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Ouch, the author did a great job! However, the author wouldn't want to see the news tomorrow that an author of a Tomato novel was stabbed 24 times by a book friend and was slightly injured and hospitalized, right? (Just kidding), so update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! (*￣M￣) Note: If there are multiple heroines, it's best to handle it well and decisively, otherwise it will be very poisonous! ! !

Now we have reached chapter 86. I have finished reading it. So far, there are no poisonous points. The writing style is also very good. It feels very comfortable to read. Just these two points will give me five stars. Come on, come on_(:з∠)_

Not bad, the subject matter is very novel, but the routine is a bit old. I just hope it doesn't collapse later.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The author's writing style is very good and the rhythm is good. The only thing that makes me want to complain is that the protagonist has no memory after time travel. It is not that there is something wrong with this setting, but when I saw Su Yiyao before, I felt very uncomfortable because the protagonist changed after After going there, he didn't pay attention to the impact he had on the people around him. At least he didn't care much about anyone else except Gu Xingchun. Although it doesn't mean that the protagonist has to pay attention to the female supporting characters, he should at least understand the changes he brought to the female supporting characters around him after time travel, so that he won't be in a situation where he doesn't know anything again. That's all I want to say. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will keep chasing him. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

I like it, really like it. First of all, this is a harem novel, but not a stallion novel. The portrayal of the heroine is very unique in my opinion. I can feel the deep love of the heroines for the hero. It would be a pity to miss any of them. The subject matter is also very novel and worth reading. In terms of shortcomings, after reading through this book, it is already a relatively dull daily novel, but the tension added by the meeting between the male protagonist in 2025 and the male protagonist in 2023 is a bit abrupt and unnecessary. I hope the author can persevere. After all, 70% of the books I put on the pursuit bookshelf have been sent [almost crying]

My guess is that it's not good. It's a new book, it doesn't have any bad points, and the characters are quite distinct. I'd like to give the author a four-star rating first. When it comes to raising books, when there are more people, the author's data will be bad, and then they won't want to update it. Use love to generate electricity, encourage the author, and achieve sustainable development [sneaky smile]

I just hope it won't be too overwhelming. There can be more or less female protagonists, as long as the main emotional line is reasonable. Come on, author.

This book is very suitable to my taste. It is a very interesting novel. I beg the author not to be a eunuch. Even if I really can't finish the book in the end, I must give it an ending, even if it is a bad ending. It's really hard for me to find such interesting novels again [][]

I'll give it 4 stars. Overall, this novel is very good. It's a harem and very sweet. This is the first time I've read this kind of time-travel type. Each heroine has her own characteristics and is very impressive. However, the role of Mu Yunxin is quite unforgettable to me. It's because I watched Amazing You when I was young. No one can take my eyes off it in this life. After waiting for decades, I think the author wrote this as a regret, which is great. It's a pity that the author and most readers may like happy things. However, this novel is still very good-looking and worth reading! ! !

Butterflies dance gracefully, passing through the emptiness, Spread your wings gently, ripples of the past arise. Back to that long time ago, the years have left no trace, Stepping through the sands of time, dreams gradually come true. The mountains, rivers and trees are secluded, and the traces of time remain, It was once a boy's dream, but when I woke up, it was already autumn. Looking back at yesterday's light, today's dream is far away. The butterfly effect begins, and time travel reshapes the present. After several reincarnations, sinking into the world of mortals, Love is difficult in this life, and the past is forgotten by the wind. Traveling through time and space, looking for that opportunity, The butterfly effect kicks in and turns your life around. Seeing the old face again, laughing and talking about yesterday's fate, Time flies and the future has changed. The butterfly effect begins, traveling through time and space, Change today's life and make up for yesterday's regrets. Dreams gradually come true, life begins again, The butterfly effect begins, connecting the past and the present. Cherish this time and seize the future, The butterfly effect begins, and time travel changes the present. [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention]

Although it is quite complicated, it is very difficult for a harem novel to mention every harem as much as possible without losing the main plot line. If you are not careful, you will lose a few people, or you will not write it at all. This book has been laying out the emotions, and the sense of substitution is getting stronger and stronger. It is really good to read, but it is too slow. Maybe the author does not make money because there are not many people reading it.

So far, it looks pretty good, and the writing is also very good. I just don't know if it's a single girl or multiple girls. The two girls and three girls that appear now are pretty good. I feel like it's not impossible to have multiple girls. ⸜₍๑•⌔•๑₎⸝[Top post]

Author, your book is super beautiful. Every time I post a message, I am among the first to read it. I really like your book. Your writing is very good. I hope you can keep writing. You can plan out the story line in advance to prevent it from ending like some books. Be careful, the author may think it is harmless. But the reader must be sad. Great author, I know writing a book is difficult. But I believe you can overcome it. I have written so much, I just hope it doesn't end unfinished. The story of this book is almost complete, and we are satisfied.

