Genshin Impact************

Finally, I can read a book about becoming Ling Hua. It must be praised.

It's okay, but I have to make some suggestions on a few major issues. First of all, the character of the younger sister can be said to be quite bad. She smells like green tea in front of her mother. She treats outsiders better than her own family. Secondly, Meng Youyou's personality is set to be introverted, so she took a photo of a girl she just met without her permission. Everything she said during the second meeting was considered a physical threat. I can't see how she feels introverted. Of course, the protagonist's personality is too much. Weakness is also a problem. If you replace all the plots he has experienced so far with girls, I won't find it awkward. This character needs to be changed. I would like to give you two suggestions. Either the protagonist realizes his own problems, or he can inherit part of the character's personality when he transforms. What the protagonist is currently experiencing when transforming is actually not a big deal, but it is a mess. If Ayaka handles it, he will definitely be able to solve the problem. My humble opinion, I hope you will consider it.

Come on, once it becomes popular, I will be a veteran-level reader.

Well, I hope to be single. Most of the new transformation novels published now are about Lily. I'm currently following one or two of them. I don't know if they will become Lily in the end [smile]

Nothing else, just because the author directly expressed: Lily

I must give this author five stars, and I also hope that the protagonist will be strong in the later stages. Isn't it supposed that Turtle in the Gods is a more rational lady? Not very shy. Ah?

This transformation book won't be like those transformation books, right? Those who are either celebrities or idols, and some are singers, will instantly feel bad when watching it. [Smile]

I hope that by adding the Eye of God, you can fight lightly or not at all. The Eye of God can be used in daily life.

The plot is okay, I suggest the author not to have a sister when writing books in the future [awkward laugh]

It hasn't been updated yet. This girl just looks like she's been whitewashed. Come on, it would be best if she was written as Qiongmei. [Shy] I also like the character Youyou. I hope I can recognize the comic that the protagonist is from early and then chase the protagonist.

Give the protagonist some human rights!

I don't know what to say. I originally raised it, but I came back and finished reading it [I understand][I understand] However, there are indeed some things that are wrong, but for this rating, I think the author's writing is quite good. Alas, it has been so long that I forgot about it. I hope you will work hard on the next book.

Okay, I finally found this kind of combination of two-dimensional and three-dimensional things that are all Urban Lily. I searched on three platforms, but I didn't see many that fit my taste. Thank you stranger [love] What? It's not enough to watch at all.

I just read the first part of the author. Will the main character become a man later? (After all, this is the first book I have read about Ayaka Kamisato, so it must be six stars)

Come on💪, well written

Hahahahahaha

Looking back, I see it but it is over. It is difficult for a villain to see a good book flourish.

Yes, yes, support the author (ノ^o^)ノ(ノ^o^)ノ(ノ^o^)ノ(ノ^o^)ノ

Come on! You write so well!

Originally it was five stars, but the author was too short.

It must be five stars, okay? What's going on?

Push up the rating

It looks good, but I want to ask, is it orthopedics?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, how did it end?

Author, I wish you happiness, good health, peace and happiness in the new year. In fact, you write very well. If you have new books, please let me know.

It's very good. It's a good article at the beginning. I hope the follow-up will be good as well.

Do you know? It's very good. More than 30,000 people are reading it. It's much better than many books.

The author is really short

Come on, come on, come on

A very good book