Reborn in a Parallel World, I Want to Conquer Myself

Redemption, this is my summary of this book. In the book, I hope that you can have another self, save your former self, and let a warm current flow in your heart, like an endless spring, flowing through the wasteland, nurturing everything, making the world full of love, making you accept the world from the heart, resisting the wind and rain of the world, and letting the little person in your heart step out of your heart and go to the world, a real world.

The daily plot has almost no ups and downs and no major poisonous points, so it can pass the time. The character creation is very average, almost one-sided, and there is very little description. It's my first time writing a book, so it's pretty good. At least it has ideas and a plot. I haven't read much about Changing Marriage. My only suggestion is that the author can use this book to practice his writing. Come on [like] The plot had its ups and downs, and it began to test my writing skills. I was a little disappointed, because my expectations were too high [face covering] The newbie is already good, with good ideas, but the plot is old-fashioned. This is also a very common problem with tomatoes

I am my wife [laughing evilly] As long as you know yourself best and feel most at ease with yourself

I think we can add more psychological description, especially what the female protagonist thinks of the male protagonist now. Otherwise, it would seem that the distance is a bit too far and there is no feeling. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too close. In other words, they don't seem to be the same person.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I have seen others, but I have never seen myself [laughing evilly]

The emotional part is well written, but the plot development needs to be improved. The new author can understand, and the overall evaluation is four stars. I hope the author will work hard in the future! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so interesting, hahahaha [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Very nice, okay?

Yes, dried ba type [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully]

It's not bad, come on

I really like this kind of self-redemption novel, come on

This book is very well written, good luck to the author!

Say important things three times Beautiful! ! ! Nice! ! ! Nice! ! !

As your military advisor, I can't give you a five-star rating. Alas, I said it wrong. You give me 80 yuan, deduct 80 yuan from 300 yuan and give it to me

How many more chapters will it take for them to be together?

Beautiful, wonderful, rich, emotional

The plot technique is very routine, but the fast-forward style can easily be boring. I'm probably a newbie, please support me.

Personally think it looks good The author's updates are unstable I would like to give you a suggestion, let the male and female protagonists get together as soon as possible. I can't wait [Adoration][Adoration]

Keep the books up first

Nice! ! ! Not enough!

Very nice, why do I return your kiss?

It's a good novel for me, but the updates are too slow. Can the author update more?

Come here and learn knowledge

It's so beautiful, come on, author!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

As long as you change your marriage, it will be five stars!

High emotional intelligence: innocent and innocent Low emotional intelligence: up to eight years old After watching it again, it's still okay. I really can't understand it except for some specific plots. But after all, everyone died. Sweeping graves.

There are very few of this type, I like it very much😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Come on, author, even if the ending is hasty, don't just stop updating it [crying]