even just used a shell to do whatever they want. I think the author should also be a long-time book fan. He has deep thoughts on the original work and has his own unique insights into each character. Now from the perspective of Snake Yard, he has analyzed each character differently from the original work, which is also rare. The author's writing style is also very good, and the descriptions of small details and thoughts in many places are very delicate, accurate and brilliant. Looking forward to the author's next book.

It's super beautiful, I don't want to say more. 1. There is no OOC at all and no CP will be removed. 2. It does not affect the main line and basically does not blend. The blending also makes the original work more perfect and fills in some pitfalls. 3. The heroine has an obvious growth line and does not deprive anyone of her highlights. 4. The family line is a bit depressing. Like a Chinese family, it may seem aggrieved, but in the end the result is still good, and we will forgive each other later. 5. The heroine is powerful but not reckless. The highlights are very cool, the writing style is a bit depressing and heavy in the later stage, but it is very beautiful. 6. The heroine did not deprive Harry Potter and others of their highlights. The heroine's only highlight in the battle was that she felled Snape and Fred. Also during the war, when Harry pretended to be dead, he fought Voldemort 1v1. Without the strength of the deified heroine, she tried her best and was defeated honorably. But in the end, it was Harry Potter who killed Voldemort, just like in the original book. However, when Voldemort's body was collected later, it was discovered that the heroine had seriously injured Voldemort. 7. It's very beautiful, except for being a little depressing, but it's in line with the real world of Harry Potter. It's so real. It feels like the heroine is a person from the wizarding world, a living person. The heroine has a kind of Snape's depressive style.

I think the author's writing is very suitable for that world. Unlike other fan fiction, the protagonist is more powerful than the original protagonist group from the beginning. Liz's growth is traceable, and her character creation is very complete. She is no longer just a calm, smart, etc. Image. Moreover, the author has also done a good job in shaping Voldemort's strength. Most of the fanfics have situations where his combat power has collapsed. Voldemort, as the villain boss in the original text, has not become a background to highlight the protagonist's strength. To be honest, when I read the introduction, I thought Liz would fight Voldemort soon. The author's description of the student days in Hogwarts College is also very exciting. After reading it, I wish Liz could use some cheats to enjoy her student life. I think the best thing is that the author did not mess with the original CP, did not interfere too much with the character's emotional line, and the protagonist did not use cheats to make the story more real. If I hadn't known in advance that this was fan fiction, I would have really thought that the author was writing a Harry Potter spin-off or something. This is really a heroine story. All the stories revolve around the heroine, making the heroine stronger and pursuing what she wants. Watching Liz become stronger and stronger is really the achievement of raising a daughter. The author's writing is super, super good. It is one of the most reasonable and immersive fan stories I have ever read. Don't miss it just because of the title. I just saw this book on the list hundreds of times before giving it a try. I was so happy reading it.

An irrefutable masterpiece. I have rarely seen such outstanding works on this subject. As I saw someone say before, this book is not only an online article, it can also be called a novel. This book has been controversial due to the twists and turns of its plot and the suffering of the heroine, and has also received a lot of criticism. Some people say that the heroine is not sober and decisive enough, but I think this is exactly the character image the author wants to create. The author did not insist on creating a conventional heroine image, but put himself in her shoes and constructed a rich character idea. What Stalis might do in that situation, and her state of mind. The author has vivid proportions and delicate emotions, creating a group of effective three-dimensional characters. At the same time, it gives more new meanings and characteristics to the original characters, so I think it is a qualified and excellent novel as a novel.

It's a really good story. People say it's depressing, but I actually don't think so, because the protagonist works really hard, and her efforts are not in vain, and she gets what she wants. It's really rare to find a high-quality HP fanfic on Tomato. It ranks in the top five of all the Tomato books I've read. HP fanfic ranks first for me. It's the kind of protagonist I like who lives seriously in the magical world. I really liked Liz when she was a child. She could repay wrongs and take revenge, which was very cool. I still remember the HP fanfic Black Gray that I read many years ago. Although the protagonists, context and even time periods of these two stories are different, they are both telling stories seriously. The feeling when they tell it is very similar. This is the first book review I have left on Tomato. It is really beautiful and cannot be missed. There are more than 200 words in it, which is unbelievable.

