The apocalypse arrives, the living dead run rampant, and species mutate.
Lin Fan is reborn one hour before the apocalypse begins. With the end of the world approaching, evolution becomes the only chance of survival.
The divine artifacts that appear in the apocalypse become essential for anyone hoping to embark on the path of evolution.
Relying on memories from his rebirth, Lin Fan gets ahead of everyone else. Before anyone even knows what these divine artifacts are, he obtains the first one.
After that, Lin Fan acquires more and more divine artifacts. With their help, he gradually sets foot on the path to becoming the strongest.
The protagonist, the Holy Mother, also squeezes the realm
There are a lot of contents that I don't understand why they are reminded repeatedly, and I have to recall Li Ping once for everything I get. It kept repeating trash talk, and I couldn't stand watching it for more than 30 minutes. There were too many repeated contents. It was a piece of shit. After the introduction, there were all kinds of metaphors. Then I introduced what realm this thing has reached, haha, and talked about the realms again, finishing a lot of nonsense.
Stop writing. Writing online articles is not your talent. Driving screws is your talent. Don't waste your time.
The suppression of the strength of the protagonist group is too serious. The number of words after leaving the company is too low. The personal strength of the protagonist is very unreasonable. Let's not mention that the protagonist is reborn. Even if a normal person has obtained so many magical items and equipment, his strength will not be like this. Author, you'd better take a look at it yourself. The subject matter is quite good and the plot is okay.
The content of Chapter 36 turns the protagonist's rebirth into a joke [awkward laugh]
The beginning is too long and I have to kill ordinary zombies for more than ten chapters.
A reborn person like a hot chicken
Come on! Give me 5⭐. There are many questions and they are very simple. The idea and setting are fine. My writing ability can't keep up. Example. Pig's feet learned 72 Shaolin stunts. Fighting is still about boxing. There are too many skills and attributes. It's useless for everyone to understand. I searched everywhere desperately. You really don't know what to do with pig's feet? Blind. There is a whole team. I don't think so. It's all rubbish. The features are not listed. These are all personal suggestions for reference only. Come on! Hope it can be better. Mainly no outline. You can see where it is written. The basic breathing of pig's feet in the early stage. If you say no, it's gone. Pig's feet are like my 3-year-old little brother. Who do you like? Finished with a slap on the head. Take his chance. Remembered. Come on.
I didn't read the comments earlier, so I say goodbye.
I've read a few chapters and it's a bit long-winded.