Return Ten Thousand Times, My Disciples Are All Big Guys

If you like to read refreshing articles, you don't need to read this book. There is nothing refreshing about it, but a lot of poisonous points. I will talk about the poisonous points below. First, the issue of fighting. This author doesn't know how to write about fighting at all. He is a complete novice, even among novices. If you read a lot of Shuangwen, and often see those amazing martial arts, various artistic conceptions, and other battles, you will really feel embarrassed when you read this book as if it were a pediatric battle. I suggest the author learn more about how to write fights in other Shuangwen. Don't you think there is a big gap between you and others? Second, there is no decisive killing. The Zhao family mainly killed the protagonist, but the protagonist finally only asked him about the person behind the scenes and let him go without killing him or deposing him. I don't need to say more about this plot. Third, you are threatened by a woman in white. Of course, the protagonist cannot defeat this woman. If you write a cool article, it is recommended not to have such a scenario, especially in front of the apprentice. It is recommended to learn more about how to increase the protagonist's compelling plot. In the end, the plot of this book was okay, but the author's writing skills in some aspects were really poor. When reading many other cool books, it felt like a college student running into a kindergarten. Only then did I discover that this author turned out to be a million-fold returner. He was an author who never tried to gain anything from his studies. After writing a book, I was convinced that the fight could be written like this. When the protagonist fights the head of the Zhao family, it's like fighting with a little girl. I'm so embarrassed that I have cancer. I even wonder if you are like a bitch in reality.

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It feels like the author of "Return Ten Thousand Times. A teacher never hides his secrets"