咸鱼师尊只想苟命，徒弟你别乱来

This book is really beautiful, two words, praise! Although this evaluation only has two words, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, clever structure, and catchy language. It can be seen that the words are concise and concise. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark. It is really the finishing touch, wonderful writing, profound artistic conception, and echoes the sublimated theme of the previous article.

To be honest, the writing is really good, full of content and constantly funny, and the ending is also satisfactory. However, the affection that the heroine's father and brother have for her, even if it is cleared up in the end, is still unacceptable, and it is also quite contradictory in some places. The heroine's father dotes on his daughter very much, but he doesn't remember her daughter's birthday and directly assigns her to a heir apparent whose cultivation level is much lower than hers without going through the heroine. The heroine messes her up. But later when the male protagonist and the female protagonist were together, the female protagonist's father forced the male protagonist to reach an impossible level in three years on the grounds that he would have to have someone to take care of his daughter when he returned to the upper world. In that case, what did you mean by getting engaged to that talented elixir? The brother writes that he loves his sister everywhere, but he doesn't remember her birthday, and even deliberately brings the heroine's apprentice (male protagonist) to the original heroine who wants to take over the hero's baby and dig out his sister's spiritual roots (he doesn't know the person and purpose of the original heroine, he just knows the original heroine The protagonist said that the male protagonist had feelings for her or had an engagement, but the male protagonist forgot so he wanted to see the male protagonist secretly). When he returned home after not seeing her for a long time, he gave all the gifts for his sister to the original female protagonist, and some other things that followed, which made people not feel that the brother really loved his sister. There is also the senior brother. Xiaoqiu was taken in by the heroine as a maid when she was a child. I actually have no objection to such a high-status person (compared to a maid from the sect) who likes a person with a low status. However, Xiaoqiu has been the heroine's maid since she was a child and has always been with the heroine. The first time the senior brother made an appointment When she went out, she saw something she thought was good and wanted to buy it for the heroine. That was a normal reaction. After all, her job for more than ten years was to serve the lady, and the heroine treated her like a sister. As a result, the senior brother felt that Xiao Qiu cared too much about the junior sister (the heroine), and he wanted to slap the heroine away. The mood is understandable, but what is the meaning of the existence of a personal maid? Shouldn't she be loyal and concerned about her young lady? It would be more appropriate to write that the senior brother watched Xiao Qiu constantly buying things for his junior sister, envious of his junior sister for having such a loyal maid, and also had some taste for food. To put it bluntly, he just wants to slap the heroine away, which is understandable but too extreme. But overall, the flaws are not concealed. Although I feel a little resentful about these things, these people are indeed sincere to the heroine and are her best relatives.

The heroine Feng Qingcheng traveled to the world in the book, and in order to change her fate as cannon fodder, she became a Taoist couple with the hero Ye Cangli. The heroine's father is the prince of heaven, and her mother is the god of war. In the end, all lovers get married! What a perfect and sweet ending! Even if the heroine returns to the modern world, the hero becomes a god and follows her into modern society!

U1s1 really wrote it so well hahahaha (spoiler alert...) It is a double time travel, the heroine of the original book is reborn + the heroine of this book is reborn. The heroine of the original book is very bad and bad, but here she completely hit a big iron wall! Relieve your anger! ! Although the male protagonist was very suspicious at first, and he felt paranoid about avoiding harm when he first met the female protagonist, but later he was moved by the master and his emotions changed very quickly~~ He was also very popular with the male protagonist (very good). Overall, it was very interesting hahaha [Master and apprentice + affectionate male protagonist + strong female protagonist but not serious...] Love it, love it I have to mention the author's writing style, he is so good at writing, hahaha! Funny

It's super pretty, isn't it? ! ! Come and take a look! ! ! ! !

Feng Qingcheng likes serious nonsense, haha It turned out that Feng Qingcheng had mixed souls, and her modern soul was summoned back by her father. She thought she had slipped through the book, but it was not true. Her father is actually the prince of the God Realm, and her mother is the Goddess of War in the God Realm. She has just been reincarnated. Her parents should have experienced three lives. Qingcheng's father and her brother kept Su Jinyu in order to use Su Jinyu to resurrect her mother and let her mother use Su Jinyu's body. Qingcheng was tricked by Ye Cangli all day long, and then she was tricked for the rest of her life.

Why are there so few ratings? I spent a day watching it, it was so perfect and beautiful! ! ! ! ! I can't bear it [crying]

Very good, good-looking and good-looking

The author writes very well. Actually, the heroine said it was a mess. It's still not broken, right? Still working on it. Although she has a good family, the heroine has not forgotten that her own abilities are in her own hands. I also like it when lovers finally get married. We can find each other wherever we go.

It's okay, the author, please keep up the good work [I learned]!

I really want to read a few more extras, but I really haven't seen enough [almost crying] [almost crying]

The main theme is a sweet love I hope to be seen by more people who like sweet love No matter where you are, I will find you (Father and Mother) Regardless of status, love can withstand everything (Xiao Qiu and Senior Brother) Loving you is the right choice for me in this life. I am willing to love you and stay with you forever (male and female protagonist)

This is simply a funny little fairy descending to earth. Haha 😃 looks good~

Author: Did you win the lottery and go homeless? The male protagonist is not yet tired of revenge, but the love of Wei Pi San turns around too fast! I have to marry you one second and be your brother the next. I'm so happy.

Good-looking, good-looking, like it

Www looks good and progresses quickly without any delay!

The story is pretty good, you can read on. Currently, it is estimated that the heroine's fighting ability (both verbally and with her hands) is not high.

The author writes so well and it's so beautiful. The article is very interesting, but not enough. I hope the author will consider writing a story about the hero and heroine in modern times and going to heaven.

It's pretty good, but the score shouldn't be so low. Recommendation: 9.8 Points

The content is super cool, but it's the finale before I get enough of it.

It's super, super, super good-looking, and it's to my liking. I'll go check out the author's other works! Author, please wait for me! [Sending Hearts]

I like this kind of story with a single emotional line, not so much abuse, not so many misunderstandings and the female partner and male partner acting like monsters. Give the author a big thumbs up [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love]

It's good-looking, I like it [Adore][Adore][Adore] The heroine has a good personality. Although she wants to show off, when the hero is in danger, she immediately stands up to save him. As for the male protagonist, he crosses the void just to find his Taoist companion, which is the female protagonist. [Smile][smile][smile]

It was so beautiful that I finished it in one day and one night.

It's good to read but the words are a bit sparse

Very nice. I like it.

I love my disciples so much. One of them said, "Sister Xiaoqiu is right, you can't judge people by their superficial appearance." It's so cute [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's beautiful. I read it patiently. It's worth recommending.

It's still pretty good-looking, come on!

Very beautiful, so beautiful