I never thought that I would be able to wear a top-notch person through time travel. When I woke up, I was killing everyone. There was a top mother, a top dad, and a few top brothers.
Reader comments
It's my first time to write a novel and give myself a good review.
There is no male protagonist, the woman is beautiful alone
It's very nice, but it's very difficult to read, but it's okay to listen to, and it's tolerable. I have been thinking about how the author wrote this novel. At first, I guessed that the author did not use a keyboard to write directly with a digital tablet. Later, I thought that the author wrote the manuscript, and the software scanned it and turned it into an electronic manuscript for one-click upload. But this cannot explain the misuse of punctuation marks, unclear sentences, and unclear short sentences. Finally, I thought of language input. There are no prefixes in dialogues, characters have no psychological thoughts, and character names are often wrong. Only in this way can I explain it.
It's good to watch, but it's quite tiring to watch the story characters talk. Can't we separate it? [Laughing and crying]
The writing is good, but the dialogue between the characters is a bit unpunctuated. Is it prose or narrative?
It's good, but the author is too stingy and is afraid of running out of punctuation marks.
It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?
It looks good. The heroine needs to be more ruthless and kill that woman and her eldest brother's family, otherwise it will be dangerous in the future.
It's very interesting, but not enough. I read several articles and felt that this escape story is a real escape. It's very dangerous and colorful. Other escape stories are too easy. This escape story is really good. Why is the rating so low?
I ran out of words and all I have left is hahaha. It's so fun. I hope the author can keep updating. Although I only read more than 20 chapters, but you only had more than 200 chapters. I read it in two days. Do you have any other books that are as good as this?
It's great. I've read more than 20 chapters and I feel like commenting. I hope more people will see it [laughs][laughs]
💙💙Waiting for the update. The wife is so beautiful. I want to keep reading, but I can't find any other books.
How to say it? I don't know how to say it. The more I listen to it, the weirder it gets. But the book is okay.
It looks good, but the Fu Fu family are so jumping around, which is a bit annoying. Others are quite nice.
The heroine is very strong and has a lot of personality. The family's shortcomings and achievements are done at the same time, so the writing is not bad. It would be better if you write subtitles of chapters and add punctuation marks. Especially punctuation marks, which are also an aspect of language expression and are indispensable.
Okay, okay. This book is written very intellectually. I like novels with high IQ.
Holy Mother? She traveled through the past, a modern person. Except for the lack of punctuation, it's still ok
It's so beautiful. In the countryside, it's rare for a father and mother to love their daughter. Come on, author.
This work is really good-looking. Everyone gave up on it because it was so annoying at first, and I almost gave up on it. After seventy chapters, it gets better and better. It's like betting on a stone and finding the imperial green. It's really surprising. I highly recommend it.
Isn't the fourth child pretty good? Why is he so written down?
Saying harsh words and doing the things of the Holy Mother
The person who writes the book must be a newcomer, and you need to read more about how other people's books are written.
It's okay, but there are some small details that I didn't write clearly, such as how the heroine's martial arts came about.
It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low?
Very good, I listened to the book the whole time. The disadvantage is that the punctuation and spacing are not done well, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to listen to and reluctant to delete.
This book is wonderfully written. The author has such a rich imagination.
The heroine has a very good character, she will do whatever she doesn't want, and her grudges are clear.
The book is okay, but there is no "" and it is quite difficult to read.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
This book is okay to listen to, but it would be too strenuous to read. I give it four points, and I hope I have more time to revise it so that it can be more perfect.
This is my first time reading a novel like this! Feels great
Good! Although I haven't finished reading it, the author is very diligent and worked hard.
It's my first time to write a novel and give myself a good review. There is no male protagonist, the woman is beautiful alone
It's very nice, but it's very difficult to read, but it's okay to listen to, and it's tolerable. I have been thinking about how the author wrote this novel. At first, I guessed that the author did not use a keyboard to write directly with a digital tablet. Later, I thought that the author wrote the manuscript, and the software scanned it and turned it into an electronic manuscript for one-click upload. But this cannot explain the misuse of punctuation marks, unclear sentences, and unclear short sentences. Finally, I thought of language input. There are no prefixes in dialogues, characters have no psychological thoughts, and character names are often wrong. Only in this way can I explain it.
It's good to watch, but it's quite tiring to watch the story characters talk. Can't we separate it? [Laughing and crying]
The writing is good, but the dialogue between the characters is a bit unpunctuated. Is it prose or narrative?
It's good, but the author is too stingy and is afraid of running out of punctuation marks.
It's so beautiful, why is the rating so low?
It looks good. The heroine needs to be more ruthless and kill that woman and her eldest brother's family, otherwise it will be dangerous in the future. It's very interesting, but not enough. I read several articles and felt that this escape story is a real escape. It's very dangerous and colorful. Other escape stories are too easy. This escape story is really good. Why is the rating so low?
I ran out of words and all I have left is hahaha. It's so fun. I hope the author can keep updating. Although I only read more than 20 chapters, but you only had more than 200 chapters. I read it in two days. Do you have any other books that are as good as this?
It's great. I've read more than 20 chapters and I feel like commenting. I hope more people will see it [laughs][laughs] 💙💙Waiting for the update. The wife is so beautiful. I want to keep reading, but I can't find any other books.
How to say it? I don't know how to say it. The more I listen to it, the weirder it gets. But the book is okay.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It looks good, but the Fu Fu family are so jumping around, which is a bit annoying. Others are quite nice.
The heroine is very strong and has a lot of personality. The family's shortcomings and achievements are done at the same time, so the writing is not bad. It would be better if you write subtitles of chapters and add punctuation marks. Especially punctuation marks, which are also an aspect of language expression and are indispensable.
Okay, okay. This book is written very intellectually. I like novels with high IQ.
Holy Mother? She traveled through the past, a modern person. Except for the lack of punctuation, it's still ok
It's so beautiful. In the countryside, it's rare for a father and mother to love their daughter. Come on, author.
This work is really good-looking. Everyone gave up on it because it was so annoying at first, and I almost gave up on it. After seventy chapters, it gets better and better. It's like betting on a stone and finding the imperial green. It's really surprising. I highly recommend it.
Isn't the fourth child pretty good? Why is he so written down?
Saying harsh words and doing the things of the Holy Mother
The person who writes the book must be a newcomer, and you need to read more about how other people's books are written.
It's okay, but there are some small details that I didn't write clearly, such as how the heroine's martial arts came about.
It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low?
Very good, I listened to the book the whole time. The disadvantage is that the punctuation and spacing are not done well, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to listen to and reluctant to delete.
This book is wonderfully written. The author has such a rich imagination.
The heroine has a very good character, she will do whatever she doesn't want, and her grudges are clear.
The book is okay, but there is no "" and it is quite difficult to read.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
This book is okay to listen to, but it would be too strenuous to read. I give it four points, and I hope I have more time to revise it so that it can be more perfect.
This is my first time reading a novel like this! Feels great
Good! Although I haven't finished reading it, the author is very diligent and worked hard.