Elden's Circle: the Age of Madness

The score is a bit low, maybe because the score is a little low. It can be seen that the author has a good understanding of the underlying logic of the Ring of Magic world and the historical understanding from beginning to end. It is not easy to explain the twists and turns between the factions in the chapter of the Magic School. Although it is a second-generation novel, the author's writing style is quite good, of high quality, and the characters are well-drawn. It is truly a masterpiece. I've read some other articles. At the same time, what is rare is that there are no poisonous points and character collapse. 9.0 Or above is absolutely fine. Thanks to the author for his creation, it is indeed a good job. The following evaluation is purely personal (actually I wanted to say this a long time ago): To add my own thoughts, I feel that the character of Melina is too girly and lively. Meimei in the original work is a very complex and contradictory person. Second Creation wanted to express that Meimei in the original work really tested the author's skill and character creation ability. In the original work, Meimei has a strong sense of loneliness and mission, and is taciturn. Reason and divinity occupy a very large part of her. Only by carefully observing some of her small movements and dialogues can we slowly discover the cuteness and interest of her "human" side. The performance of burning trees on the top of a giant mountain. The CG shows her innermost emotions very well, and she was relatively restrained before she died (personally, she wanted to touch the faded person to say goodbye). Therefore, it is very difficult and almost unsolvable to conquer the character of Melina, which is no less difficult than EVA to conquer Rei Ayanami. From a player's perspective, what I hope to see more in the second creation is that the faded person improves her strength through hard work, and gets to know her a little bit. On the one hand, it removes the burden from Melina and liberates her from the mission she carries, thereby reducing her "divinity"; on the other hand, in the long process of traveling around the junction, it explores her "humanity", making her more vivid and colorful (in this way, Melina is more like It is a "fading person" in terms of personality and emotion, and a fading person is a fading person who has lost strength and blessings [face covering]) Of course, writing in this way requires the author to have a deep understanding of the game and an extremely sophisticated idea to write a method that is consistent with the world view and "the method of achieving both peace and security in the world". Ps: Support the author [Sending Hearts] The plot of the witch is really well written so far. Although some shadows of Shuangwen can be seen, the teacher has really done a good job in shaping it. Ps: Roderica is very realistic, and Little Red Riding Hood is very cute.

Well, how should I put it, I feel that the author has not played the Dharma Circle branch thoroughly enough, and some plots are not fully understood. For example, Melina's identity before her death, according to the clues in the game, is most likely Queen of Night (the daughter of God). As a controller of the black flame (destined death) who judges all living beings, she can basically be said to be an emotionless machine before her death, that is, the colorless man gave her a little warmth, so her emotions should be more dull (she even took the initiative without resistance) Accepted death, because death is meaningless under the Golden Law, and she has therefore lost the mission of her existence). As for whether she will forgive the pervert and become the King of Mad Fire, I think there is a high probability that she will not (after all, her mission later changed Successfully stopped the epileptic fire and burned the tree) So Lapus's force field can play a big role at this time, directly depriving her of her destined death, forcibly tying her up, and then violently super [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Here is a unified reply to readers' questions about the identity of the protagonist. I will write a few extra chapters to explain clearly at the end of the book, including the protagonist's previous life, Marika, Millicent, Vivian, etc. Also, there are readers in the book circle who have chosen the protagonist of the novel, as well as the author's imaginary singing voice of Vivian found online. Thanks to A Fei for providing the facial expression, it is so beautiful. I didn't even imagine it to be so beautiful. In addition, click on the author's avatar to see Vivian's singing voice. If you like it, you can listen to it.

All I can say is that as someone who deeply loves the background story of Fragmented Magic Circle, this plot is so enjoyable to watch. Also, after becoming platinum in the Ring of Magic, I have left too many regrets. Melina, Irena, Roderika, Millicent, Raya, Se Lian, Brother Hu, Tops, the soul jellyfish sisters Kurala and Kuralis, the platinum son Letina, even Brother Wolf, and my witch at the beginning, there are too many, every time I remember them all vividly. When I read this book now, I always miss the plot of the Ring. I am not afraid of jokes, and I really shed tears unconsciously. Maybe it is because my empathy is too strong, but really, I feel that every character has flesh and blood, such as the feelings and deeds of the quasi-Wang Vic and his witches. How can I not be touched by it?

Have the qualifications to become a doge (doge)

Come on, save Irena, Latarn, Malika, Black Sword, Blaze, Iggy, Loretta, Yula, Ethionora, Alexander, Yuno, etc.

Can the author tell me when Vivian can be rescued?

It must be five stars, it looks good, come on, the author, please don't stop updating. [Smile] Lani is the princess of Kallia. Even if she encounters many changes, she still has her parents, brothers and loyal subordinates. Where's Melina? She has no parents or brothers, no friends or subordinates, she has even lost her past, and her future is already doomed to tragedy. But she still loves the borderland, loves this land more than any demigod, and is willing to sacrifice everything for it. She has never experienced love, but she has to give up the right to love and be loved, and keep distance from the only faded person who can speak. Melina had very few things, but she gave everything to the Faded: the spirit horse Toret, the Holy Grail bottle, and upgraded abilities, leaving only the simple clothes to cover her body and the mission dagger. Trust without reservation, give without reservation. When the Faded One proposed to Lani, she was silently counting her remaining days. Melina left without saying goodbye, quietly throwing herself into the fire and burning into ashes that drifted away in the wind. No one knows her sacrifice. For the faded person, Melina's sudden disappearance and her silent companionship along the way seem to be just their own illusions. How should you choose? You have gone through so much trouble to receive the epileptic fire, only to destroy everything you love. No matter what, I will lose you. It's me who's heartbroken, Melina.

