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The extra is good, but very melancholy. For the protagonist, he is indeed the best. Thousands of years of waiting have worn away the years and let everything go with the wind. The protagonist finally gains his happiness, his future, and his peace of mind. I don't want to force be, I want the protagonist to be happy. However, I have never experienced a thousand years!!! I am still stuck in it and can't get out. [Cry][cry][cry]

I really like it, I actually want to give it four stars. Because I really like the main character, I gave it five stars. After I read it, I didn't understand why the male protagonist (Sword Lord) was so obsessed with getting stronger (maybe I forgot). Then I felt that the ending was too hasty and ordinary, like "the prince and the princess finally lived happily together." It didn't match the strong character design from the beginning to the end of the entire article. This is my personal thought. Of course, as a fellow writer, I understand that writing is a very laborious matter. This article is very good, and it is the first one I have read after reading it again.

Yes, every character in the book is relatively vivid, with flesh and blood, their own feelings, and their own personality. In fact, when I first read it, I didn't understand Yue Liyou, and even felt a little disgusted. But later I changed my mind. When I found out that my senior brother had betrayed him and was working with the demons, he first broke through Dacheng to stabilize the situation at that time, and then went to find Luo Feiqing. He felt that he was a person who took the overall situation into consideration, so there was no disgust, so he should change (self-view, don't criticize if you don't like it)

I've read another book, it's very well written. I don't know why everyone doesn't like Yue Liyou. Anyway, I think he's okay, but no matter what, I wish you happiness [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Yue Luo 99 [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] (Secretly speaking, , I feel so reluctant to let go. It ended before I had enough. Forget it, you must be happy [crying] [crying] [crying]) I hope that in the parallel world, Yanyu and Jiang Ling can have a good ending, and I hope that Master and everyone will not die [crying][crying][crying] Again, you should take the love of me and all my book friends and be happy forever [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I have finished reading the entire article without skipping chapters. I don't quite understand why this score is so low. I feel like a pearl covered in dust. The plot of the full text is compact and not procrastinating, the logic is relatively reasonable among many immortality novels, and the characters are also of various types. One of my favorite characters is the Bloody Gentleman Yin Hui. His identity and experiences can be compared to the beautiful, strong and miserable male protagonists in other novels. In the early stage, I had no feelings for him at all. I practiced the ruthless way to kill my wife and children and asked? What scum! But in the extra chapter, his experiences were completed, and he really just opened his mouth and relied on everyone to arrange it. I really feel sorry for him and Zizhen, one is forbearing and tough, the other is kind and gentle. It's a pity that a combination of circumstances led to misunderstandings and worldly affairs. Moreover, this story is very self-reliant, which is different from Xiaoniaoyiren's Revenge

I had mixed emotions about this book, from the beginning to the end and the extra chapters. This book tells the story of Yue Liyou and Luo Feiqing. They were originally praised Taoist couples thousands of years ago, but they were separated because of Yue Liyou's senior brother and various complicated grievances. After the twists and turns, Luo Feiqing was reborn as another person, Luo Feiqing. He and Yue Liyou became masters and disciples from the Taoist monks thousands of years ago. In the end, after various events, Luo Feiqing avenged his master, but his grudges were no longer hated. Yue Liyou and the two of them let go of their grudges and achieved the path to heaven.

It's so beautiful\(//∇//)\The love, hatred and resentment in it are vividly written. Each supporting character has his own story and his own perspective. When reading this article, don't rush to resent each character. In fact, it is very suitable for putting yourself in someone else's shoes. Do you think Huai Ying is bad? That's right, he killed the whole family of Feiqing, but the world of demon cultivators cannot tolerate the situation where the demon bones are out of control. It would be okay if the fairy world comes out of ice beads, but he wants to leave his results. The destruction of Demon Bone Control also started the love-hate relationship between Fei Qing and Li You. This is difficult to comment on, but this is not the reason why he chooses to harm others just to survive.

