Don't click, don't click! ! ! It's a trap! ! As the junior sister of a novel about a heroine cultivating immortality and counterattacking, her original character should be charming, as pretty as a frightened rabbit, and every move she makes is lovable, but she has a vicious heart.
However, since Qiao Qiao was born, although she has a delicate and cute face, she acts arrogantly and is called a little devil, which attracts everyone's fear.
Qiao Qiao has known that she is the villain of a book since she was conscious. Thinking about the plot, the junior sister sneered that she would be the most powerful if she wanted and refused to be cannon fodder.
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The heroine Mu Yingjie of the original book has heard about the reputation of the little devil since she entered the Wanfa Sect. Later, when she first met, she only thought she was lively, cute, and innocent. Later, she never deceived me.
Lu Xuanhe, as the villain who fought against the protagonist group by himself in the later period, was "love at first sight" by the little girl. He looked at the little girl who looked very weak, but always said that she wanted to protect him. At first, he disdained the irony. It was just an occasional kindness from a pampered young lady, but for a moment, that was what he thought. But later, "Since you promised to protect me, you must protect me for the rest of your life!"
Qiao Qiao said: She didn't think so at all, the brain supplement is poisonous!
Reader comments
I have now read Chapter 51. Overall, the writing is very good, but the character description is a bit monotonous. I could use some description of their appearance.
I think this should be a group portrait article, but the description of the protagonist group is not vivid enough, and it feels like the cooperative relationship between them cannot be seen.
If you want to write a group portrait, I suggest that the author not favor one over the other. When they are scattered, don't just write about the heroine, but also write about the situations that other people encountered. Don't just write about the heroine, I hope to see other people who are also excellent and can help the heroine.
The above are just my personal thoughts. I really like group portrait articles and see a group of teenagers in high spirits. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I have now read Chapter 51. Overall, the writing is very good, but the character description is a bit monotonous. I could use some description of their appearance. I think this should be a group portrait article, but the description of the protagonist group is not vivid enough, and it feels like the cooperative relationship between them cannot be seen. If you want to write a group portrait, I suggest that the author not favor one over the other. When they are scattered, don't just write about the heroine, but also write about the situations that other people encountered. Don't just write about the heroine, I hope to see other people who are also excellent and can help the heroine. The above are just my personal thoughts. I really like group portrait articles and see a group of teenagers in high spirits. I hope the author will continue to work hard.