Extraordinary Profession: Card Master

It's okay. The protagonist's strength should be improved, but he's still a mortal until now [Thinking]

It is a very realistic description of a magical world. The protagonist is a very normal otaku, except for being a little bit stubborn, but this is normal. The descriptions of fighting and strategy are very real and exciting.

Very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡There is nothing bad about it so far, please come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come, the author, read with me, I solemnly swear: starting from today Beginning and never changing. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive to build Brilliant, taking pleasure in coding, steel refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I Strict oath: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. The code word is me My vocation is my boundless potential and I am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet literature. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding day and night.

The writing is very good, why is the score so low?

The subject matter is relatively novel and the world view is relatively large. There are many places to write. The author writes too many inner monologues and it seems more complicated. The article is similar to the invincible article. You can read articles by other famous authors. Overall it is quite good. The logic is clearer and the combat power is not broken. It is considered a better invincible. Generally speaking, don't increase the combat power too fast. Write slowly and carefully, and you can write a lot. The speed is a bit fast (personal opinion). You can write more daily life or adventures. Improve the pitfalls of the ancient times that you wrote before. Push back the next time for the war. When the war starts, describe the battlefield. The writing is better than ordinary people, but it is not up to the level of a writer. There are some shortcomings. Come on, author, it is already a million words. It is best not to finish the first book [Like] [Love] The traffic flow is a bit small, there are not many comments on the whole book, and the book is not very lively. Readers and authors should go to Shuhuang Square to read more, and cannot just rely on the recommendations given by Tomato.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. The previous narration and writing method are okay, but when portraying the protagonist, there are quite a few contradictions, and the connection of the plot is not ideal. Those who like the data template golden finger basically like to see the pleasure of upgrading and sublimation. The overall look is good, but it could actually be better.

I saw that 107 was pretty good, nothing else. When I saw that it was a mine, I felt that I had read a similar book, and I really wanted to be similar, but it was too long and I forgot about it. Come on, the book is good [like]

It can be seen that the author is very careful, but it is too slow to warm up and has a lot of hang-ups. However, even with restrictions, the upgrade is very slow. The map is also explored bit by bit. The design of the world is still good, but the slow presentation can easily make readers lose patience. It is entirely possible to give a general description of this world first, and then slowly add in the details.

The world building is very novel, the writing is very good, and the story is very detailed, which is very good. The protagonist has a growth-oriented character, and the portrayal is very distinctive, um, a little bit tongue-in-cheek. Hang in there, even though the writing style is not very popular on Tomato, I am currently reading absolutely good books and hope to grow up.

It's very similar to Blind Lord's Mechanical Alchemist, but there are differences, so come on, I like you, because there are not many authors who write this kind of subject, but it's really good that you can keep writing.

Why did it end so suddenly? Haven't seen enough yet

The background setting is quite good, but the author's description of the fighting is still a bit poor. If the author had better described the fighting scenes, I believe it would still be a good novel. I'll give it four stars. It's still not close to five stars.

Only one chapter per day is not enough. I need to add more [smile][smile][smile]

It looks good, but the rating is low. I personally think it could be a 9. Maybe many people rated it at the beginning. I complained about it once and wrote a chapter review, but the further you read, the more exciting it becomes.

Not bad, but the ending feels too early

Relax, don't watch with your brain, don't watch with your heart, it's very good

The plot is compact, the system is relatively complete, and you can watch

The plot and setting are very good and grand. If you write it down, you will be a high-quality novel that can be used as a god. The only problem is that the early plot is too protracted and the final battle before the curse page is too lengthy. The protagonist's character is decisive in killing and the characters are fleshed out. Although it is not at the level of a top god, it is still great. I hope the author can work harder. Everyone must be able to see your excellence

It's a rare good book. It's rare that it's not so simple. It's a bit like Cataclysm. However, this book is not suitable for Tomatoes. It should be posted at a certain point. The bad reviews are all about the slow plot... The portrayal of the female characters is too average, not up to par with the Mechanical Alchemist. It's so embarrassing.

It feels very similar to a book I read. He was also locked in a closed space and then ran out! Occupation: Alchemist A bit like the Mechanical Alchemist

This book is really good, a new style of writing, the story frame and content are relatively novel, and the writing style is also good. Keep up the good work, the author, and don't collapse later.

I don't think this book is a good one. It may have some blocking points, but why is it rated so low?

I think it's okay, as the ending just happened in the novice village.

I give 5-5 because I can only give 5 stars. If possible, I will give another 5-star good book.

To be honest, I didn't understand the story line [face covering]

If you don't click in and take a look, how do you know if he's good-looking?

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

The setting and development is Mechanical Alchemist,,,,,,,,

Come on, I haven't seen such an interesting book in a long time.