Apocalypse: The King of Another World Dwells in My Sword

This book looks good. The plot of the author's book is a bit like Monster No. 8 [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Give yourself a thumbs up for persevering to reach a million words [Thoughts] Finished Spreading Fox [top post]

I hope to see the author's progress. Also, I need to remind you that the audience for this type of book is really small. Let's talk about the advantages. The logic is very smooth and non-toxic... The characterization is more vivid and the story is well advanced. The shortcomings are also obvious, Monster invasion, how come the monsters are based on the human world? Spiders, centipedes, wolves, etc... Are too ordinary and don't feel that exciting. Secondly, the fictional world is indeed clear. On this basis, there is no fog on the world map, and many ordinary people even live and work in peace and contentment. In a word, it is too comfortable, so what about S-class? Most ordinary people are not affected. There is no sense of mystery or crisis in the world. How can this be reflected in the protagonist? Is this the wrong framework? Also, there is always a feeling of Ultraman fighting monsters. It would be great if the expressions could be enriched. Third, the world of monsters is also uninteresting. They have order, racial classes, and may even have politics and diplomacy. Because the mention of the undead being enslaved and so on makes the world of monsters look too human, but it is not a war novel. In short, such monsters seem to really make people uninterested. Fourth, the protagonist's combat power is clearly improved, but what about the others? Just use one sentence to summarize it, right? If you can't figure out the logic of the advancement of human beings in the world, it will be very empty, so please fill in this point, which is indispensable for any power system. Finally I wish the author can continue to make progress, and we will do our best to support you. Let me add that the plot is extremely exciting and worth watching.

I once abandoned it because it looked like Monster No. 8, But recently I picked it up again. After reading three hundred chapters, 7.4 Is definitely low, at least 9.4. I don't think there's much of a problem. Even the Kyushu competition chapter that many readers criticized in the early and middle period (reason: too long) is much more nutritious than some mindless articles. At first, I had a preconception and thought it was very weak, but after looking at it, I realized that it was actually written well. The description of the battle scenes and the strategic and tactical games are already gauzy and academic. The setting of the world view and background is quite solid. The reason for the appearance of the door, the undead clan, the origin of the dusk, etc. Are all quite suspenseful. The whole story is somewhat in-depth, and the dialogue and interaction between the characters are quite humorous and lively. The protagonist is well written, decisive and cheerful, and his views on education (everyday life related to Xiaowen) and world view (visions related to monsters) are very consistent. On the contrary, I hate Lei Ming very much. Compared with the prototype in the comic book Monster 8 (the heroine's commander father), the portrayal is too poor. Before Chapter 300, he was a pure villain, but he lost his temper at the critical moment. There are also only 300 monster warriors in service, which is too small (I remember correctly, right). The opposite side opens the door twice in a short period of time to release a group of monsters, or Ella and Shi Ye are waiting for GG. Finally, regarding the waste material flow, I don't feel aggrieved at all, it's more like it's more realistic. If the male protagonist's growth process is well written, the impression will not be bad. One more thing, as expected, 🔪[almost crying] is a powerful tool to make readers feel deep. I saw the latest one, em... If the first 300 chapters score 9.4, Then the new copy of King's Domain after that will give me a maximum of 8.5. I went to the new map King's Realm, and the style changed a lot. It's like a medieval otherworld novel, but the writing is not as exciting as Earth. I didn't expect to whitewash Ella. This reversal is very abrupt. I can understand the forced explanation, but I don't like this arrangement. It can be said to be a bit silly. Also, after Luo Yi opened that desperate formation and ate 5 million angels, he didn't explain what happened to him. Becoming stupid? Dead? Still invincible? I prefer invincibility. Another point is, how did the later undead, like Shi Ye, possess wisdom? 24.5.25 I finished reading it, em... Putting aside the top-level design (god), this is a masterpiece, and my previous questions have been answered. Top-level design is really difficult to write, especially the better the quality of the book, the harder it is to write. I won't comment too much. I can only say that I think this book is the same as other good books such as Zhan Shen, Alien Beast, Fang Xiu, etc. The top-level design did not give me the feeling that this book is a god among gods.

No, what happened to the tomatoes? Books that can imagine the second chapter after reading the first chapter are rated 9.0, But this book is so good that it is a 7.2? I remember that not all Tomatoes only look at ratings. I'll go straight to the crazy five-star level

Five stars, the writing is very clear and logical, and there are no brainless links. The position of the knife is also very good. Behind the peaceful life is a murderous intention belonging to another world. In short, I highly recommend reading this book. Do not read the low rating. The book is a good book, but I like the good ending of everyone surviving. I hope the author will not resurrect them after reading my book review. Ji Nai is really good at writing.

It's simple and rough, but the details are really good. The fighting scenes are very well written, and there aren't too many inner dramas. The only shortcoming is that the background is not so comprehensive. For example, how many battle armors are there, how many monsters of what size can they make, how many S-class armors are there, what are their specific damage values, what are the skills of the team members, etc. Other than that, I can't find any other shortcomings in this book. But the only thing I hope is that the author is great. Can he update it faster? It's not enough [laughing]

A story of flesh and blood, a story that makes you cry and laugh, a story that is extremely cruel, a story that is extremely real, a story that is so disgusting that it makes you lose all your strength! A desperate and suffocating story that drives people crazy! A story that is hateful and painful and gradually slides into the abyss... No! This is not a story! … This is a powerless... World! World! ! !

It's very interesting. The writing is not stupid, the plot is smooth, and the emotional lines are very comfortable and not obtrusive. They are all good books in Tomato. There are indeed shadows of Monster No. 8 In the beginning, but the more you read, the more addictive you are. To be honest, the plot is better than Monster No. 8. Good luck to the author. It's a pity that there are so few people.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this. It reminded me of Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea when I was a kid. The characters in Yunxue Team showed their emotions very well and had distinct personalities, just like the people on the Nautilus, they were warm, brave, sad, and angry.