The author's writing style is very good, and the ideas are good. It's really nice and interesting. I really like this book. I really hope the ending is HE, [face covering] but if it's BE, it's actually pretty good and pretty. I'm really looking forward to it coming to an end soon, hahaha😁 Good luck to the author, write it according to your own ideas, and don't change your ideas just because of other people's ideas. In fact, both HE and BE are good. (And I personally think that when writing a book review, you should read the book in its entirety. Don't make a decision easily. It's really speechless to say what's bad about the male protagonist after watching it for a few hours. Haha. Personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! Say important things three times!!! Haha [face covering])

At first you may feel that Gong is not worthy of Shou's love, but later you will find that nothing matters anymore, because they love each other deeply. After reading this, you will feel relieved, they are very suitable for each other. I feel that the author's wife has good writing skills and this book is worth recommending. Finally, I wish Yue Liyou and Luo Feiqing to be safe and sound, to meet each other year after year, and to have everlasting love.

This book is very good. The length is appropriate, not so short that you can read it in one day, and not so long that you forget the previous plot. The characters have distinct characteristics and distinct personalities. The shou is what I want, the attack is a good one, and I still have more to say after reading the whole book. The plot of this book is not cliche or bloody, and it is the only book I have read without skipping chapters. I hope you will publish another book if I have the chance. I will definitely read it^v^. By the way, the rating of this book is a bit low. If I were to review it, I would give it a 9.5. (The above content is only a personal evaluation, please don't criticize if you don't like it, and don't offend the author)

I like this book very much. I think my preferences are quite divided [laughing and crying]. I not only like novels about vigorous and paranoid pursuits, but also like this kind of fresh and refined novels that adapt to destiny and are cold and suitable for two people to come together at the right time. Unlike many books I have read, Feiqing's character is truly gentle and decisive, indifferent and tolerant. It's not that he can't understand, but he is not afraid or careless about any small tricks. He is not weak and procrastinating, but decisive in destroying it without leaving any consequences. He has never forgotten his feelings, but he also escaped in time to achieve a better reunion for the sake of a better self. Regarding Yue Liyou, there is only one word, absolutely! [Send Heart] fulfills all my fantasies about the powerful "immortal"/Qing Leng Master. To Mo, I just want to say that no one has given up on you. You have never chosen your master and junior brother, so don't force others to have unlimited tolerance. Only those who are truly gentle and see through can write good articles that have never faded after years of polishing. Who can believe that I clicked in because of the title of the book, thinking it was an invincible slap in the face (seriously) "This book has been completed, so there is no follow-up review [Love]"

There is always a saying "time will give people the answer" There is nothing wrong with the logic. The one Fei Qing wanted to kill and hated from the beginning to the end was Mo Huaiying. This feeling was not tainted by Yue Liyou in the slightest. It would be too much to describe Yue Liyou's feelings towards Yue Liyou after his rebirth as hatred, but perhaps it can be described as disappointment. Every wrong has its head, and every debt has its owner. The author really writes this very well. He never drags out the beginning and end of the story, and the truth and reason are vividly reflected in the two protagonists. It's much better than some of the grudge plots in many novels adapted from TV series nowadays.

I think this book is very interesting and unique. I know there are many people criticizing it, but I think it is really unnecessary. I really don't want to be [almost crying]. The author has already explained the plot in the introduction. If you know you don't accept it, don't read it. It is an article, and you have to put in your own point of view, and then criticize a lot. If you feel comfortable reading the article, just change it [crazy] Each character in this article is very three-dimensional and the plot is very smooth. It is really suitable for those who are in a literary shortage on the Internet. I wish the young couple 99 again [sending my heart]

I read more than 200,000 words in one go. There are very few texts in foreign countries that can keep me interested in reading and are free from ambiguity and exaggeration. [Adoration] I was tripped up by this beautiful love, even though they only had a light kiss so far. [I almost cried] to 105. Progress, the protagonist gave me the feeling that they really love each other but it is not all smooth sailing. It gave me a rich reading experience and full characters. [I learned] They seem to not understand love when they fall in love, but it does not affect that they will be good to each other without hesitation. It is very pure [I understand] I really hope that they can all gain something and relieve their worries [I'm about to cry] Please, don't give your children any more knifes [crying] (I don't want to have only the "he" in the introduction to support me [crying])

