Siheyuan: to Activate the System, I Married Qin Huairu

Not bad, new ideas for the start, new ideas for the courtyard, come on! Come on

Five-star praise, author, I am here to support your new book

First of all, the book is very good, the author is very attentive, the whole plot is very creative, and some of the foreshadowings are very interesting to continue reading. However, there are also some minor flaws. For example, there is too much foreshadowing in the first 40 chapters and it feels like it can be shortened to 15 chapters to directly enter the main plot. Many Chelulu talks too much, and there are also some unnecessary plots. For example, Yi Zhonghai's calculations can be placed after the main plot begins. The sudden jump of nearly ten months after more than 40 chapters is also very subtle. Qin Huairu's transformation was too hard, and Yi Zhonghai's calculations were too good. The fierce conflict between Deputy Director Li and Director Yang couldn't have been unresponsive for 10 months after it broke out. You can vaguely mention what happened in the past 10 months later, and use this period of time as a foreshadowing. These are all immature suggestions, which are considered offensive. Finally, I still hope that the author will update more. Wei Wu with interesting plot is really great. Children only make choices, of course adults want them all! I will always support this work! A five-star novel in my mind!

It's okay, but if you're not a first-hand wife, you'll definitely dissuade a lot of people.

The ending in bangs is the happiest. Even if Yi Buqun is so murderous and has done so many bad things, how can he be so friendly to pig's feet? Shouldn't he pay for the murder? Xu Damao and his son were both tricked into a basket by him. How cruel was he?

Good. . IQ online. . The author's writing style is also good. . There are just too many conspiracies. . . Personally, I prefer the kind where the protagonist is the sixth child. . . A Siheyuan type book. This book is of good quality. . .

Come on come on come on come on

A novel worth reading

Those who marry Qin Huairu must have five stars

This is great! This is the first time I saw Qin Huairu marrying a widow! And three kids!

It's a pretty good courtyard house.

Order one for yourself, hey hey

The five-star old poison can poison everyone.

Different ideas

Less than 6 points is a bit low, after all, the author worked hard

Finally saw the one who married Qin Huairu

After reading it, eh😓, I have nothing to say, so let's just leave it at that! Writing a book is not easy, I wish you good luck. Many female literary yyds! ! !

The plot of this book is interesting

Come on✊, don't be a mess, don't be a eunuch

Come on, come on, it's not bad! ! ! !

It's okay😄I just finished eating

Well written, worth recommending [laughter]

Very nice! I hope the author can work hard!

The writing is beautiful.

It's the first time it's not so uncomfortable

Thank you very much for your efforts

The second-hand one is very coaxing, I like Qin Huairu

It's good, but the ending is a bit tragic. The protagonist's whole family hangs it on the wall.

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, there's Cao Cao's book! Jie Jie Jie

This book is one of the few articles that I can read from beginning to end. It is very exciting. Although it has some minor flaws, it is still worth reading overall.