[Two-way crush on Shuangjie] [Aloof schoolmaster VS sweet doting girl]
If you like someone, will you be brave enough to pursue him?
This is a story about secret love. The female protagonist met the male protagonist on the first day of high school and fell in love with him at first sight. (But what she doesn't know is that the male protagonist is also paying attention to her silently)
After graduating from high school, she was timid and had low self-esteem, and did not have the courage to confess her feelings.
Until one day, she and he met again.
"I like you, do you know?" Lin Haoze looked at her sincerely!
"What?" Su Muqing's heart was shaken, and tears welled up in her eyes.
She didn't know that during the time when she was secretly in love, Lin Haoze was also silently protecting her.
This two-way secret love also has a perfect ending...
Reader comments
I tried my best, the author [face covering]. I originally wanted to talk to each other because we are all little friends, but to be blunt, the writing style should be closer to the way of online articles. Don't use parallel sentences all the time, and have a little less inner monologue; the plot can't be too bloody. Nowadays, people no longer accept this trick; the characters are more realistic, such as Zhao Lan, a middle-aged professor, who cannot be a love brain. Even if it is for the sake of the children, she will not react with self-pity after knowing that her husband has cheated. This can be slightly modified. It's okay to try the water, but... Alas, there probably won't be many readers. Anyway, I had the idea of giving up halfway. You are writing a novel, not an essay or a composition (small comments, you can delete them if you don't like them)
But if nothing else, I still wrote a lot.
I tried my best, the author [face covering]. I originally wanted to talk to each other because we are all little friends, but to be blunt, the writing style should be closer to the way of online articles. Don't use parallel sentences all the time, and have a little less inner monologue; the plot can't be too bloody. Nowadays, people no longer accept this trick; the characters are more realistic, such as Zhao Lan, a middle-aged professor, who cannot be a love brain. Even if it is for the sake of the children, she will not react with self-pity after knowing that her husband has cheated. This can be slightly modified. It's okay to try the water, but... Alas, there probably won't be many readers. Anyway, I had the idea of giving up halfway. You are writing a novel, not an essay or a composition (small comments, you can delete them if you don't like them) But if nothing else, I still wrote a lot.