Elden Ring: I Conquered the World

The score is a bit low, maybe because the score is a little low. It can be seen that the author has a good understanding of the underlying logic of the Ring of Magic world and the historical understanding from beginning to end. It is not easy to explain the twists and turns between the factions in the chapter of the Magic School. Although it is a second-generation novel, the author's writing style is quite good, of high quality, and the characters are well-drawn. It is truly a masterpiece. I've read some other articles. At the same time, what is rare is that there are no poisonous points and character collapse. 9.0 Or above is absolutely fine. Thanks to the author for his creation, it is indeed a good job. The following evaluation is purely personal (actually I wanted to say this a long time ago): To add my own thoughts, I feel that the character of Melina is too girly and lively. Meimei in the original work is a very complex and contradictory person. Second Creation wanted to express that Meimei in the original work really tested the author's skill and character creation ability. In the original work, Meimei has a strong sense of loneliness and mission, and is taciturn. Reason and divinity occupy a very large part of her. Only by carefully observing some of her small movements and dialogues can we slowly discover the cuteness and interest of her "human" side. The performance of burning trees on the top of a giant mountain. The CG shows her innermost emotions very well, and she was relatively restrained before she died (personally, she wanted to touch the faded person to say goodbye). Therefore, it is very difficult and almost unsolvable to conquer the character of Melina, which is no less difficult than EVA to conquer Rei Ayanami. From a player's perspective, what I hope to see more in the second creation is that the faded person improves her strength through hard work, and gets to know her a little bit. On the one hand, it removes the burden from Melina and liberates her from the mission she carries, thereby reducing her "divinity"; on the other hand, in the long process of traveling around the junction, it explores her "humanity", making her more vivid and colorful (in this way, Melina is more like It is a "fading person" in terms of personality and emotion, and a fading person is a fading person who has lost strength and blessings [face covering]) Of course, writing in this way requires the author to have a deep understanding of the game and an extremely sophisticated idea to write a method that is consistent with the world view and "the method of achieving both peace and security in the world". Ps: Support the author [Sending Hearts] The plot of the witch is really well written so far. Although some shadows of Shuangwen can be seen, the teacher has really done a good job in shaping it. Ps: Roderica is very realistic, and Little Red Riding Hood is very cute.

Well, how should I put it, I feel that the author has not played the Dharma Circle branch thoroughly enough, and some plots are not fully understood. For example, Melina's identity before her death, according to the clues in the game, is most likely Queen of Night (the daughter of God). As a controller of the black flame (destined death) who judges all living beings, she can basically be said to be an emotionless machine before her death, that is, the colorless man gave her a little warmth, so her emotions should be more dull (she even took the initiative without resistance) Accepted death, because death is meaningless under the Golden Law, and she has therefore lost the mission of her existence). As for whether she will forgive the pervert and become the King of Mad Fire, I think there is a high probability that she will not (after all, her mission later changed Successfully stopped the epileptic fire and burned the tree) So Lapus's force field can play a big role at this time, directly depriving her of her destined death, forcibly tying her up, and then violently super [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Here is a unified reply to readers' questions about the identity of the protagonist. I will write a few extra chapters to explain clearly at the end of the book, including the protagonist's previous life, Marika, Millicent, Vivian, etc. Also, there are readers in the book circle who have chosen the protagonist of the novel, as well as the author's imaginary singing voice of Vivian found online. Thanks to A Fei for providing the facial expression, it is so beautiful. I didn't even imagine it to be so beautiful. In addition, click on the author's avatar to see Vivian's singing voice. If you like it, you can listen to it.

All I can say is that as someone who deeply loves the background story of Fragmented Magic Circle, this plot is so enjoyable to watch. Also, after becoming platinum in the Ring of Magic, I have left too many regrets. Melina, Irena, Roderika, Millicent, Raya, Se Lian, Brother Hu, Tops, the soul jellyfish sisters Kurala and Kuralis, the platinum son Letina, even Brother Wolf, and my witch at the beginning, there are too many, every time I remember them all vividly. When I read this book now, I always miss the plot of the Ring. I am not afraid of jokes, and I really shed tears unconsciously. Maybe it is because my empathy is too strong, but really, I feel that every character has flesh and blood, such as the feelings and deeds of the quasi-Wang Vic and his witches. How can I not be touched by it?

Have the qualifications to become a doge (doge)

Come on, save Irena, Latarn, Malika, Black Sword, Blaze, Iggy, Loretta, Yula, Ethionora, Alexander, Yuno, etc.

Can the author tell me when Vivian can be rescued?

It must be five stars, it looks good, come on, the author, please don't stop updating. [Smile] Lani is the princess of Kallia. Even if she encounters many changes, she still has her parents, brothers and loyal subordinates. Where's Melina? She has no parents or brothers, no friends or subordinates, she has even lost her past, and her future is already doomed to tragedy. But she still loves the borderland, loves this land more than any demigod, and is willing to sacrifice everything for it. She has never experienced love, but she has to give up the right to love and be loved, and keep distance from the only faded person who can speak. Melina had very few things, but she gave everything to the Faded: the spirit horse Toret, the Holy Grail bottle, and upgraded abilities, leaving only the simple clothes to cover her body and the mission dagger. Trust without reservation, give without reservation. When the Faded One proposed to Lani, she was silently counting her remaining days. Melina left without saying goodbye, quietly throwing herself into the fire and burning into ashes that drifted away in the wind. No one knows her sacrifice. For the faded person, Melina's sudden disappearance and her silent companionship along the way seem to be just their own illusions. How should you choose? You have gone through so much trouble to receive the epileptic fire, only to destroy everything you love. No matter what, I will lose you. It's me who's heartbroken, Melina.

I have a problem. Can the president help me? (It's really tragic. The guardian of the royal city ended up being charmed by Michaela. I'm sorry, I misunderstood you!)

I read that some book friends said to just finish it. Direct appendix? It ends directly, so easy. What do other book lovers think? Indeed, if you're not in a state of mind, you don't have to think about it. Some book lovers will not be able to stand it. The recent chapters have also written all sorts of things, especially the male-to-female transformation. This is a minefield that many authors dare not cross, but just end it directly? Even if it is finished, the author will write other books in the future. This is also a big flaw. Looking at it from the beginning, it cannot be said that the writing is getting worse, but it is not as good as before. Speaking of surprises, there were some before, but they were all minor surprises. When it comes to male-to-female transformation, it is considered a big surprise in the male channel. I am not bluffing. The author is great. Can you check which book on the male channel has this content? That is to say, the author's writing is better, and my poison resistance is stronger, otherwise I would have slipped away. The audience of this book is indeed small, and the author must have the idea of ​​discontinuing it, but if it is discontinued, how will the book be read? If I write a second book in the future, some book lovers may not read it again. I have read so many books. I know there are difficulties with writing a book as niche as this one. The content is niche, with a small audience and few readers. It's not easy to make money, and you don't make much. But it might as well be a good book. I would like to make some suggestions here, just suggestions. «If the author doesn't want to read the above paragraph, just explain my problem. First, how do you want to write about male-to-female change? Second, do you want to finish it halfway or just unfinish it or finish it? Okay, here are my questions. It would be better if you answered. » I hope the author can take some time to answer my questions. Thanks