An excellent Harry Potter fanfic, it does not rely on the original plot, but opens a new chapter from the protagonist's perspective. The plot development and extended settings are also very consistent with the original settings. All the original main plots have become butterfly wings that affect the protagonist's life. This is very good in various fanfics. The protagonist's character and growth are very solid and moving, allowing us to see what life is like for people outside Rowling's worldview.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, it's a masterpiece among HP fans. I also missed this book several times, but I opened it when I was bored and was gradually attracted by the personality charm of Little Star. This book is neither cool nor sweet, but it is very true. The darkness during Voldemort's period, the school bullying of James Potter and others, etc., Which I have never realized deeply before, are revealed in front of me through the perspective of the protagonist in this book. ... I don't know what to say. Maybe it's because I just finished watching the extra story and saw Liz in other parallel worlds with completely different fates from Slytherin's Liz… In short, my feelings are very complicated. Stalis is so miserable, but the ending is always good. Well. Well. Even after reading this book, every time I glance at the cover from the bookshelf, I still feel sour in my heart [almost crying]

It's very invincible and beautiful. If it's classified as a drama rather than a sad story, I feel the fear of Voldemort for the first time. After all, not everyone is the "protagonist" and has powerful abilities. Not everyone has the power to change the plot. Compared with other The "compensation" and "rescue" of fan fiction, Little Star brought me a different feeling. She frantically searched for hope in adversity. Her forbearance under Voldemort's rule gave her an extra "self-knowledge", which gave me a deeper understanding of HP's combat power.

It's very good-looking, not a cool novel. I've read so many HP books, and there's only one reborn Draco (who seems to be called a villain... Ruthless?) And another time-traveled Black, the one who plays snakes and the Cruciatus Curse, and Orochimaru. Really, these three books are the only ones that basically don't have the halo of the protagonist in my eyes, but they must still have it, otherwise they will never be able to survive that crazy bald man. While I was reading it, I thought about giving up because the main character was a bit too miserable and I couldn't stand it anymore. I felt so bad for her. The left arm of the main character was so troubled in the main text. Everyone in this article is working hard to survive. I have basically never seen the emergence of OOC. The overall trend is also very consistent with the original work. I am very satisfied. A lot of HP fanfics describe the bald lunatic as having no strength, so he probably isn't crazy enough. But this kind of situation never occurs in this book. The protagonist is miserable at the hands of Voldemort. But overall, I'm really satisfied. The quality is really high, and it's much more enjoyable to read than those mindless cool articles, because this makes me feel more involved, it's so beautiful. But I treat Little Xingxing as my daughter, and I love Little Xingxing very much.

This is an ordinary but hard-working heroine who climbed to the top step by step from being illiterate. He truly achieved this despite the cowardice of human nature. Nor give up the perseverance deep inside. Sometimes I wonder. If he came to the Black Tower for the first time. Meet the Dark Lord Grindelwald. This is the first formal meeting like this, maybe I will become his disciple. Complete his glory. And not be branded with the Dark Mark. But just like in this book, hard work cannot be broken, and there are bound to be regrets. But you have tried your best to reduce regrets. This is the real life. Other books are more or less exaggerated or OOC, but the characters in this one are very fleshed out.

I finally finished reading it. It's really good. I don't know how the author can keep people reading. I really like Liz. Her authenticity, her desire to protect her own things and her family, her sobriety, and her struggle to find a way out in the cruel reality. , Her tenacity, the fact that she was illiterate when she first arrived at Hogwarts, and the people around her were not very friendly to her, and when her magic was difficult to control, those silver lights, those ridicules and contempt, those books that she read in countless dark nights... I want to say, Liz, you are really great! Also, the friendship between Liz and the armor really moved me [I almost cried] [I almost cried] "I am a fairy craftsmanship" Finally, I would like to thank the author for letting me see such a good book. I love you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