I have a problem. Can the president help me? (It's really tragic. The guardian of the royal city ended up being charmed by Michaela. I'm sorry, I misunderstood you!)

Stupid Elden's Circle was never a game Explodes in the early stage, drags on in the mid stage, male changes to female, slow progress in the later stage For example, if you want to write down in detail where you go or something, you may think this is good, but in fact, the same person who gets something can write it in 200 words, but he writes it in 500 words. A challenge to the Red Lion Festival requires writing 6 pictures. The challenge is to show off the protagonist's awesomeness. He has no soul. Why should the outline be displayed in front of us? Just post it in the book group Male to female is a fact in itself. Whether you like it or not depends on whether the audience likes it or not. By coincidence, I don't like it. It depends on the individual, so the rating will be low. Let's just talk about the plot at the beginning. If you're in a good mood, you'll think it's awesome. If you're in a bad mood, you'll think it's awesome. It all depends on your mood. If you're in a good mood, you'll think it's not just random writing, but a line with deep meaning. If you're in a bad mood, you'll think it's just nonsense. There is also the incoherence between plots and the wrong time between one event and another. Write the introduction clearly and save a few hours of detours. Four stars is an 8.0 Score, which is higher than your average score. Isn't it just a matter of judging whether a work is good or not? There may be exceptions, but it is useless to say more.

I read that some book friends said to just finish it. Direct appendix? It ends directly, so easy. What do other book lovers think? Indeed, if you're not in a state of mind, you don't have to think about it. Some book lovers will not be able to stand it. The recent chapters have also written all sorts of things, especially the male-to-female transformation. This is a minefield that many authors dare not cross, but just end it directly? Even if it is finished, the author will write other books in the future. This is also a big flaw. Looking at it from the beginning, it cannot be said that the writing is getting worse, but it is not as good as before. Speaking of surprises, there were some before, but they were all minor surprises. When it comes to male-to-female transformation, it is considered a big surprise in the male channel. I am not bluffing. The author is great. Can you check which book on the male channel has this content? That is to say, the author's writing is better, and my poison resistance is stronger, otherwise I would have slipped away. The audience of this book is indeed small, and the author must have the idea of ​​discontinuing it, but if it is discontinued, how will the book be read? If I write a second book in the future, some book lovers may not read it again. I have read so many books. I know there are difficulties with writing a book as niche as this one. The content is niche, with a small audience and few readers. It's not easy to make money, and you don't make much. But it might as well be a good book. I would like to make some suggestions here, just suggestions. «If the author doesn't want to read the above paragraph, just explain my problem. First, how do you want to write about male-to-female change? Second, do you want to finish it halfway or just unfinish it or finish it? Okay, here are my questions. It would be better if you answered. » I hope the author can take some time to answer my questions. Thanks

Memories of the Lord of Chaos The nameless faded person with kingly status is only one step away from meeting the great Elden Ring, but for some reason he instead accepts the blessing of the Three Fingers of Mad Fire - all things return to chaos. It is said that the king wanted to save, but why did he choose to destroy? Bloody dagger The short sword once held by the fire girl was stained with the blood of the King of Chaos. Unexpectedly, it did not have strong power. The epileptic fire was able to burn even the golden tree, but did not cause damage to it - there was something the king could not achieve.

It's pretty good, I feel like I'm involved. Most soul fans have a poor sense of immersion. Come on! ! You are the best

Brother, I beg you, don't want eunuchs, okay? I'm really scared of eunuchs, I beg you [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Very good. The low score may be because there are more people who have never played the Ring of Magic and can't understand [face covering]

How long will it take for the author Vivian to be resurrected [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is really good, not to mention that there are so few soul novels now. It's amazing to dare to keep writing. Will the new DLC be included when it comes out? This is what I am looking forward to [laughs]

Is the heroine a little piece of wood?[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing is okay, but the Elden series is rarely read by many people on Tomato. I'm worried about whether the author can stick to it.

I hope it can be finished normally, without eunuchs. I have seen the most high-level Laotouhuan works on Tomato [OK] Not brainless [laughing] I like wood very much, but I also like Lani. Damn it.

By the way, can you directly bring out the first fire? At least the first fire feels better than the law of the ring of law.

The writing is quite good, and it is one of the few good books in Dharma Ring.

Teacher Se Lian can't just flirt but not accept it, right?

But I think it is the most beautiful book I have ever read. It successfully combines the system and it will not make people feel boring. The protagonist in the author's works is a living character, so please give it a try! ! !

It's pretty good. The characters' emotions are also delicately portrayed. In addition, many books mention the witches at the beginning. Vivian's writing is really good. By the way, when will she be alive [facepalm]

This is one of the better fanfics in the Ring of Magic series. Good luck to the author. ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

Don't stop, I'm going to play liver games just to understand this book.

I plan to burn Melina first and then go to the epilepsy [laughter] Both endings are directly profitable

It's really good. There's nothing toxic about it. It's very interesting.

What should newbies pay attention to when playing the ring? [Shy]