Why Do I Lose When I Summon a Beautiful Girl with a Super Artifact at the Beginning?

I am a new author. I have read the novels of 1989 and want to write the story in my heart. Brothers, please give me any suggestions. I will continue to improve, but please don't leave negative comments maliciously. The author has a bad heart [laughter] In addition, although this book is about universal job transfer, it still feels similar to Infinite Flow. The various secret realm dungeons are world time and space with different styles, such as Western fantasy, fantasy, sword and magic, doomsday, technology, and interstellar. There are many types. Moreover, the author is more striving for perfection and wants to try his best to write various characters in each world with their own characteristics. This book is my first attempt at writing a full-length novel. In fact, I prefer to write about super-power battles. I hope to travel across the city like a native of my country [laughs crookedly]. I also like Magneto Wolverine and other characters very much, and I have written many short essays before. As a result, this time my mind got crazy and I suddenly wrote about universal job transfer. I originally wrote a few chapters and didn't want to write it anymore, but with the support of my true fans, I ended up writing this long without even realizing it. I would also like to sincerely thank my readers and friends who have always supported and accompanied me. You are the real heroes! [Blowing kiss] Overall, this novel is quite good (´இωஇ｀) and worth reading! The daily life is very warm, the battle descriptions are fierce, and the evening posts with the beautiful girls of the spirit spirit, and there are also good pictures. In addition, I would like to suggest that you don't read book reviews when reading novels, or don't be influenced by book reviews, because there are always some people who are brainless or deliberately give bad reviews, and they can always make up all kinds of strange, or unfounded, confusing reasons to reduce other readers' desire to read. Ever since I became an author, I have finally understood what it means to make a mess of a pot of soup. Even if a hundred people give a good review, as long as one person deliberately disgusts others and leaves a negative review, countless new readers can be dissuaded. I heard that there are some novel writing studios that will specifically give negative reviews to some new books with good results. I don't know if this is true. Anyway, a few days after my book debuted, there suddenly appeared a lot of inexplicable, messy and nonsensical one-star negative reviews. Basically, the reading time was less than 30 minutes, and one report was accurate. Therefore, when brothers read other books that interest them in the future, it is best not to be affected by bad reviews. After all, everyone's thoughts and views are different. Some people's brain circuits are just different from normal people. What you like is the king.

The writing of this novel is very in line with my wishes. Come on, author, I like you [cool]! But I think it would be more interesting if it could summon weapons from various games, such as the Infinity Blade in League of Legends or the Naginata in Genshin Impact. I've read a lot of book reviews about the Holy Mother. I've read it twice, and I haven't seen any mention of the Holy Mother in the main character. I guess it's just a group of trolls. This is the trend on the Internet nowadays. People who are slightly kind and normal can be trolled to shit, and then they can just throw out the words "Holy Mother" and pictures of the Leshan Giant Buddha without thinking, and they can attract likes and followers. There are all kinds of garbage people and mindless trolls in all kinds of books. No matter how good your writing is, they can find faults with you. You don't need to pay attention to it at all. Just report it. You, a new author, just write about you and that's it. In the future, when I write novels, if someone is a mindless troll, I'll damn it if I don't troll them to death! By the way, author, when will the Mecha Girl and Space Battleship Girl in your profile come out? Please collect the Elf Queen and Sea Dragon Queen as soon as possible. I'm still waiting to see [laughter]

Just for this, I can do what I say with the ship girl (ºº), it's super exciting and full of stars

It has a strong flavor of reincarnation in a different world in the second dimension~ The plot is okay, but the description of the characters' language is just like the companions of the brave from another world~

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For this type of book, I think the author wrote it quite well! If it can continue like this, it is only a matter of time before it becomes popular! Of course, the author must also be detailed and clear! Combat and daily life can be described in detail, and some unimportant things can be briefly mentioned or described roughly, so that you won't feel too tired! [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Smile]

Although the rating is not high, I like it, come on

Everything is fine, but looking at this trend, I have to write about 1,000 chapters? After all, it takes too long to complete a big task [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's good to read. Yes, this is a great read. If you like it, read it. Unfortunately, it's boring at the end. It's probably my problem. I felt that the process was too fast [laughs awkwardly], and then I got a little annoyed [face covering] and stopped reading. But I can still give it five stars. It's probably not the book's problem.

It's a good book, but it's too early for the devil to appear. This book's chance of becoming a god is reduced by 50%.

The writing is pretty good, why is the rating so low? The author sometimes gives out benefits. It's great, but it's just not astringent [laughs evilly]. It's about a harem, multiple heroines, and in the end the protagonist doesn't even let go of the devil. There's also a second-hand spoiler in the back. It's a bit outrageous. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The writing is good, but I rushed too fast to catch up with the progress. I beat the Demon God incarnate in just a few pictures.

For me, it is a very good book

Personally I think it's well written, but I don't know why the rating is so low. If I think about it carefully, maybe it's because the plot progresses too slowly, so I can only update a few chapters a day?

The heroine is so beautiful, the pictures are real

So beautiful and wonderful

Give me more violence, I want to see more! Come on, author, I hope you will write well!

Author, can you come up with the Key of God [laughing evilly] It's better to have Manzo Void [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's not bad, come on, the author, I hope the author writes better and better!

Overall it worked, but it ended a bit suddenly. The combat power is a bit weak at the front and back. Then there are some holes that are not filled. But overall it's very good. After all, it's the first time for the author to write a book. So the author, can you please give me a like and comment? ExpectationStar Eyes[Shy][Shy][Shy] Damn it, it's over now It's okay, I'll watch it again. I am a picky person, so I have to pick out the pitfalls. Author, you can publish a second season, and then add a few more technological summons on top of these, as well as the aircraft carrier and aircraft selected in the introduction. There are none, only one mecha. Author, I also have a few points that I hope you can change. 1. The progress is a bit too fast and the plot is not coherent. (Since I found out that the author was writing a book for the first time, I left it alone) 2. The combat power is too confusing, and the levels of players and secret realms are also confusing. 3. Various roles are not prominent, maybe it's me When will the new book be released?

The pictures are very nice, but the content is average, just the same old routine of upgrading monsters, spawning monsters, and changing pictures. There are a lot of things to do, but not much in daily life.

Not bad, very pretty

This is simply my ideal novel, so wonderful! Stop talking and go read a book!

I'll give you one star less to make you proud. When is the next book?

It's pretty good. Except for the author's skills that are full of mid-range, long and smelly, they are all good. Why is the score so low? [What]

Come on, come on, keep on coming

I think it looks good

I still prefer protagonists who insist on having their own way This one is okay.

Very well written, finished reading on August 26, 2023

Very good. The three views are more positive than 90% of the novels on the market. I will definitely keep following it! !