Now That I’m a Guardian, I’ll Protect You for Life

I really want to give you 5 stars, the article itself is very well written, the wording, sentences and punctuation are all very smooth, but there are a few things that I can't ignore. Your supporting role has a strong sense of presence, especially your assistant and best friend. The assistant can still be interpreted as a family member, and the setting of the role of the sister is not conflicting, but the presence of the best friend is so strong that it is really unnecessary. This also involves the second question I want to talk about. Your settings came out too quickly and too intensively. The most terrible thing is that you actually stuffed the heroine's character settings into the mouth of your best friend? Character settings are mostly written when they are needed, and are guided through the content of the article bit by bit, rather than being slapped on the reader's face in one or two chapters at once, "Look, this is the character setting, you remember it for me." Especially the setting of the heroine, since I have decided to accompany her throughout her life, I can naturally understand her preferences, her little habits, her personality, and everything about her bit by bit. This should not be information obtained from others, but slowly understood by myself in life. When these settings are said from the mouth of the best friend, the best friend changes from an insignificant role to an important role of a mother. This is fatal in an article with a single heroine. In general, although the articles you wrote are very different from those cheesy Internet articles that you write wherever you think, and you can tell that you are very serious about building this world, but it gives me the feeling that the setting and outline are crammed into the book, and it takes up a lot of space (not a large amount in proportion, but an excessively concentrated amount). I can tell you for sure that your book is very good and worthy of my serious consideration and long review. However, I hope that while writing the book, you will also consider whether the audience of the book can accept certain plots. This has a great influence on book reviews.

The early setting may be a bit long, but I feel it is necessary. The sudden appearance of the female protagonist, and then the protection of the male protagonist, emmm, feel a bit sudden. Maybe it is because I can't really understand it without the experience of the male protagonist. I also hope that the author can divide it into chapters appropriately. After all, you, the author, also have to eat (if you have money, if you say that you write novels purely out of interest, then pretend I didn't say it), at least ensure full attendance.

I don't have anything to say, so I'll leave you with a few sentences. I believe you can understand [learned] [note] Trust often creates a beautiful realm. When you can't hold on anymore, the difficulties are almost too hard.

Uh-huh, the book is good, and the writing is good, but I have a question, why do I always feel that the characters in it always have a tone of Japanese light novels and romance novels? 🍉🤔

It's well written, with a lot of words, I like it [sending my heart]

A small support, the reason is very simple, with her shadow, everything else doesn't matter, the praise is too much, I can't say it, but it doesn't matter, what I see is just her, the writing is good, the plot is wonderful, the emotions are rich... These are just extra points... I don't care about the others and don't want to care, as long as I keep moving forward, if possible, you can see my name every day, I hope Hua Qianxia will never change, she is really like her... There is a word I like very much, that is, no one is perfect, he has mistakes and mistakes, and that is how he is like a human being... I hope you can look at it a little bit, if you are unfortunate enough to have the same experience as me, I think... You will definitely feel more relaxed... Maybe it doesn't matter, in the end, you are just deceiving yourself after all... It's really boring, I know it's a lie , but still have to make it true, this may be my sadness... This book is very good, it should not bear too much emotional weight, it should be an emotional story, I hope it can move me, and I hope it can let me see more of her shadow, but it is also very painful. It is really a love that is difficult to let go... People are inherently contradictory, aren't they? That's why we should accept this contradiction... Of course it is right to go in the right direction, but is it really good... There are many things that are not my fault, but why do I always attribute it to myself... It's really painful... I obviously don't want to tell the story, but I can't help thinking... I'm so bad like this, I really want her to care about me again... It's okay for a few seconds, but why doesn't she even want to look at it for a few seconds... I don't even have time to make a mistake...

I would like to ask, are these the outlines that have been finalized so far? If so, I look forward to your text, it is well written.

It's really nice, but the author is a bit short, (in various languages) (cross out)

Who knows the value of 100,000 words in Chapter 21?

The quality is very good. Chapter 1.2.3 Just took my heart away.