This is my first time commenting on Tomato. I can only say that it looks really good. The subject matter is very new and the writing is good. I am just [aggrieved] if the author can write more [shy]

It's very interesting to watch, but I would like to make a small suggestion, that is, now that there are various types of heroines, it's better to develop their emotional dramas. It's better to provoke less grandmothers and aunties, otherwise the feeling will collapse, because the more people know that Su Luo can travel through time, the easier it will be exposed.

It's so sweet. I'm about to get diabetes. I finally finished reading this book. The subject matter is very novel. Although there is nothing too amazing in the whole book, each female character has her own characteristics. The female protagonists at every stage from the male protagonist's kindergarten to the final marriage are all unique. There is Gu Xingchun, a childhood sweetheart who is cute and cute but all eyes are Su Luo. She is two years older than the male protagonist, but she met the slightly arrogant childhood sweetheart Su Yiyao later than Xingchun. She is 4 years older than the male protagonist and can't help but see him suffer behind the scenes but is not clingy but is also a super protective eldest sister. There is also Yun Luoxin, a college tutor who has been ignored by relatives since she was a child but was rejected by her relatives and she has to bear it alone. In the end, the male protagonist traveled back in time and saved her time and time again. There is also Bai Qingyue, the aunt who watched the male protagonist grow up and the male protagonist Gu Xingchun (actually I still like this contrasting cute aunt), but she is also the only character in the harem who has been penetrated by others. Although the male protagonist later traveled back and changed history. But I'm a bit of a germaphobe and it's still uncomfortable to watch.) Then the thing that hurts me the most is based on the timeline. The male protagonist's first love Mu Yunxin [crying] She really made me cry to death. From the age of 17, I accidentally met the male protagonist who traveled to 1991 (I originally planned to invite the male protagonist's dad to watch a movie, but the male protagonist helped his mother to avoid his love rival) and then was tricked by the male protagonist to go to the movie. After only a few days of getting along, the girl fell in love. Later, the male protagonist traveled back to modern times, but the 17-year-old girl never met the person she loved that day. I have been waiting and searching until I am 49 years old and I am still single. I really feel like I have not given birth to you and you have given birth to me. I am already old. The 49-year-old Mu Yunxin (who has passed menopause and has stopped menstruating [crying]) found the lover (19-year-old male protagonist) she met when she was 17 years old, but she could only cut a pot of tea and cook for him once and say goodbye to the past. But the good news is that the male protagonist finally noticed the girl he accidentally flirted with. He kept wearing it back to make up for the girl's missing love (asking 17-year-old Mu Yunxin to write a diary whenever she was sad or missing him. Then the 19-year-old male protagonist asked 49-year-old Mu Yunxin for that diary. Then time travel back and forth to protect her according to the time in the diary) Through the future male protagonist, he obtained the "Beautiful Beauty Pill" that can increase life expectancy. However, it was obviously his "first love" and it was still a big regret that he could not have children for the male protagonist when he was 50 years old (in the last chapter, the female protagonists became pregnant one after another, but Mu Yunxin said that he did not plan to have children when he got older. I felt really sorry for her. She is a very traditional woman, and she must also want a child with the male protagonist, right? I can only wait for a side story or imagine that Yunxin will change his mind later [crying]) Generally speaking, it's still a happy ending [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] I really want to give Mu Yunxin another few thousand words to tell the story of how the male protagonist compensated Mu Yunxin for an incident in the 1990s until 2024, and then the relationship came naturally in 2024. Unfortunately, this process was brushed aside by the author. In the end, when I saw the male protagonist and Aunt Mu falling in love, I felt that there was a lot of emotional missing.

In the blink of an eye, it has been several weeks since I finished reading this book, although I read other novels in the meantime. So full of emotions. As far as my personal preferences are concerned, many female protagonists are very well portrayed. Whether it's Gu Xingchun's cuteness, Su Yiyao's tsundere, or Aunt Bai, they all fascinate me. If I want to say that my favorite plot is Fei Mu Yunxin, it must be Fei Mu Yunxin. The two are emotionally intertwined but have huge real-life conflicts. In the end, they use time backwards to make up for Mu Yunxin's regrets and resolve the conflicts between them, and then they get together. Although there are some things that people don't like, overall, this can be said to be a very good love story.

The emotions are vividly written, and the characters are also brought to life! The butterfly effect has finally come full circle! At least it looks smooth to me, but I should also recommend a woman, let's recommend Teacher Yun. She has no background and is suitable for being an underground lover in the early stage, and then she can slowly become a full-time lover.