At the beginning, I was very curious about why this book was called this name. At the end, I suddenly realized that the name I gave was the most appropriate. From having nothing to relying on his own efforts to fight for what he wanted to protect little by little, Merlin lived up to this little star who worked hard on magic. Although Although the process was not satisfactory, he still managed to protect what he was holding after going through many obstacles. Unlike some previous heroines or HP fans, there is no pomp and circumstance like the stars doting on the moon, no Mary Sue-style talent, and no protagonist who almost defies human nature and despises life like in other sadistic novels. More importantly, Although the protagonist is miserable, she does not have unreasonable self-loathing or Long Aotian's opportunities. I think one of the things I like about this book is this. In real life, few people can have the fantasy adventure color as in novels and movies. Most of them are ordinary people like us, and the heroine does not have a forcibly implanted gold. Finger, there is no cheating beyond the imagination at the time. Even though her experiences caused her great pain, she still chose to rely on her own efforts to grow up. This is something that every protagonist in fan fiction today who relies on Goldfinger to grow up cannot achieve. This is also a quality that I cannot achieve. The author's writing is very good, very good. As a fan novel, I think the most important thing is not only the connection of the plot, the exquisiteness of the writing, the characterization of the tasks, but also the respect for the world view of the original work (the author not only did these points mentioned above, but also did them very well). I don't hate constructing my own personal settings in my fan fiction, but always remembering that this is a fan fiction is also a necessary feature of derivative novels, isn't it? If you say that you are trying to sell someone else's meat, then I think this Novel that sells feelings should get away from me [awkward laugh], run away, I mean the author has a very deep understanding of the original work and the movie, even if she does not have the iron hat Wang Hannah, I still think it is a pure-blooded novel. After all, there are some people who still write the novel as a hook even if they have such an anchor point. The author really doesn't know how many times better than them, so I am looking forward to the author's next work, and I also hope that more people can read this novel [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Very nice to look at. That is, he can make it more consistent with the original work and make it logically smooth. And finally, it was not time travel, but that he lived in that world himself, which made me feel the displacement at the bottom of the people in that world. There is a sense of struggle, and people are doing their best just to stay alive. This is basically the most comfortable piece of writing I've seen in fan fiction. There is no bias in belittling one, or as soon as the protagonist appears, everyone forgets about Harry Potter and everything else. Ah, I started to like the protagonist again. Isn't that another form of Harry Potter? And it's not that over the top, like when the protagonist appears and other CPs are torn apart. There is no protagonist whose combat power system is completely crushed as soon as he appears. Anyway, in fact, as long as it is logical, it is good. And this book is very worthy of being read carefully. For some books, I may not want to read it a second time after reading it for the first time. But for this book, I may have read it once and want to read it a second time. The fresh feeling every time is a bit different from the feeling given to me by the novel. In summary, it is a very, very, very beautiful fanfic.

The angle of this book is so novel. Other fanfics are all about joining the protagonist group or becoming the protagonist, but this fanfic seems to be about a bystander and a small character from beginning to end, without any halo of the protagonist. The reader is depressing and sad but very real. When I first started reading the Harry Potter fanfic, I just felt that there were too many regrets in the original work, so I wanted to see those regrets made up in the fanfic. But after reading this book, I felt that the regrets in the original work seemed to be a cycle of cause and effect, and there was nothing to regret. This book is really special in my heart. The second time I read this book, I really want to cry out for Liz. She has endured so much pressure, pain, grievance, and hurt, but she has never told anyone about her grievances. Whether it is the things she owns or the love given to her by others, there are very few. She will never be favored by fate, and no one favors her. Everything depends entirely on herself. Working hard, although I have been depressed, my mood has always been stable. Just reading the words makes me feel like I am going crazy for her. It seems that I can really see Liz through these words. It is really heartbreaking [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I read this book intermittently in the early stages. I was a little depressed after reading some of Lilith's childhood tribulations, and I didn't quite understand some of the plots. But the more you look at it, the more fascinating it becomes. Thanks to Lilith for bringing my favorite Sect to life, it fulfills many of the unforgettable expectations of the original work. This is one of the best Harry fan books I've ever read. Like it very much.

It's really the most satisfying HP fanfic I've ever read [Sending Hearts] (I love non-CP female characters), (Contains spoilers, read with caution [Making faces]) The protagonist in this book, Little Xingxing, begins with Tianbeng. The first dozens of chapters describe various psychological descriptions of the heroine's entrance into school and when she just entered school. The profile descriptions really made me cry. The pain caused by the original family really affects Xiaoxing's life. But from the beginning to the end, she attaches great importance to her family, whether she dares to face Voldemort to protect her mother in Diagon Alley, or cuts off her soul to save her father... When she finds out about her brother's existence, she can really relate to Little Xingxing's confusion and jealousy, but she still strongly demands to keep her brother. She hopes that no one in this family will be abandoned. She is really insecure (I feel so sorry for Xingxing). But Xingxing still accepted his younger brother, and was very, very good to him... Naming him "freedom" was a freedom that Xingxing had been elusive for most of his life... The family line between Free and Xingxing was really described in a very delicate and touching way. Let's talk about Xingxing's personal growth path. She has faced many obstacles along the way. It is hard to imagine that a little girl who did not know how to read when she entered school graduated with nearly all O's. The strong perseverance of the star himself is one of the things that attracts me the most. The "Lily Incident" during my school days caused all kinds of injuries, big and small. I really hated the Jie Dao trio [laughing awkwardly]. At the same time, I was moved by the Slytherin-style friendship between Xingxing and Teacher Si, as well as Xingxing and senior Lucius. Of course, it also created a lot of laughs [laughing]. Teacher Si's survival in the end made up for my big regret. The most pity is that Lei Gu left in the end [almost crying] (in fact, he secretly knocked on Xingxing and Lei Gu). In short, this book will be my top HP fanfic now and for a long time to come! [Sending Hearts]

