Western Fantasy: Chronicles of Kalantia

It should be the first reader. Objectively speaking, this book lacks some momentum. The author tried to build a huge worldview, but it still seemed empty. Of course, the author also said that the worldview is still being continuously updated, so you can look forward to this. There are few flashpoints in the book, which is a double-edged sword. The lack of flashpoints often means that it is difficult to create explosive points, so the plot of the whole book may be a little dull, and readers who like daily life will like it more, and vice versa. Overall, it is a book worth reading, and the author is very persistent in updating it. I hope that friends who are lucky enough to read it can give a review to support it. [Blowing kiss]

Today coincides with Chapter 999 and I finally saw the latest progress, so I'll leave a comment. Overall, it's very nice. As for the missing star... Huh? Why? Why... Don't remember? Moon... Who? (× I almost gave up after reading the eighth volume. I lost the motivation to continue reading, so it took me a while to pick it up again (actually it was not as good as other novels). The entire eighth volume is about creating a sense of epicness and destiny, and deciding the ending of the world at a very abrupt time. This reminds me of Jojo Stone Sea. Why doesn't Stone Sea give me such a negative impression when there are similar elements? The first is the gap in expectations. I must admit that this is my own problem. Although there are bad foreshadowings, it is still because the author has no idea of ​​the main characters in the protagonist camp. Next, the most important thing is the handling of the ending, which makes the cognitive gap between the characters and readers too large, breaks the bridge of empathy, and falls into the nihilism of "What on earth have I been doing for so long?" Secondly, the villain's motivations are unclear, not relevant enough, and not convincing enough. It's really just because she happened to be the one to save him. It's applied mechanically. At best, it's a sense of destiny, at worst, it's the author's big hand! Although it is not clear where the vampires come from and what the prophecy is in the sixth volume (maybe it will be explained later? But those who can't stand it can't see the back), so this only strengthens the above feelings. In the end, this is just a chapter in a novel. The crisis affecting the world is so random (the main axis of the eighth volume). Of course, it can be said to reflect the impermanence of the world, but this easily makes people feel that it negates the previous efforts (and of course the following ones), not to mention that the story is not over yet, and it is exhausted. Anyway, I hope the author will continue to work hard. I really like this novel. Later, I was quite pleased to see that the traces left behind (repeatedly whipping corpses) were mentioned from time to time in the ninth volume.

The grand world view, smooth narrative, and the story are getting more and more exciting. It is very beautiful. Come on, the author is great.

It's very beautiful. I haven't encountered a book that attracts me so much in a long time. The plot is very smooth, the characters are also very delicately drawn, and the author writes it very well. To be honest, I have read a lot of Western fantasy novels, but there is really nothing that has fascinated me so much (even if I read less than 30 minutes, I have actually read more than 300 chapters using other accounts. Also, let me ask a little bit, does Bai Ye look like Ying Jiu every time he pops up when nothing happens [laughing evilly])

Zd is average, it's a good first time writing a book

It is completely in line with my taste. Although he is a time traveler, he is not Long Aotian, and there are not so many emotional scenes. It is purely adventure and daily life. I have already played the second time and plan to play the third time. I also always feel that Moon will be stabbed.

It's well written and I look forward to the follow-up. I hope this book won't be G-y and will have a perfect ending.

It's really, really good, okay

The plot of the whole novel is very vivid, the language is vivid and precise, the article has a clear context and strong rhythm, and the protagonist is very vividly portrayed by the author.

There is no one who can write a good work, please give your best to the author ↖(^ω^)↗ Also, I would like to ask, will anyone related to Bai Ye's previous life appear in another world? [Eat melon]

The author's writing is quite good, but the only difference lies in the name. If the author changes his name to one that suits the current Wang Wen circle, more people will definitely read it.

Come on, author, I'll watch it when you finish it [laughing evilly]

I've read more than 300 chapters, so far it's okay

This book is really "sweet"! ! ! [Laughing evilly][crying][laughing evilly][crying][laughing evilly] What happened to the Philosopher's Stone in the end? Wasn't it taken away by the dean? Is it a pit? Still gone? [Stare]

Is this the author's first time writing a book? It's really awesome. It's great to be able to write to this level.

It's okay, but the world view is a bit big and I can't think clearly for a while.

It's pretty good-looking and has a lot of jokes. There is also a white-haired lolita Saigao

I was a little tired reading the first story, but the more I wrote later, the better it got. It's a very good Western fantasy novel.

Very good story telling, I watched it all day long [laughs]

The author's writing is great! Why isn't it popular?

Good! Why is there no one [thinking] [laughing and crying]

Why is it so important?

The rating shouldn't be so low I feel so happy watching it

There is a real sense of adventure in another world

It's very similar to a Japanese fantasy, and it feels like the author got the inspiration from watching two episodes, which is very good. I feel that the author made reference to the two series "The World's Top Assassin Reincarnated as a Noble from Another World" and "Reincarnated as a Demonic Sword" in terms of setting. It is my favorite, but I don't know why it becomes more and more boring the more I watch it.

This novel I wrote has wonderful and smooth plot content, writing style, and distinctive and smooth characters.

It's good to watch, the protagonist is neither invincible nor overreaching, and the plot is also good to watch.

It doesn't look uncomfortable, it's not bad

Beautiful, I like it so much

Ah, why is there no rating for such a beautiful book?