Reborn in a Parallel World, I Have to Win Myself Over

Redemption, this is my summary of this book. In the book, I hope that you can have another self, save your former self, and let a warm current flow in your heart, like an endless spring, flowing through the wasteland, nurturing everything, making the world full of love, making you accept the world from the heart, resisting the wind and rain of the world, and letting the little person in your heart step out of your heart and go to the world, a real world.

The daily plot has almost no ups and downs and no major poisonous points, so it can pass the time. The character creation is very average, almost one-sided, and there is very little description. It's my first time writing a book, so it's pretty good. At least it has ideas and a plot. I haven't read much about Changing Marriage. My only suggestion is that the author can use this book to practice his writing. Come on 👍 The plot had its ups and downs, and it began to test my writing skills. I was a little disappointed, because my expectations were too high 🤦 The newbie is already good, with good ideas, but the plot is old-fashioned. This is also a very common problem with tomatoes

I am my wife 😏 As long as you know yourself best and feel most at ease with yourself

I think we can add more psychological description, especially what the female protagonist thinks of the male protagonist now. Otherwise, it would seem that the distance is a bit too far and there is no feeling. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too close. In other words, they don't seem to be the same person.

I have seen others, but I have never seen myself 😏

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The emotional part is well written, but the plot development needs to be improved. The new author can understand, and the overall evaluation is four stars. I hope the author will work hard in the future! 😘😘

It's so interesting, hahahaha 😏 😏 😏 😏

Very nice, okay?

It's not bad, come on