Well, it's quite interesting, although it's rather bland. Alas, it's still too bland, but I felt relieved after reading the author's postscript. There are many problems in the postscript, such as the protagonist's personality, etc., Which made the characters fuller and made me understand them better. (But aside from the topic, Yan Lanjian is the second male lead. I really never expected it. I always thought he was just a supporting role in addition to the supporting role. I almost forgot his name. But in the author's postscript, I found out that he is also the second male lead. I really didn't expect it)

I read it once a long time ago. I didn't comment on it at the time, but I was very impressed. I read it again today, so I read it again. I really like the author's writing style. In fact, before this book, I didn't have the patience to read the plot of the protagonist's growth process. But in this book, I really like the part where Luo Yue becomes the master and apprentice. No. I'm procrastinating. Forgive me for being uneducated. If I can describe it, it should be the sense of solidity in cotton pants stuffed with socks. The protagonist is improving in every fight. Every secret realm is not entered in vain. It can be seen that the author has a good grasp of the rhythm. It is amazing to be able to tell so many stories in more than a hundred chapters. I like you.

Very well written. It's obviously he, but it makes me feel so sad. Maybe it's because other people's feelings are too sad. There is always no connection, even though the protagonists are together. At this time, the supporting characters also felt even sadder. The two of them still have another chance to be reborn, but it seems that the others have lost it.

Maybe it really is a difference in taste. I think the writing is very good, the characters are not flat, and the plot is certainly not that vigorous. But not all books have to have a vigorous plot. All protagonists have to dare to love and hate. It may not be a good book for attack and control or control, but as a story reader, this story is very good. There is love and hate, and the protagonist can also forgive each other. It does not mean that disappointment must lead to a bridge back to the bridge, a road back, and it does not mean that disappointment cannot be forgiven. When will some people understand? ? In fact, you don't have to read it if you think the author's writing is not to your liking. Doesn't everything have to be similar to the current mainstream storylines and character styles to be a good novel? I think the author's writing style can make up for 70% of the shortcomings. The plot reminds me of some of my feelings about emotions. It can be said that this book gave me a lot of feelings.

This is a very different book that I have read in Tomato for so long. My Chinese language skills are not very good, so I can't describe the feeling. I can only say that I just want to read it, want to finish it, and want to understand the whole story about them.

The author's writing style is really great, and the story is very reasonable. I was offended when I first read it, but later on, the plot development was explained one by one, and it was very smooth. The emotional lines of the supporting characters in the extra chapter are sad. The story of the previous generation is so sad. Fortunately, the protagonist is finally happy.

Overall, the writing style is very good, but some people in the comment area want to read be, so go search for be yourself. Where you are, everything you say is beautiful, but it is a misunderstanding. Wouldn't you be happy if you resolve the misunderstanding? He keeps saying that Yue is not worthy and leaves Luo alone to be beautiful. If you want to read Dumei's revenge story, can you search for it yourself? [Cover face]

Beautifully written! ! ! It just looks good! ! ! After reading it, I actually have a lot to say, but if you think about it carefully, this is also everyone's choice. As readers, we look at everyone's life from God's perspective, which is incomplete in a sense. Just a few sentences cannot summarize their lives. Some babies will feel sad that Jiang Ling and E Yu did not end well, and will feel angry because of Mo Huaiying's behavior. Of course I will too. But then I thought about it, even if they didn't survive, their lives were so long and so many things happened in the middle that are not in the novel. I can only look at the development of the story from the perspective of a bystander. All I can say is that the author's characters are very full-bodied and awesome! Finally, I hope everyone can be happy! I still want to say something: People are in it, and of course they don't know the future direction. Destiny is like a root, changing according to the times. The slight trembling of a butterfly's wings may bring about a storm. The people in the book have not read this book, so they naturally do not know what will happen in the future. They are just trying their best to get the best ending. I feel very emotional and sad, not because of anything else, but just for them.

