I Wrote*************

Written at the front: The author is also a newbie, and he is still writing everything gropingly. If there is any content that makes you feel uncomfortable, maybe you can read it later, and you will learn from the experience later, and you are really making progress! In addition, I will read all your comments, and you are welcome to catch any typos!

It's so good to watch [Admiration] I stayed up late to finish reading it, the author cheers for more [Sending my heart] I'm so excited now that I can't sleep [awkward laugh]

It is recommended that the author write more poetry appreciation instead of focusing on the intrigue plot. It can be seen that the author is not good at describing this kind of plot. Some forced explanations of déjà vu destroy the theme and story content of the novel. Based on my personal feeling, this book is mainly related to relaxed daily life and the promotion of poetry culture. The theme style should be relaxed, humorous and slightly shocking to the soul. I hope the suggestions below can be helpful to the author, don't read them if you don't like them.

You can give chase, but as long as you don't get pulled down later, stick to it.

I have a feeling it will be a hit, and I'm really looking forward to this book! I hope that more poets can express their feelings under certain circumstances, such as when they are depressed and unable to succeed in their careers. Don't write it down like a running account. Finally, I hope this book becomes a hit! Less slap-in-the-face and forcibly subdued plots, which are very cliche and most readers don't like to watch this kind of plot.

Except that the kneeling at the beginning is a little bit toxic, you can accept it later. Don't be discouraged, take your time, and continue to update. It's already good for a newcomer to write like this. There are many with 4.5.6 Ratings. You are considered to be the best, come on!

[Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]I'm going to see it. It's wonderful. Is it gone? ? ? ? ?

I had already clicked out, but suddenly I saw it and came back to give a rating [Adoration] The writing is really good, and the text is really stuck [almost crying]

What can I say about this book? There may be too many comments and embellishments. Too many comments on a poem may make people feel bored, but it also promotes traditional Chinese culture. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Top post][Top post][Top post]

This novel is very interesting, but it disappeared after reading it. Can you please update it as soon as possible?

I feel like it's well written. Come on, don't be affected by bad reviews.

No more ah ah ah ah

Good guy, author, you are playing with fire. You used the title of a poem as the last sentence. Do you want to stifle us to death? You'll be given half an hour to update me with a new chapter! [Anger]

Please, don't stop! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting, but please keep updating. I hope I'll come back next time. In three weeks, I'll see that you've updated dozens of chapters.

Not bad, I haven't seen this kind of thing for a long time. Why doesn't anyone write about it?

There are a lot of poison spots in front of you, but you can get through them and it's fine. Come on, author You don't have to be too deliberate when writing poetry. . It doesn't look natural to shoot first and then draw the target.

As long as it feels comfortable to watch

Beautiful, so beautiful

The author of constipation recommends using some Kailu

Approved by a five-year bookworm! Come on

Don't worry, give me the fire! ! ! ! ! [Cool]

Come on, it's very well written.

Have you finished watching The Eunuch in two hours?

Although the front is a bit poisonous But the plot behind it feels okay. I really like this type of article. The author has stopped updating for a month.

Nothing else, I just want to improve my rating a little bit

I really shouldn't get such a low score. This book is quite good.

Who should I show this to? Give me 100 palms a day [punch hard] [punch hard]

I opened the book, and there were only two words written densely: Update soon.

Are there any similar books? Can you recommend them?