Personally, I think it's good. The plot is a 70%, and there are quite a few flaws. In fact, there are some characterizations of the characters, but they are relatively few. A few of the female protagonists are quite vivid and vivid, but the male protagonist feels different from the early period. In the later period, it is a bit bad and bad, which is not to say that it is not good. The author must grasp the degree and see how to capture the readers' hearts. , The author has some touching plots, but he didn't do it in a deep way. It's very moving and touching. For now, I think it's just a tear-jerker. It's a good work, especially the author. You are a great novel about the relationship between multiple female protagonists. The sad aspect needs to be strengthened. It must be refreshing. It must be refreshing. It must be comfortable and bring tears to your eyes. [Note] Come on.

I finished reading it in one go. I haven't played much of the game in the past two days. To be honest, this book is very good, the concept is relatively novel, the ideas are very good, the plot is also very good, and it also satisfies the emotional line of each heroine on the premise of ensuring the main line. The only thing missing is that the emotional drama between Zhang Xinyu and Long Wu is a little less. I personally think that I can continue writing a little before finishing it. Another small regret is that there are too few stories about Su Junhang, but it is understandable and the problem is not big. Overall, it's a good novel [Like][Send my heart]

They are all good. I like it better. The one where the protagonist is a billionaire and jumps into the sea and rivers to save people, even endangering the protagonist's life. I don't understand but respect it. I frowned while watching this plot. If this was in real life, I would have no brain to praise and admire, but that is impossible. It is not very immersive to write like this. In reality, I am afraid of helping the elderly. Trouble, such a dangerous thing here was done by the son of a billionaire. The protagonist is a good old man, so there is no substitute for it. But aside from these, the whole article is still very good. The subject matter is very novel. I just hope to write more about other aspects, a little more daily style, and other things to say, it is still very good, four-star praise and encouragement

Alas, I have finished this book, and it feels like it is not too long. My favorite part is from pages 1,000 to 1,500, which is the romance between Gu Xingchun, Su Yiyao and the male protagonist! It's great to watch. What I love the most is that the three girls who appeared in the early stage, plus Aunt Bai and the counselor, the characters that appear later are a bit too many and complicated. Maybe it's for plot expansion. In general, the adopted girl has arrived at Xiaomu. I hope Xiao Jiang will be added. After all, I've seen it all. If I'm not responsible, it's a bit haha ​​[laughing]. I hope the male protagonist can be serious about everyone, every woman he admits to be responsible, and don't care about trouble or not, just like Xiaoxing Jun, and will be full of love.

It's nice to read. This book is so well written. Good luck to the author!

I have been chasing it for 2 days and finally finished reading it. You will know how good this book is from the time I spent reading it. I couldn't stop reading it these two days because of the author's technique and emotion. How fast the author updated it, I couldn't get enough! There are so many heroines, I like them so much

The portrayals of the heroines are all very full, and they don't have the feeling of popular facial expressions in many Tomato novels. The characters are distinct and there is a lot of emotional foreshadowing. If the author can continue to maintain this level and keep updating it, it will definitely be an excellent work.

The subject matter of the book is very novel and beautiful. The outline is also very good. The characters are vivid and vivid. This book is really beautiful. I stayed up late reading it and couldn't stop. The author needs to work hard.

As someone who has read the entire text, although there are some typos and confusion in the text, I feel that it was caused by the author's faster hand typing. Overall, it is highly recommended. First of all: the whole text is logically clear, and it is difficult to find fatal logical errors. Secondly, the novel theme changes the entire country and one's own family through time travel. Finally, although there is a harem in this book, the character development of the main heroine is still relatively complete, and it can basically be seen throughout the whole book. The only flaw is that the harem becomes relatively weak in the later period. This should be because the author cannot stop the car after writing.

It's very relaxing and comfortable. There's no particularly embarrassing foot-picking plot. It's relatively bland. I like it a lot. Nowadays, most of them are bookworms and can't read anything. The plot of this book is quite enjoyable.

I haven't read it for a long time. It was updated to Chapter 211. Overall, I feel pretty good. Now I saw that more than 200 pictures were suddenly updated, and I plan to take a look again. Otherwise, this novel seemed pretty good before. The male protagonist keeps traveling through time, the family power keeps getting stronger, and he urges the elders and ancestors to fight. This seems very cool. Moreover, even if the male protagonist currently has enemies, he can crush them in just one time. It can be said that it is very relaxing and enjoyable.

Author, I think this book is pretty good so far, but Ouyang's lesbian character is worrying. Just like Xingchun, how nice it is to be innocent and cute now. If you insist on writing lesbian dramas and tarnish the feeling Gu Xingchun gave me, don't blame me for criticizing you. [Laughing evilly] [grievance]