It is a very good novel. The heroine does not have a golden finger. It uses the story before Harry Potter was born. She grew up with Snape and Evans. Liz's entire teenage years were miserable. She could have been relaxed as long as she just followed the crowd, but she didn't. Every choice made up her later home. She said she didn't know whether it was love or need for not giving up on her family, but she was determined that this was what she had. Later, I also understood many of her choices. Everyone was involuntarily, they all worked hard, and they all firmly chose their family.

One of the best HP fanfics, I like this kind of growth story. But at first, I thought the ending was about the heroine killing Voldemort. The plot was smooth and the characters were vivid. The introduction was finally changed, making it even more touching. It's rare to read a million words without feeling that the quality of the plot or writing has deteriorated, but the plot in the later stages of this article is also very brilliant, which is great for people like me who like to read long stories but don't like to see the quality deteriorate! (Also, in the Hufflepuff Extra Chapter, is the Cultist dead?)

No CP, it's not a slap in the face, it's a novel that needs to be savored carefully. I stayed up all night to read it. Although the heroine is from the Snake Yard, she entered it for her father's hope. After reading it, more and more hope stars are from the Badger Yard. Everyone can't say bad things, they can only say that this novel is about living for their own beliefs, and it is not a cool novel. It is about a star who fights to protect his home and what he cherishes. Xing, the writing is very delicate, everything seems to be destined. Most of the characters in Harry Potter have not changed their doomed situation and inevitable destiny route. Under this, Xingxing endures and strives hard. It is really appropriate. This novel is a novel in which hard work is not in vain and no regrets. It is very beautiful.

I only read a dozen chapters when I opened it for the first time. Because of Liz's hell start and family situation, it made me a little depressed. But when I opened it for the second time, I got into it. Liz, my star, is a very charming character. After reading this article, I couldn't bear to let her save any dead characters in the original work, because her life is already very difficult, but she still grows well despite such difficulties, and has her own persistence and bottom line. I cried several times while reading it, but I was also amused by the author's humor. This article made me really feel the pressure of braised eggs... Every time I saw Xingxing and Braised Eggs, and the scenes with Bella, I was extremely nervous. Fortunately, the ending was good, and I also saw several possibilities of parallel worlds in the extra story. It is really a very well-written article, and it is worth reading again and again.

It's so good, you must read it, our strong little star, the witch who is 190cm tall, has rusty red hair, and has a sharp and serious face. Finally gained her freedom [crying]

It's wonderful. It's the best HP fanfic I've seen so far. It's different from most of the main lines, either following Porter or developing on their own. It follows the timeline of the previous generation of Si Jiao and James, focusing on the oppression and bloody cruelty of the Dark Lord, and the chilling tension of the battle between black and white. The protagonist is just a local with a bit of talent and a poor family background. He is forced to be involved in the storm. One wrong step will lead to an abyss. To be honest, the most striking feature is authenticity. Regardless of how Voldemort is defeated in the original text and in the fanfic, he is still the Dark Lord after all. If he encounters ordinary wizards, it will be a natural disaster. The characters in this article are also very delicate, and the foreshadowing is also well recycled. Liz's ambivalence, sensitivity, vulnerability, and desire to become stronger and be loved are deeply portrayed, just like her magic wand, healing her childhood with her life. I had never noticed this book before, and few people read it. I was probably put off by the title.

It can be said to be the best novel I have read in Yangshizi. The author's characterization of the characters is complete, true and meticulous, the plot development is reasonable and compact, and it is well connected with the original work. It is very, very real. Entering the perspective of the protagonist, I just feel as if I have personally experienced a strange and dreamy time travel, a life with ups and downs. There are only four words for the reading experience of this book: hearty! Let me say it one last time, I love Little Star! She really deserves a five star! Show them all to me! ! !