Really, this is the only second book that I have read since afternoon (here specifically refers to the main text and extras) at around 11pm. I really like it. The writing style is really good. It feels really good to read all the way. However, it is a bit regretful that I can't read the reincarnation chapter of regret and the do of the two protagonists. Okay, that's it for now, but there's one more thing I haven't said yet: I wish Yue Liyou and Luo Feiqing (Luo Feiqing) and others in the parallel world will always be happy and happy! I also wish you a happy writing career in the third dimension, and I hope to see your next book! Okay, this is finally over. End----------2024.5.17

I think this book is very interesting. One of the things I appreciate the most is that the protagonist will not let the villains have a chance to develop. The main character is to avoid future troubles and will not leave hidden dangers for his future revenge. It is so cool! Secondly, the teacher's writing style is also pretty good, I recommend it!

Oh my god, this book tortured me from the beginning to the end. The last extra chapter is sweet [sending my heart] The main text seems to be he, but it made me feel worse than be [I almost cried] I think the writing is very good [sending my heart]

The writing is really good. I thought it was just like other articles, but I didn't expect that the author's writing style is very good and the writing is quite delicate. When I first read it, I was super disgusted with Yue Liyou, and I thought it was unjust. But after reading it, I cried to death, and I forgive him. He is very good, but he doesn't understand love, and he has a magical tool to eliminate his emotions. , I also like Luo Feiqing very much. He is decisive in killing and will never leave the villain alive to cause trouble, no matter how insignificant he is. There are few protagonists who have such a consciousness of eradicating the roots. As for the annihilation of the Jasper Sect, in fact, if you think about it carefully, both sides seem to be right, and both sides are a little wrong. As a sect of cultivating immortals, the Jasper Sect is on the right path. People who find half-demon must want to eliminate demons for fear of leaving hidden dangers. In order to live, Zhenren Mo allowed his inner demons to possess him and killed everyone. Some people, this is probably unconsciously, anyway, this article is very good-looking, I like this kind of short chapters, I read it in one go, the plot is wonderful, unlike other articles, which have more than a thousand chapters in one writing, and have to wait for updates. After reading the last part, I forget the previous part, anyway, the author, please give it a try! Keep up the good work

How can I put it, objectively speaking, I think the writing is very good, really very good, and the flow of the story is all there. There is no emotional flow in the early stage, not sad, and I can't help it later (I cried anyway). I think it can be scored 9.2, But it is not enough in Tomato. Compared with it (the novel), there are no outstanding points, not even the broth. It reminds me of Tianguan, but when you read it, you will feel that you really can't bear to watch the protagonist's sauce-stuffed stuffing. I think it's quite insulting and OOC. They are both righteous people and their feelings for each other are very sincere and not limited to physical feelings. It shows that the author really devoted his efforts to portraying them. Anyway, I can't imagine the picture of Qingqing (Luo Feiqing) as a female fu. It's quite good-looking, so I took the time to leave a paw. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and take good care of himself at the same time [Love] [Love]

Treasure book! ! ! Show me everything! The subject matter is rare, at least in all my experience of reading novels, this is the first time I have seen this kind of novel. I am already reading this for the second time. I don't know if there were any comments when I first read it. I will comment first. The plot design is super good, and the emotional process is also well written. There are no particularly sudden emotions. Everything is a matter of course. I like this kind of half-sad and half-sweet story, and the early mistakes Various accidents in the meeting and mid-term led to the separation of the two, but the two later woke up separately and still couldn't live without each other. However, the situation at that time was that they were separated from each other. It was our Luo Feiqing who spent a lot of effort to resurrect her. To be honest, I still feel that Luo Feiqing paid too much. Even if Yue Liyou loves him very much, we Luo Luo still have to wait for him for so long [crying]

How can I put it this way? It's very interesting from beginning to end. This writing style is what I often call heart-wrenching. And I think the biggest highlight is the ending and extras. It's really great. It's like a he and a kind of peaceful follow-up.

Super super pretty! I had read a similar novel before, but the ending left me disappointed and a bit unfinished. I searched for similar novels through various novel softwares, and then I accidentally saw this novel. I originally read it with the intention of easing my regrets about the previous novel, but then I became more and more obsessed with it. The ending was surprising. I thought they would listen to them and make the ending BE. I discovered the treasured author hahahaha [eating melon]